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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey friends first HI to everyone...this is first time i m writng something on my fav. couple RAHIL
this os is specialy dedicated to my best friend...sree_swaron...i hope u like it


i m really sorry in advance if u find any grammatical mistake ...




ROHIL OS EHSAAS





gauti and nikhil was talking when suddenly both stop and staring someone who is walking and lost in thoughts ...roshani was coming towards them,,,,,...she look at them both boys faces become bright when she smile...when she was few step away from them gauti just run and hug her...



gauti;- hey kaha thi tum pata hai meine tumhe kitna miss kiya


roshani;- lekin gauti hum kal raat hi to mile the...


gauti;- i know lekin kal aur aaj mein ek puri raat beet gayi...aur ab mein ek pal bhi tumhare bina nahi reh sakta...




nikhil just standing there and looking at them ...after hearing whatever gauti said to roshani become so so angry on her...from last one moth roshani just only with gauri and gang or gauti...she dont have a single min for him and this make him more angry


he just turn to leave from that place as soon as possible but gauti stopped him



gauti;- are nikhil kaha ja rahe ho...

nikhil;- nahi bas aise hi...

gauti;- accha suno aaj raat ki party mein aa rahe ho na...today is very special day for me...

nikhi;- i m sorry gauti lekin mein nahi aa paunga...

roshani;- par kun

gauti;- ya i got it,,,,,its ok...

roshani;- what...what is happening here

gauti;- are tumhe pata nahi nikhil nagpur jaa raha hai...

roshani;- kya??


gauti;- yes(looking at nikhil) lekin nikhil kuch der ke liye to tum aahi sakate ho na...


nijhil;- i'll try my best...


gauti;- great... see u at party


roshani want to talk with nikhil but gauti just drag her with him



party time...




nikhil holding his glass of drink to tightly becuase whatever happening front of him is making him more angry...


gauti is on his keens and holding a red rose front of roshani and roshani just looking at him...



gauti;- roshani jab se tum mere jindagi mein aayi ho tab se apne aap ko akela nahi mehsoos karta...i feel like complete jab tum mere pass hoti ho to aisa lagta hai ki koi mere apna mere pass hai...issiliye to mein aa tak koi na koi bahana banake tumhare pass aata tha tumse baate karta tha tumse milane ki koshish karta tha...aur aaj mein iss feeling ko hamesha hamesha mehsoos karna chahata hoon...MISS ROSHANI SIDDHARTH i want to spend my entire life with you...can u give me the right to stand with u always...I LOVE YOU ROSHANI...




roshani just looking at him,,,...his each and every word is come from his heart...she look at her surroundings...everyone is chearing her to accept gauti's proposal amongst these people her eyest stuck on two pari of eyes who are looking at her angrily and most with hurt feelings...


nikhil only looking at her...when gauti said he loves her...the glass which is in his hand finally died ...nikhil now feel like suffocated in that placae he just want to get out of it ...and he just come out of the party without waiting for roshani's answer...



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roshani standing on Terrence and crying...




roshani;- kun kun di aisa hamesha mere saath hota hai...har wo insaan jisase mein pyar karti hoon, pasand karati hoon wo mujhase dur chala jaata hai,,,,,,,kun...please di laut aao ab mein aur akele nahi reh sakati...koi nahi hai yaha mera apna...



voice;- kaun kehta hai ke tu akeli hai...mein hoon na aur mein hamesha tere saath rahunga...chahe kuch bhi ho jaaye...




roshani turn to look at the person and the person is non other than nikhil...she just run and hug him so tightly like he was her last breath...nikhil was surprised by her sudden action but next sec he was bliss to know she is in his arms...nikhil also hug her so tightly...they hugged eachother dont know for how long...roshani parted from that hug and look at nikhil



roshani;- kaha chala gaya tha...pata hai meri kya halat ho gayi thi...mujhe laga meine tumhe hamesha ke liye kho diya


nikhil;- choosa tune soch bhi kaise liya ke mein tujhe chod ke chala jaung...


roshani;- lekin tum to nagour jane wale the na...

nikhil;- ha lekin plan cancelled ...ab nahi ja raha...aur waise bhi jab mere best friend ko meri jarurat hai to usse mein kaise akela chod ke jaa sakta hoon...


roshani;- i know u r my best friend...


nikhi;- yes i am...and issiliye mein tujhe chod ke kahi nahi jaunga...i know ye jo kuch huva usake baad tujhe meri jarurat hai...(pause) tune gauti ko na kun bola...bechare ka dil tod diya...manta hoon ke gauri ke gang mein rehne ke liye tune gauti ko na bola...lekin ek baar usake dil ki bhi sochati wo tujhase sach mein pyar karta hai...


roshani;- tujhe kya lagta hai ki meine sirf gauri ke liye gauti ko na kaha...


nikhil;- aur nahi to kya wajah ho sakti hai...





suddenly a loud thunder in the sky that make roshani scare and she just hug nikhil once again...slowly rain started and both drenched ...but still rain didn't affect their hug...




roshani;- (still hugging) meine gauti ko sirf gauri ke liye na nahi kaha...kisi aur ke liye na kaha...kunki mein gauti se jhoot nahi bol sakati...aur jisake liye meine na kaha hai tumhe pata hai wo kaun hai...





nikhil broke the hug and cupped her face and make her to look at his eyes...he is finding answer in her eyes...she just smile and close her eyes ...and after few sec she open her eyes and look at nikhil...both share a cute and long eyelock...rain is so heavy and both are completely wet ...nikhil slowly bend down their faces are just inch away ...finally their lips met

rain is pouring water on the world and nikhil and roshani pouring love on eachother...pure love...



PHEWW...finally i finished...

i hope u all like it...



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely Work dearie!

Nearly felt heartbroken when Gauti proposed her but the ending saved ME! Finally Rohil


Loved the end, so Sweet. Do write more.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Nash..

Lovely Work dearie!

Nearly felt heartbroken when Gauti proposed her but the ending saved ME! Finally Rohil


Loved the end, so Sweet. Do write more.



Thanks dear...

I knew it...when I was writing it...some one will definitely want to kill me... 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Unresed**
Dedicated to me?? 😲 awiiiee thanks so much kavz yaar, A big hug 🤗

Okie lets come to the topic..OMG a heartbroken Nikhil & Gauti proposed her infront of all were all were a deadly package. But thank God or should I say thanks to Nikhil's love which helped Roshni to deal with her true feeling & make a right decission. 👍🏼

the end was a complete treat to read, Roshni-Nikhil hug, raining cats & dogs & romance on the air, what can I do is drool over that imaginary scene

You rocked buddy, aue bhi likhna mere liye 😳 thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008



Thanks dear...

I knew it...when I was writing it...some one will definitely want to kill me... 😃

who?? @bold
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Posted: 11 years ago
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obviously tashi lovers yaar😆

they dont like what i have written
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