short os KR : rey gets to know the truth.

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Posted: 12 years ago
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well guys m tanya... i CANT wait any further to see kriyansh onscreen
so writing a short os..
p.s writin sumthin for the first time all comments n critisms are welcome😊


it was taani's engagement ceremony and.. all were enjoying dancing and singing..
rey was standing in a corner
he saw shivim coming through the entrance...swayam greeted shivim n gang and went inside near to rey
shivam was upset seein rey so to cheer his mood he went der
shivam ; tu tikh hai ?
rey : ..jis insaan ke life mein pyaar hi nahi likha ho toh woh kyaise tikh reh sakhta hai..
hearing this shivam rememberd kriya and rey and how once rey was madly in love wid kriya but was heartbroken as she left him.. shivam rememberd wat he had done wid kriya n was now guilty but decided to cheer him up.. ( unware that rey was talking abt tani)
shivam;; umm rey..aisa nahi hai...har insaan keliye koi na koi ladki hoti hai jo usee complete karti hai. dont worry tumhare liye bhi hogu.
tumhareliye koi na koi toh bana hi hoga..mei wajah see tumhare pyaar tumsee durr hoga.. m really sorry rey uss time mein bahut selfish tha.. meine jo tumhare saath kiya isilye mein apne aap ko koi maaf nahi kar sakhta
rey : shivam tu yeh kya keh raha hai... taani ki engagemnet aur tumhare kya connection hai ?
shivam : taani :O mein soch raha tha..tum kr..ya ( he cudnt complete the word and excused himself..
rey : this time was completely comfused n the very next moment he was in tears and closed his eyes n saw KRIYA !!!
the flashbacks of there first meet till the time kriya left him
he was just heartborken once again
suddenly he cudnt see anything and he fainted right there
swayam noticed him from a distant and rushed him to a door..
he tried wakin up rey but was not successful
suddnely he heard rey loudly asking for K-R-I-YA
tumnee aisaa kyun kiyaa baadcutter why did u leave me?
why did u betray me ?
why...
swayam was shocked hearing kriya's name from rey's mouth.
and immeditaly rushed outside tryin to find some help.
he saw shivam and confronted him n asked him the reason for rey's sudden reaction.
shivam dint know whatt to say and left from there ...leaving swayam standing all confused...
swayam thought there is defintely something wrong and decided to investigate further..
later rey gained consciousness..
rey came back to his senses and remembed shivam's words
n he rushed to meet shivam
shivam was all guilty and seeing he just broke down in tears and was abt to leave
but rey holded back his left shoulder in a tight grip hurting shivam and asked shivam if he had anything to do with kriya''s sudden exit..
shivam unable to bear any more burden blurted out the truth
haaan MERI WAJAHSEE KRIYAA TUJHEE CHOD KAR CHALI GAYEE
MEINE USKEE MOM KO TUMHARE AUR USKE BAARE MEIN BATAYAA
USKE MOM KO MERI WAJASE PATA CHALA.KI WOH STLOUIS MEIN DANCE TEAM KA HISSA HAI
Uss din footloose competition ke time kriya pe kriya ne apne friends ko chunashe cudnt let down her friends so uske mom see skhir chance manga..n to save ..your friends dignity she danced for one last time.. aur uss din use ne apna last DANCE KIYA.. and then She left..
she left you because she lovd you the most... woh tumhe.pure zindagi bhar uske pyaar mein tadapta nahi dekhna chahithi thi isilye usne tumse breakup kiya..
kriya ne usee din apne dono pyaar ko khoo diya
pehele tum
aur fir DANCE!
haan re..mera hi yeh sab plan tha meine hi kriya aur teri life barbaad kii...
but trust me meine..bahoot koshish ki..kriya ko dhundne ki mujhee koi clue nahi milaa..
i tried mein deharadoon bhi gaya tha ..lekin waha meine dekha ki kriya ka ghar lockd hai and koi nahi janta ki woh kaha hai...

hearing all this rey was brokedown he was on knees crying hard...
shotung kriya's name
mujhee itni badi galti kyaise hogayee mein kyu nahi samajh paya tumhee
i STILL LOVE U AND ONLY U KRIYAA PLEASE COME BACK

P.s m from rajasthan my english is not good still learning..
ignore my grammar mistakes 😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
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waise nowadays im not seeing d3 so pta nhi kya storyline hai...😕
but reali lykd d way u explained...
it was awesome sweetie...loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dilkriyarey

waise nowadays im not seeing d3 so pta nhi kya storyline hai...😕

but reali lykd d way u explained...
it was awesome sweetie...loved it

aww thankss so much
btw even m not watchin d3..actually since kriya's exit havent watched a single epi
just read the spoilers😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesum OS...
Good to see d good wala
Changed guilty Shivam...

Hope sumthng like dis happens..
N
Aftr dat Kriya enters...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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first try it was not at all bad but superb... liked it...
finally that person himself revealed the truth to rey that because of
his one mistaken have taken their friends away and once lost it
because he did not understand behind her doing this to him that is love

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Posted: 12 years ago
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a really nice OS
please do continue it
i would really love o see the further story..

and involving shivam was a nice idea
in fact shivam is the only person who is responsible..
nice one
good 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thankss dear😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesome OS
plz continue this..
n plz pm me

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