JAJ SS Dil Kya karein *part 11,Pg-34* updated!! *new part up* - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
#81
hi Priyam 🤗
its fun to visit here you don't need to thank. 😃
ty 4 explaining. yes i know its helpful to watch but i hv nt.
The story is going well and if I'm confused ill ask you. :)
hehe your mom's v sweet she read the update.
well ya i like colours so i guess it always attract me when update is colourful.
The glitter banner by your frd is v cool.
see ya soon. ❤️

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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: AASUS

hi Priyam 🤗

its fun to visit here you don't need to thank. 😃
ty 4 explaining. yes i know its helpful to watch but i hv nt.
The story is going well and if I'm confused ill ask you. :)
hehe your mom's v sweet she read the update.
well ya i like colours so i guess it always attract me when update is colourful.
The glitter banner by your frd is v cool.
see ya soon. ❤️



ohh that's so sweet of u.😃 I'm glad you are having fun here.😊 Yeah me n mom we watch the show together. She usually doesnt like me wasting my time wriiting fabfics but she can't help I can't help. Its fun writing. So I take out some time to write fics while studying on the other side.😳 Also the show has become a bit boring. Its lacking adventure there so I brought it up in my FF.😆 Keep smiling dear. 😃Tv. See ya nxt time❤️🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
@ Athi- n yeah I knw. I loved the banner too :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84
waiting eagerly for ur update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
hey sumi.. Will try to update soon :D if possible today :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey sumi..🤗 howdy? wat abt ur update huh??😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Priya🤗 m well n u? N I will update too asap 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: .nightqueen

Priya🤗 m well n u? N I will update too asap 😊



I'm good too.. :)

Will mostly update by evening. N oohhh will be waiting for ur update😃.. weekend is so boring with out JAJ. 🥱
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part Seven:

Jhonny, Priya are in her cabin. She's laughing as usual at something he said. Vicky's smile turns into a frown as he eyes the pair.

"Baby!!" he calls out.

"Ohh Vicky! Tum kab aaye? Dekho na.. humare naye project designs. I'm sure yeh sab ko pasand aajayenge!" Priya rushes to him to give him a hug.

"That's great baby. And thank you huh. Tum duniya ki sweetest baby ho. Thanks for this message. But ek baat hai baby. Jo bohot der se main kehna chahta hu.."😊

"Haa kaho.."

"Baby... idher aao..." (takes her away from Jhonny)

"Kya hai Vicky?"

"Baby yeh jhonny. Issey tum door hi raho. Pichli baar iss ne kya kiya yaad hai na? Baby yeh tumhe fasaana chahta hai aur tum ho ki"

"Vicky!! Jhonny mera dost hai- aur woh sudhar chukka hai"

"Baby tum bholi ho"😛

"Tum tho kuch bolo hi mat! Waise tumhe pata hona chahiye ki Jhonny k suggestion pe hi maine tumhe maaf kia. Aur woh message bhi usee k kehne pe bheja tha maine! Tho aaj k baad, tum mere dost k bare mein kuch nai kahoge. Kuch bhi nahi. Got it?"

"Par baby.."

"tum tho kuch bolo hi mat.."😆

And she walks out with a file in her hand to meet her dad. Jhonny smirks.

"Dekha .. Pandey Ji! Kyu stress lete hai.. Suman ji yaani aap k Priya ji ko hum se koi door nahi kar sakta. Kyu ki humare saamne aap tik nahi paaoge.."😎

Jhonny too walks out after giving a playful smile to Vicky.

~ Few hours later~

Shizo, Jeannie, Boss, Jhonny, Vicky everyone are in Boss's cabin.

"Humare designs accept hogaye! Ab bas implementation hi baaki hai.." 😃Shizo announces.

"Yeh tho badi khushi ki baat hai. Congratulations to you all! Well done!" 👏Boss smiles.

"AI and PA ke combined domestic jets bohot jald take off karenge! Yay!!" Jhonny cooed.

"It's a pleasure to work with AI. Congrats everyone..." 🥳

"Dad! Isee baat pe kyu na aaj sham ko party hojaye!!?"😉 Priya asks with a smile.

Everyone agree.

"Tho this is it! Aaj sham ko party mei milte hai. Is sab mei tumhara bohot bada contribution hai Jhonny tho tumhe time pe aana hoga ok?"😛

"Sure sure Suman Ji..." Jhonny smiles at her.😃

"Aur Shizo Jeannie Vicky Jia tum sab ko bhi.. don't be late!"😊

Everyone smile and gear up for the party.

7PM:

PA office conference room is buzzing with people. The hall is now beautifully decorated to pep up the party atmosphere.

Jeannie corners Vicky who's having a drink.

"Juju.."😊

"hmph.."🥱

"Aye mere juju.. upset ho kya? Lagta hai aap ne mujhe bohot miss kia? Nahin?"😉

Vicky looks at her as she flashes a sweet smile. He wanted to tell her to bugger off but he couldn't she was his best buddy. N hell yes, he missed her!

"Nahi miss kia?" Jeannie pouts, "lekin maine kia... bohot kia."😊

He smiles. His Jeannie is back. Obviously she will be back to her Juju in the end. But he had to go screw up things while constantly thinking about her and Shizo!

"Maine bhi kia mitram.. aisa kabhi ho sakta hai kya ki Juju apni Jeannie ko miss na karein?"😛

"Aww juju.."😳

She pulls him into a hug. He takes her hand and gently kisses the top of it.

"Chaahe kuch bhi ho tumhe pata hai na ki Juju humesha tumhareliye care karta hai?"😊

"I know Juju. Isliye aap duniya k best Juju hai.."😳

They smile at each other as music begins. Their moment is broken by a voice.

"Ehem.. May I have this dance please?"😉

"Shizo.." 😲Jeannie is unsure while Vicky fumes.

"Dance Jeannu? Come on!!" 😛

He pulls her along. A song plays in the back ground. Main agar kahoon.. tum sa hasee...(om shanti om). They dance together *Ballroom style*

"Bhool gayi Jeannie? Tere juju ko aur jalaana hai hume. Tabhi tho jaake maanega that he loves you.."😆

Shizo smiles as Jeannie blushes.

~

There Priya is sitting on a chair at the far end watching the waltz.

"Sweetiepie aaya bhi ya nahi.."

"Hello Suman Ji.."😉

"Jhonny!"😊

"Suman ji, jisne yeh party arrange kia. Woh yaha khamosh baithe, achhi baat nahi hai."😛

"You like the arrangements."😳

"Oh I love them! Come on lets dance.. "😉

"uh.."🤔

"Aap k Vicky ji tho drinks section mei busy hai aur humari humesha se khwahish hai ki aap k saat ek waltz karein.."😉

"par Jhonny mere pair mei moch aagayi aur.."😔

"Its ball room dance! Jo koi bhi kisi k saat kar sakta hai. Ek brother apni sister k saat, ek father ek beti k saat. It's a respectful dance. So Easy now come on... Shall we dance? Like friends?"😳

She is flattered. Jhonny is such a gentleman. He smiles as she flashes him her biggest smile while nodding.😃

And so they begin the waltz. He holds her hand so carefully as if it might break. His feather touch, his smile, his dance moves which mimicked hers, she is enjoying all of them. He treats her like a princess, something she was expecting from Vicky. May be all this time, she was expecting from the wrong person.

Vicky whose eyes have already reddened with Shizo, Jeannie's dance now started to burn.

Wah Vicky wah Idher Jhonny, udher Shizo.. tera tho khel khatm yara!🥱

~

The song ends everyone clap. She thanks Jhonny.

"thank you Jhonny.. this was such a wonderful dance."☺️

She smiles. He smiles back. He respects her a lot, she noticed that's why he never entered her personal space, even while dancing.

"My pleasure.."😳

~

Somewhere in Jin Land:

"Woh akela nahi hai hokum. Kuch Jin Land k dost hai uss k saat. Lekin main usey khatm kar dungi.."😈

"Ahista Jwala. Waar woh hai jis mei awaaz naa ho. Thoda sabr aur..."😈

Both laugh maniacally.

Back in party:

Vicky doesn't notice all this as his eyes once again find Jeannie & Shizo. Shizo has now brought out a rose from nowhere and is on his knees..

Jeannie grins as Juju comes shouting there. He pulls shizo and takes him to a corner.

"waha woh Jhonny aur tum yaha? Yeh sab kya horaha hai huh? Tum jinland walon ko double game khelne mei mazaa aata hai na? mujhe meri Jeannie se tum door kar rahe ho! Aur waha woh Jhonny Priya ko? Yeh pyaar hai aap logo ki ya mujhe tang karne ka khel? What is this?"😡

"Oh really Vicky? Hum double game khel rahe hai? ya tum? Pehle tum khud chuno na tumhe kisi zyada zarurat hai Jeannie ki, ya Priya ki. Kyu ki zindgi sirf ek insaan k saat jee jaati hai. aur hum koi game nahi khel rahe hai. Jhonny sirf Priya ko khush karne ki koshish kar raha hai. pyar k naam pe khel khelna hum Jinland walon ko aata nahi hai. tum khud Jeannie ko ignore karte ho aur main usey attention de raha hu tho tumhe bardasht nahi hota?"😡

Vicky falls silent.

"tum khud decide karo Vicky tumhe kya chahiye. Aur haan mera dost mehnat kar raha hai. bina jaadu k, saare kaam kar raha hai. aur main bhi.."

Shizo leaves while Vicky slips into thinking.

Shizo begins to move towars the drinks corner when he hears her voice.

"Shizoo.. khatra aas paas hai. meri shaktiyan kum ho rahi hai. Apna dhyaan rakhna. Woh Jin Jaffru ki gulaam tumhe.."😭

And then he didn't hear anything.

"Hey dude! Kya hua?" 😉

"Jhonny woh.. Pari ki awaaz suni. Its coming!"😲

Understanding dawns on him. Quickly they contact Jeannie, Jia and the four vanish from the place.

xxx

Next part-

The gang's planning n some more cute moments...

Friends! Kaisa laga yeh chap.. please do review.😳 As usual my huge thanks to Sumi, Afss, Shama n Athi.. Love u all. 🤗❤️Have a nice Sunday!



Part 8: PAGE14

Edited by -Priyam- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Hayee priya mein toh Mari jawa ❤️ 👏

Such an amazing , awesome, mind blowing, dramebaaz, outstanding, romantic update

Loved Johny-priya dance, shizo-jeannie scene to make juju jealous and everything, I mean it

M Blushing like mad ☺️

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