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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
after a long time got to read maaneet's lovely moments
so vicky wants maan n geet to shift to London but yash made him n pari too to join them
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Posted: 11 years ago
Vicky stole this update..
Vicky and Pari's pain was something thats so unbearable to readers..
His protective nature is making him to face all the evils alone..
But i think in london, Maaneet is going to meet Annie..
Loved the sweet family moment..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Great part.Maaneet moments great as always.Their passion seems unceasable.Geet's longing for Maan reflects her love and Maan also totally dediated to fulfill her with his love.

VSK almost trapped MSK but YSK proved again that he is their father and sending both brothers abroad.

Vicky -Pari part was really beautiful.Its nice to see that amidst all d problem Vicky isnt neglecting Pari.Their loss of baby is really tragic,hope she gets her happiness again.

Loved d part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
mindblowing updare eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome update !!

loved it hw after long time sweety got his reacting to him ..tht was beautiful ..

after long time got maaneet's moments filled with their love & passion ..

feeling very sad for vicky & pari ..they lost their child ..

vicky wants maaneet to settle in london & yash wants vicky & pari also to go with them ..

waiting for chudail annie's entry ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome nice par
loved it

Vicky loves his bro n bhabi so he did that where maan is seething in anger
loved maaneet moments
their passion
they r taken n suffered more than anything they need each other more
loved it
so yash planned for vicky also good
vicky n pari nice moments
loved it
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice part
maaneet moment after a long time😳
feeling bad for pari
yash's dialogue too good👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely MGA moments
Poor Vicky .. Plan backfired.
loved YSK attitude
Nice part
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Posted: 11 years ago
Quite interesting and emotional update

thnx for pm dear

cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

PART 83


3rd Day


I hope you two are ready Yash questioned Maan and Vicky on the breakfast table. Pari and Geet just looked at Yash not getting wat he meant and then turned towards each other and soon Geet drowned in her guilt for being harsh on Pari. I asked you something Maan and Vicky and you are supposed to answer me. Though angry Yash was trying his best to calm down. He was having lots in his mind and before he take his step towards Annie and Rajveer he had to be sure that his son and daughters were away from India.


M done... Geet don't forget that you have an appointment today with the doctor and yeah get ready on time before I come. Maan stood to get up and seeing his indifference to his questions Yash yelled in anger. Maan Singh Khuranna stay the hell where are you. But Maan was not the one who would stop knowing wat Yash wanted to know. He just kept walking towards the main door while Vicky smirked seeing Yash fuming in anger. He for once would agree to his Dad's order but seeing his brother he too started to do same.


Agar ek khadam bhi ghar se bahar gaya then I swear you will have to burn my dead body today itself Yash warned and instantly Maan and Vicky stopped. Maan clenched his fist while Vicky turned and looked at Yash in anger. So you still fear me Yash smirked at their reaction. Acha hain.. I still can control you two.


Yeah Dad Vicky murmured grinning at his words but kya hain na Khuranna sons know when to get scared and when we don't have to. Yash narrowed his eyes looking at Maan's back. He knew that he was fuming and would lash out his anger at any time but he also knew that he had to be harsh on his sons. Maan I have asked you a question and you need to answer them.


You have already got your answer Dad.. aur phir bhi you wanna know then here it is. He turned and said looking straight with anger na main kahi jaa raha hoon nor will I let you to be alone here. Maan Singh Khuranna ne kabhi haarna nahi seekha Dad. Yash just smiled at his words and his smile irked Maan that he hit his hand on the side pillar hurting it.


Maan Geet cried as she ran and took his hand in hers and started to check for any wound and seeing her like that it pained Maan. Yash keenly observed each and every reaction on Maan's face as Geet continued looking at his hand for making sure that he was not hurt. Theek hoon baba.. It's not hurting Jaan he said hugging her while she cried fearing for his pain. Dad kya bol rahe hain Maan . His eyes wide as he heard her question. He had not told Geet anything and now her sudden question made him scared.


Nothing.. its just some office matters Jaan.. he parted and cupped her face pressing a kiss to her forehead chalo you complete your breakfast.. Sweety wil be awake in few minutes phir you won't eat anything. She nodded touching his face asking him will you come for lunch. Maan smiled hearing her but he knew that there was a deep fear in her. Haan Baba.. uske baad hume hospital jaana hain na.. then we three will go for a ride.. par abhi ke liye breakfast . He just kept talking to Geet not realizing that Yash had escaped from the scene. Tho chalo.. aur haan.. Pari se baat karna.. she is not angry but if you don't talk to her na she will feel bad. Geet nodded as she too knew that Pari was not angry with her but her guilt was eating her inside. So now go and have breakfast and I will leave for office.. jaldi aana hain hain. She smiled and pressed her soft peck on his lips while Vicky grinned like a fool. Maan glared at him and turned to leave but stopped hearing a firm voice.


Jaane ki itni jaldi kyu hain Maan... abhi meri baat puri nahi hui hain. Yash walked down the stairs with Armaan in his arms. Dad... You but Maan shut his mouth seeing Armaan looking at him with a puppy face. Why did you wake him up.. aap jaanthe hain na he gets up early and then sleeps... ab pure din Geet ko pareshan karega Maan complained liked a kid seeing his baby rubbing is eyes and simultaneously looked at him. You really fear for your son Maan.. but then wat about me... should not I fear for my kids.. ya its only you who loves your son and I don't. Maan and Vicky just stared at Yash who had tears in his eyes. His words hit his sons so hard that they could not even utter a word.


Dad Vicky cried as he reached near Yash you are the best Dad and your love for us can't be measured. Yash smiled but that smile did not reach his eyes but my sons don't Vicky.. shayad they don't understand that their father wants them safe. Yash's voice choked as he spoke but soon he regained his voice and walked towards Maan holding Armaan. Bahut pyar karte ho na apne bache se Yash asked Maan who just looked at his eyes that showed some determination.


I do Dad and I know that you won't do anything that would.. he could not complete his sentence as he felt a hard grip on his hand and soon it was on Armaan's small head. Either you both brothers leave India and do as I say or else kill Armaan who would witness his Dad and Chachu killing someone who does not have any value in our life.


Dad Maan screamed pulling his hand away from Armaan. Don't dare said that Dad.. mera Armaan meri Jaan hain and I can do anything to save him from cruelty of this world. Yash smirked hearing it and said then why should I not do it Maan... m just giving you two options... you stay here for revenge and kill Armaan so that he is saved from seeing his Dad being a murderer... or leave as I say. Yash pulled Geet and pushed her on Maan. Yaad hain... tumare ishe gusse ki wajah se she was carrying a dead baby inside her... do you remember how you tortured her... yaad hain how she was a dead soul but still she is with you coz she loves you more than anything else. Maan just kept quite while Yash pulled his hand again and kept on Armaan's head making armaan to giggle. He smiled seeing his Dadda and Dadu playing with him.


Tumhe apne Sweety ki kasam Maan... you will leave today itself... And if you really don't love him then you are free to stay. Maan looked at Yash I know that this is your fight.. Annie and Rajveer ne sabse bada dard tumhe aur Geet ko diya hain but now it's mine Maan.. Annie ki galathi ki saaza main ushe dunga... A father who has been betrayed by a daughter like Annie... ushe tho uske pita hi saaza dega Maan... And I don't want you to interfere in this.. Yash Singh Khuranna abhi kamzor nahi bana tat I would let my sons to die in the name of revenge.. Want to see the level of Annie... dekha chahta hoon ki woh kitna gir sakthi hain... and I promise Maan the moment I feel I can't handle it I will call you and Vicky.. Par now you both will leave with Geet and Pari.. My daughters have suffered a lot Maan and I can't let them to cry more... They have lost their first child.. aur ab kuch khone nahi de saktha saying this Yash turned to Vicky and said you have promised that you would take care of your sister Vicky.. aur aaj woh din aaya hain.. You need to think about Geet, Pari and Armaan.


I will Dad.. I will Vicky finally agreed as he could see the helpless father in front of him. He knew his Dad was a strong man and right now he only wanted his sons to be safe with their families. I know Vicky slowly walked towards Yash and Maan and said I know you are scared of our anger aur sach maanye Dad... We would not be able to control our anger in front of Annie and Rajveer and for you Dad I will leave... I will leave coz my Dad for the very first time asked something from me... apne sab kuch diya hain hume but you never asked anything and today I will give you this Dad... I and Bro will leave for your happiness.


Yash looked at Maan as he did not say anything. He knew Maan would not agree for his condition and he used Sweety for making him weak. Maan just stared at his father when he questioned him again wats your answer Maan. Maan pulled Armaan in his arms and kissed him all over the face jee nahi saktha Dad.. iske bina meri zindagi adhoori hain and for him and my Geet I will leave but trust me Dad a scratch on you then this Maan Singh Khuranna will wipe of their existence from this earth and Maan walked grabbing Geet's hand towards their room.


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Yash wiped off his teary eyes as he saw their personal chartered flight taking his two sons away from him. He turned and saw his own mother and Naina looking at him with pain. They will be safe there...you know Naina ush jagah ka address koi nahi jantha.. and tat was the best place I could send them. Nain nodded while Dadima hugged him trying to give her support. Will you meet her Naina's sudden words angered Yash. His eyes grew wild as he stared at Naina.


It was not easy for me to hide everything Maa... Adi the one who never go against Maan... I had to blackmail him emotionally.. agar nahi karta tho mere dono bte najaane kya karte. His each word was filled with anger as he remembered how he had to hold on each and every person who worked for Maan and Vicky. It was not easy for him but being their father he knew to well how he had to play and his first target was Adi who though initially did not agree. Aur aaj uska samna mujhse hoga Maa.. Yash Singh Khuranna not a father.


How did you come to know Annie is coming today dadima asked as she did not know everything. Yash had called Naina and dadima after he heard wat Vicky planned for Maan and he was ready to send Maan away but then suddenly he feared for Vicky and then he shared wat he wanted. He just had three days in hand and in this three days he held every single men who worked for his sons and did wat not to make them not to tell anything about Annie to Maan and Vicky and finally today morning he was informed by Adi tat he had got news about Annie flying back to India.


Dadima and Naina sighed as they walked out making them strong for the upcoming storm. They did not know how long this fight would go with their own daughter who turned so rebellious tat she did not even think once tat she was their own blood. Will you fine Yash dadima asked in concern as they settled in the car. He nodded as now he was just not Yash Singh Khuranna and he would not get weak. Ushne sirf mera pyar dekha hain Maa.. but now she will face YSK.. and YSK never forgives the same person twice.. mauka diya tha ushe badalne ke liye but she did not and now she will pay for every sin she did.. mere Armaan ko tak nahi choda Maa... Armaan jo mere ghar ka chiraag hain and she will pay for it.


Naina he called as he saw her lost. He knew being a mother it was very tough for her. Uske baaremein she did not even let him complete him his sentence and said she does not deserve my thoughts Yash... main tho bas Maan aur Vicky ke baaremein mein soch rahi hoon.. how will they react when they will come to know about all this.. mera Armaan how will he live without us.. ushe tho sab chahiye na Yash. She cried as she was unable to express her pain of sending them away. It wont be long Naina.. ek baar yeh chapter khatam hone de.. we will all leave back.. hum yaha se bahut dur jayenge... just are family and happiness.


Precap: YSK and Annie

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Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago

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