MG: BEYOND LOVE.../part 1 pg-8/pary2-pg10/2nd February'14

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nimisha khurana

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: jasminerahul

I was waiting 4 d update.Rishab-Geet 4 Gori tere..'s premier.Loved how u made it Maan-Kareena's movie by replacing Imraan.cool idea.She is dying 2 c Maan.what'll b his reaction seeing her?plz update soon.U changed moni.Rt?Debina to Kratika.Is there any reason 4 changing her 2 Krithika?

d reason is my readerz no 1 wntd debina

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Jasmine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

I also prefer Kratika to Debina.But I cant imagine either Debina or Krathika in a -ve role

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Lovely update!

I loved how u brought the existing madhubala seral and
the gori film in the update...

geet ... abh se maan ki deewaani!😆

Eager for the next update...

Continue soon

ps: where r u now a days?? u r not at all seen... hope all is fine... whatz up with cutiepie??

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nimisha khurana

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Tysm
@ lakshmi di
I am gud di just started going office tua itz very hectic & ur cutie is also doing well & all is f9
wbu how u doing?

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nimisha khurana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

PART 2

Geet sits beside rishab for the movie.it was almost 1 an half hour & still the movie star Maan khurana was not at the venue.

Geet get a message from daadi.

"Geet come home fast anjali is home I have informed her that you are out for a movie with riddhima...plz beta come home before she is angry"

Geet seeing this message gets super duper scare & she decides to left the venue in interval.

A man enter the theatre...it was all dark & no one could see his face...

the guy looks around & see a seat empty just below.he goes over there & takes the seat.

while going between the people to take his seat he stamp a leg.

"Ouachhh"

Maan looks at the girl sitting on the seat.her hair were open & on her face he couldn't see her face properly.

"I am sorry"

"It's ohk"

The girl again continue to watch the film.

Geet gets a call from daadi

"Geet beta tu nikali ki bi jaldi aa yaha anjali ne ghar utha rakha hai upar se mohit ko bhi bulaya hai jaldi aaa beta"

"Daadi just 15mins I will be home"

"Ohk beta jaldi aa"

Geet cuts the call & get up.

"Oye were are you going?"

"Rishab I have to go anjali di is home aur wo bhadak jane se pheley I have to reach"

"But geet yu aachanak I mean..."

"I am leaving you enjoy the movie & I was here just for maan khurana & he is not here so I am leaving"

"Ohk chalo even I am coming"

"Oh hello you enjoy I am leaving"

"Haan tua I am also coming so that I can drop you"

"No you stay here I have shoot tomorrow"

"If I am not wrong we have shoot tomorrow so chalo"

Rishab gets up from the seat & leaves.

"But rishab..."

"Chalo geet..."

Both leave the venue.

All this drama was watched by the guy sitting beside geet & the super star of the movie maan khurana.

As geet & rishab leave the venue rajeev comes & sit back on the seat.

"Oye maan tu yaha kya kar raha hai teri seat tua waha hai with yash uncle"

"Ssshhh... dude watch the movie I am good here"

"Yaha par geet & rishab were sitting what about them?"

"They went simple...how I know that now will you watch the movie"

"Hmmmn"

On the other hand rishab drops geet & goesoback home.

Geet enter the house.

Anjali & mohit were standing just very near to the main door waiting for geet.

As geet comes inside she glare at daadi & then mohit.

Mohit node his head & makes a puppy face as he couldn't help her.

"Diii..."

Anjali look at geet & give her a glare & just leave the hall & lock herself inside the room.

geet was very scare now. She goes to daadi & hug her

mohit comes & hug them from back.

"I don't want any rona dhona... all is fine ohk please you both don't cry"

"I am not crying jiju & nor daadi is...koi baat ni I will handle di you go home it's late & you must be having shoot tomorrow"

"Yea I am leaving...but please don't fight & no crying"

"Yaa jiju"

Mohit leave the place .

Geet was in trouble she knew that now only her babaji could save her...

daadi goes to sleep.

Precap: geet in trouble...

Edited by nimi216 - 11 years ago

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

am first... yeh...

i came here to put a waiting post and was surprised to see the update... do u pm about ur updates?? mujhe bhi karo na...

loved the update...especially geet and her dis bond which am sure am going to get more in future...

she went just to see msk and not the movie...😆 i loved it that she was sitting beside him and watching the movie but was unaware of the same...

looking forward for more masti between the sisters and ofcourse our heros official entry ...continue soon

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-lakshmi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#47

howz our cutiepie?? lots of love to him

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nimisha khurana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#48

Ty di actually I m nt doing any pm 4 nw will pm aftr few updatz all 2gether & cutie is all gud enjoying

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Jasmine

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

Oh!Geet missed a chance 2 see Maan properly.Waiting eagerly 4 their proper meeting.loved d sisters.waiting 4 d next part

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simran

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

awesome part
finally maan entry but geet couldnt see maan properly
waiting to see sisters moment and maaneet meeting

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