Arshi OS#20: Jab Samne Tum Aa Jatay Ho (Completed)

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ameena671

@ameena671

Sparkler

Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Amazing os loved it thank you for pm.

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Jahnvi Mehra

@jahnvi.luvs.ASR

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#12

I so impatiently wait for next story of your OS...they are so awesome...love stories that take my heart away...n I can't help but think abt them...the innocense in every story...its the beautiful thing that I love most...u r amazing writer...I love your each n every single arshii OS...

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 11 years ago

#13

what an ending i must say
now that was perfect for sure
so it was all some misunderstanding
good she got hold of his diary
and she came to know of his love for her
sure helped them come closer
as did their baby girl she is cute
love that song too
perfect for this situation between them
cheers for pm

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Anjani Patel

@Titaliya_AP

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#14

You've written this story wonderfully! :)

Edited by Titaliya_AP - 11 years ago

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avika_ShArMa

@avika_ShArMa

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#15

such a lovely os!!😃

i was initially sad yet confused that arnav was married with a baby but have always loved khushi. it was kind of a mystery till the end. :P

but the ending was too awesome. :)