THREAD III-ASYA DADDY PRINCESS last part @83-5/4/14 - Page 10

hai guys, ''i know i am pretty late...so sorry...

but the comic part is... i spent the last few days on a presentation i did, so i postponed my FF... only to know the presentation was rejected just like that...hmmm... what can one do... rejection is part of research... hope i havent taken out my rejection in the update.. let see

This part is dedicated two persons..one whom i came to know very close.. the other whom i still admire for her writing..

Navitha(Navi55).. i have always look forward to read ur comment on my update bcoz she were so generous in ur comment and praise... and i am so happy that u commented bali honeymoon for asya.. and i scrapped u to write it...in the process i end up finding a friend in u..JUST LIKE THAT. so this go to u... u r still a part of this FF... hope u enjoy it...

Awriter at heart-raz... her FF desire so strange is something i enjoyed reading when i was silent reader inthis forum, and when she made her writing as IF Member only post..i ended upusing the ID... the best part is she followed my story in the beginning and gave some really wonderful comments.. about my writing and my style of writing.. Though she is disappeared in between from IF..not following my story.. anymore..still this is for her..too

oops.. long dedication.. wish i know how to write short..

Part 47:

kodai

As morning dawned, asad was the one to open his eyes..first. And looked at zoya..sleeping hugging him.. he slowly released herself from her hold, and got up.. as soon as he got up.. zoya hands were searching for him in the sleep, and asad handed her the pillow, and she hugged the pillow and went back to her world... after getting ready, asad opened their suitcase.. and neatly kept their things in the cupboard... and slightly opened the window.. to have a look.. at the mother nature smiling at him.. the sun is still no a no show... and the mist has covered the place...

He came out of the room, took his coffee from CT.. and took his phone and made few phone calls, and then left a message to zoya phone to say.. he is gone out and will be back.. soon... zoya got up around 9 am to see her bed empty, and looked at her mobile to see his message. Then she called up her home in Bhopal..to her surprise no one picked up her call.. then he dilshad, zeenatanwar and navi... it was no show.. from all... She kept trying all the numbers..few times.. only for panic to set in on her.. she called asad.. only to get a message saying he will be in 10 minutes.. she tried one more round of phone call.. she was getting nerves.. and restless...

They were always in touch with their family, from the moment they left for bali..they used to have phone chats.. skpe chat.. withasya all along... Zoya was missing her ..but asya was smiling always and was happy.. and with zeenat being there... along with navi and dilshad.. zoya was ok.. but this was the first time she was away from asya for this along.. In NY. She has gone..but only for few days.. but not for weeks... they have spent 2 blissful week in bali, and asad surprised her by bringing her to kodai.as time moved, her restlessness increased,..she couldn't take in any longer.. she got up and lightly freshed her up, nd wore her jeans and tops.. and she looked at the cupboard, and took their traveling bag, and unceremoniously dumped all their things and packed them. In her style.😡😡

Then she came into the living room, and though the place was cozy and home like..her mind and heart were not here anymore.. all she wanted was to hold her asya in her arms..she was pacing around, and turned to see asad entering the room, in her favorite whitet- shirt and blue jeans and a beautiful bouquet of fresh red roses... he came close to her and pecked her lips, and gave her the bouquet.. and wished in his husky voice

A: good morning MRs.khan..😳😳

Z: good morning Mr.Khan..and smiled.. and some how the smile didn't reach...

{A very good but a very naughty friend of mine whom I met in the forum, said. When you could see and sense the other person is upset, without any communication.. then that is love...(guruji lines).}

Asad could see something was bothering zoya, but he couldn't find any reason... so he pulled zoya closer, lifted her chin with his finger to have a face to face with her..

A: zoya what is wrong..

Z: w oh..actually..

A: zoya..

Z: I want to go back home to Bhopal..

A:.???why.. we just came here.. in a week we will be back..

Z: I want to.. I am trying phone to home and also to rest of them..but no one is picking it.. so..

A: may be they are busy something.. I am sure everything is fine there.. I just spoke with ammi sometime back...

Z: ok. But I still want to.. she said.

Zoya was having a battle within herself, after knowing from asad everything is fine back home..she was torn between being the mom and wife.. being with asad and the time they spent together in their honeymoon is a dream come true for her.. she enjoyed every single moment... and cherished the memory.. now back in india... the mom in her is longing to hold her kid close to her heart, at the same time she want to spend time with asad too. she knows asad missed asya as much as she did, yet he planned to come to kodai.. to spend some more time with her..she wanted to voice herself without making look asad bad...she was thinking of how to say it..

asad pulled her close and she buried her face in his chest..as some idea struck her..😛😛 she smiled..

Z: asad..

A: hmm..

Z: you know navi came all the way from S.Africa, for us..Asad it is not that often she will come to india, u know..may be we should play wonderful host to her and show her india.. we can ask our whole family to come here.. and look around the beautifull place.. I am sure they all will enjoy too..what do u say..😉😉

Asad could see zoya through and through..and her thoughts.. thought he will pull her leg some more..😆😆😆

A: zoya.. I am sure ammi showed navi the whole of Bhopal and the state of MP...too..

Z: but it will be nice for her to see south india too..and taste the south food too.. u know..

A: zoya but what will they do in our honeymoon... U want others to be a part of our honeymoon..more people is a disturbance🤢🤢 for romance...isnt..

Z: asad...

A: kyazoya..r u already bored of ur husband.... And don't want to spend some more time with me..is it so...? He asked. With a straight voice...

Zoya thought..there u go...

Z: asad how can u say that... I will never be bored of u..even at 80.. how can u say that..

A: then what it is..bothering u..

Z: I miss asya.. I want to hold her asad..it is since 2 weeks since I hugged my princess.. not anymore.. I need her.. .. so please can we go back..

A: zoya are u saying I am not missing my princess... and I don't love her like u do.. r u meaning to imply that..😲😲

Z: I never said like that...asad... I know u love her more than me... you know what..just forget we had this conversation... I am not going to argue with you here...let it 😕be...

And she tried to move away..and only to pulled back into his arms.. and arrested by his hands...🤗

A: mrs khan... I was expecting ur comment on my dress... but..u didn't say anything😉..

Zoya looked up to see the smirk in asad face... something is up... only she didn't know... and now that is killing her inside... 🥱

Z: I will tell u ..when u tell me the reason behind ur smirk...

As she finished the sentence, she saw the front door wide open..and her princess came running towards her parents..

As: ammi... Abbu... hum aagaye...

Zoya and asad happiness was unbounded on see her princess, and zoya scooped her arms and kissed her forehead.. andasad hugged his family... and within seconds asya jumped from her ammi to be abbu.. andsticked herself to him.. and seeing that zoya pouted her .. andasad gave her a knowing smile... and she just smiled back...😊😊

The rest of the family followed inside... and happy to see the happy family infront..and the greetings and hugs were exchanged.. zeenat and navi were standing next to each other.. and get along very well.. with each other..

Ze: asadmiyyaa... I am so sorry.. I didn't want to be kabab me haddi in ur honeymoon..but u inisisted that we all tag along... so enjoy what is going.To .come...😉😉

A: ok appi... with a slight smile..

Ze: kya development...hai..two week honeymoon in bali... The whole shy and embarrassed is gone by the window... we have a whole new Mr.Khan..here... so the whole credit goes to navi... dear... mr khan.. did leave his tehzeeb and tameez (sammy comments)behind I think👏👏👏

As-Ya: navi ..thank u for the wonderful trip to bali.. we both enjoyed it... we even bought things for all of u guys.. u guys settle down..

A: I will bring them..

The whole family sat in the living room.. fully dressed in jerkins.. and shawls... due to the chill weather... sipping the hot coffee..

From As-Ya room..

A: zoyaa..

Z: oops.. I will just come..

As she entered the room she saw asadstandinginfront of the traveling bag with frustration written all over his face..

Z: what..

A: what...? What have u done here... I spent nearly half hour in arranging the things... now look at this... u made it look like dumpster...😡

Z: asad..i was bit hurried for ur information...😡

A: even though... do u think u should dump like this... how to keep untidy... u should take course on it... bcoz u know all the ways... and have mastered the art...of how to make a place dirty

Z: asad...and she stormed out..

Living room:

Asya and aadil were watching Tv..and suddenly the song dinka chika.. was playing.. in the tatadocomo add.. and seeing the kids.. dance...asya and aadil were imitating the steps.. while the elders admired them..

Ze: navi is nt the same song on which u wrote something on the request of akh20..

Na: appi aap bhinaa..

Di: what is the matter with u both..do share what u r speaking..

Ze: who Dilshad bi...

Na: appi please..pretty please..

Ze: so will u update soon...

Na: yeah soon...

Ze: oh nothing..was looking at how cute the kids are dancing for this.. song..

Zoya stormed into the living room...

Z: ammi ur son is so bad...

Di: now what did he do..let him come..

Asad followed her..

A: ammi I will tell..she just made a mess our things there.. I cant find any thing..in the bag..she messed it.. when I asked her.. she shouted at me..

Di: zoya..u know asad.. how he like his things... he cant stand disorder.. u know that right..

Ze: I am telling u since childhood... to keep ur things neat..but now atleast learn from ur hubby.. about this...

An: zeenat is right..zoya... it is time u adapt ... to ur love..(guruji's lines)

Asya jumped on her abbu..and said..

As: my abbu is always right..😆😆

Zoya looked around..and saw navi standing there.. navi just showed a neutral.. sign.. don't pull me in...

Z: vaishu..it is all bcoz of u.. now look no one is in my side.. I didn't do that on purpose...ok.. I was worried..ok..

Asad could sense her ...

A: u didn't ask me.. I am always ur side sweety... u know the best part... u r the messy queen..and I am mrocd... u can make all the mess... I will clean in a minute..as it is my second nature... so we are the perfect fit.. dear..❤️

Z:no need for ur support mr.khan.. zoyaasadahmed khan can do anything on her own... and pulled a frown on her face..only to smell the aroma of vennpongal.. made with pure ghee and mixed with cashew... and her stomach grumbled..

Z: breakfast... and moved towards the dinning table..and the family followed... they were served pongal with vada and sweet was ashokahalwa... and the family enjoyed the heavy breakfast...

Note:

Zoya is still katti with asad...

Oops..the teaser is not here... so sorry.. will be in the next..

Would love to know how many of u remember the occasion when asad wore the white shirt and blue jeans...

Regarding the pm note. Was only for the 20 odd people whose response I dont know...

once again ur comments are loved.. and ur likes are liked...

Plot for the new story:

I am sharing the idea I have about the next story... which I may write:

This is for shreya and aksasya...who asked me to write new one..so many times...

It is based on quboolhia..again.. I so love this story.. I don't want to take asad and zoya and place them somewhere else...so everything is the same...no change character as such...

It is after the gudiya factory raaz opens... rashid is released from jail. As-ya..are same.. asad knows what he feels for zoya but still in denial.. zoya.. doent think about that much.. about the current between.. theydo share their pains.. asad still thinks Rashid is a murderer... zoya doesn't... zoya becomes miss bond again.. and tries to figure out on her own.. to prove Rashid innocence.. only to come to know the skeleton is her mom.. and how she couldn't even mourn out loud for her mom in front of asad.Shesill believe Rashid is innocent and if the truth come out asad will hate him more. And how asad discovers the truth.. and stand be her.. when she needs him...

Tanveer is not of much use to me... so I think I will throw her out..

Razia is there... u maybe find this odd.. i really feel bad for razia too... It is the situation, she was forced to commit a crime..hers is a crime of passion.. and I somehow believe it was done by her in the spur of moment out of fear to lose her husband.. to his love... and what followed was her way to protect herself...

It will be a emotional drama..before becoming romance.. just like this...

I so love BONES and CASTLE... .so miss bond will be inspired by both the leading ladies

Let me know..what u think...