Pavitra Rishta Written Update 27th January 2014

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Pavitra Rishta Written Update 27th January 2014

Karmarkar House:

Ankita on the phone with Prashant tells him she knows shes late but cant do anything as its Kinnary's Grihapravesh (homecoming) ceremony now,as soon as its over she will come, till then he has to take care of everything!

Sunanda comes marching and rebukes Ankita why shes talking on the phone, does she even know what time it is and what she has to do during the grihapravesh?

Ankita says, Yes Ma'am! Shes preparing a thali for the grihapravesh!

Sunanda sees Raunak and Kinnari have reached the main door. She rushes there and asks them to wait and calls Rushali who comes and greets the newly wedded couple by sprinkling holy water around them.

Naren jumps up on the staircase near the door and starts doing running commentary holding a flower as his mic. He says, The view is great from here! So what if India lost, Karmarkar family has won! Karmarkar family's younger daughter in law is entering the house, shes at the boundary line. Ahana is coming holding a lamp and shes welcoming Kinnari. She picked up a teeka from boundary line and applied on her forehead and it's a SIXER! She applied teeka on Raunak's forehead too! Like this the older Laxmi of Karmarkar family welcomed younger Laxmi with great ceremony! If only you all were here with me to observe this! And now Ankita is welcoming Kinnari with flowers! Wow, this is looking so great! All of u shd have been here at the stadium and seen this with ur own eyes!

Rushali asks Kinnari to step into the bowl of kumkum water with her right foot. Naren continues the commentary, theres a pot of rice at the boundary and Kinnari hit it with her foot, the rice spilled and its another Sixer! Having a lot of fun watching this exciting match! Attu signaled from there and now Kinnari who is captain of another team is going ahead, she steps into the kumkum and steps forward! Welcome to Karmarkar family, Sundari, I mean Kinnari! Its so exciting a match that Im sweating, if commentator is this way then imagine Raunak's condition!

Canada:

Manav is watching cricket match on TV! He says SIX! What the...these people don't know how to play!

Teju is passing by, Manav stops her and asks what shes doing there at this time? And that is Pari's room, that means Pari is also awake, she didn't sleep yet?

Teju says, Yes u know that she works all night, sends mails etc and a clock in her room has no meaning!

Manav asks Teju if she talked to Pari? Teju wonders if she shd tell Baba everything, maybe he will have a solution?

Teju says she had talked to Pari, but shes a little disturbed abt Arjun-Purvi's wedding and u know how busy she is nowadays with work so...I think she gets tired ...

Manav comes up to Teju and pats her shoulder, its okay, Teju! If u don't want to tell me then I don't have a problem! But one thing, ur her Aunt and u have to take care of her in her mother's absence. And I trust u completely! And I know will fulfil ur responsibility very well! So take care of her and if u ever feel that theres a problem that I and Archana can help u solve, then tell us definitely! We will do everything for Pari's happiness! Till today we have given all our love to Pari but still she has been lacking the love of both parents! And Ive always seen that pain in her eyes! Its by God's grace that our Pari never went on the wrong path and whatever she has done we are proud of that!

Teju agrees, Manav says, still I feel something is wrong somewhere which we have to rectify! And I depend on u fully in this matter! So please look after her!

Teju leaves, Manav looks thoughtfully after her.

Naren's house:

Raunak with his friends, they offer him drinks saying its his wedding day and he will sit there dry?

Raunak looks glum and says he cant drink today! His friend says u just got married and already u started refusing ur friends? God knows what will happen after wedding night!

All the friends laugh. Raunak says theres nothing like that! One friend says, see just a few mins left so live and enjoy these moments, from tomorrow ur freedom is over, slavery will begin! For every sip u will have to ask ur wife's permission!

Raunak says, Oh Hello! I don't need permission from anyone for anything, okay?

He picks up a glass of whiskey and drinks, then pours some more and drinks!

Downstairs, Kinnari is hugging her mother and tells her, come on Mom, why are u getting so emotional? I got married not going on my final journey! Im Raunak's wife later but ur daughter before that! So whenever u feel like meeting me just come over! And whenever I feel like seeing u I will come over!

Kinnari's mom says, Take care of urself, okay? Call us if u miss us!

Ankita comes there and tells her, Auntie, don't worry, we are all here, we will take good care of her! Right Mom?

Rushali agrees and smiles, tells Kinnari's mom not to worry, shes like our daughter now!

Raunak's friends ask him why hes sitting there while his in-laws are leaving? He shd be with them!

Raunak asks, what will I do by going there? Wipe her tears? Ur a strange guy! You can see her tears but not mine? Oh God! What a wife I got! Shes always talking to her 50-60 friends! If she had some intelligence alongwith looks then it would be better!

His friend says, what if she thinks the same abt you? The friends laugh and do high fives!

Raunak drinks angrily. His friend tells him to take it easy as hes already downed 4 pegs! Raunak says hes okay. He looks at Kinnari talking to her mother, in his imagination Kinnari turns into Mansi. He looks at her lustfully and imagines Mansi turning to smile at him. Fantasy ends but hes still lost in thoughts of Mansi.

Kinnari hugs her mother again. Raunak calls Mansi who is at her sangeet. She doesn't recognize his number and says whose number is this? Its not in my phone book!

Raunak sends her a message.

Mansi reads the message, did u wear the dress I sent? How are u looking? At least send a photo! Naren Jeeju cant send a message like this! If Jeeju didn't send the dress then who did?

Mansi calls Naren who says don't worry, I and Ahana will reach there on time! And a very happy Sangeet to you!

Mansi thanks him and says she wants to thank him for sending the dress for her!

Naren is puzzled, Dress! I didn't send any dress! Mansi says, Jeeju this red and green dress that u sent for my sangeet! Its very nice!

Naren tries to remember, red and green? Maybe I forgot, wait a minute I will ask Ahana, hold on!

He goes to find Ahana who is still talking to Kinnari's parents. He takes her aside and asks her if she sent any dress to Mansi? Ankita says she didn't. Naren hands the phone to her, Ankita tells Mansi that Naren Sir didn't send any dress for her. What dress?

Mansi says, its nothing, Tayi, I think there has been a misunderstanding! Don't worry I will see abt it.

Ankita asks what happened and if everything was alright? Mansi says everything is fine, don't worry, u enjoy yourself.

Ankita asks again if theres a problem but Mansi hangs up. Mansi is tense and worried, if Naren or Shashank didn't send the dress then who sent it? It means the guy who is sending me messages has sent me the dress! But why? Why would someone send me such a costly dress just like that? Who can be this guy? I will go and change this dress right now!

Shes turning to go but Shashank's mom comes and takes her to meet some guests.

Naren's house:

Raunak and Kinnari take blessings from Shirish and Rushali and leaving for their wedding night with packed bags. Ankita asks Kinnari if she has taken everything she needs and if she missed anything she can call her and she will send them over. Kinnari thanks Ankita and says she doesn't think she will need her help in this matter! As it is high standard people like us have different necessities from lowly people like you!

Naren comes and says, its getting late! come on Sundari, I mean Kinnari, go and enjoy the night! Bye!

Kinnari leaves, Naren pulls Ankita's hand saying lets go we are already late! Ankita says, Sir, I will come in 5 mins, I have some work left!

Naren says, Still u have work? U know we are already late, Mansi's sangeet is stalled, until we get there, they wont start the ceremony!

Ankita is smiling, Naren asks did I joke? Why are u laughing? Ankita says, No Sir, I really like it that u are thinking so much abt Mansi's happiness, so Im just feeling happy!

Naren says, I consider her my younger sister so I will think abt her! I will take her responsibility! But don't waste time in talking, please its going to be 8 and there Prashant must be managing everything alone! He must be running around as if he has to win the marathon!

Raunak and Kinnari in the car:

Kinnari is talking on the phone again telling her friend that finally she has escaped from so many rituals and ceremonies, do this, touch this person's feet, knock over the rice pot, Im so tired I cant tell you!

She sees Raunak messaging on his phone, she asks him if he was drinking before coming? He says No, she says whatever and goes back to chatting, I had heard weddings are boring but didn't know it would be this boring! I didn't know this! Im very tired! Alright, I will call u back!

She looks at Raunak messaging and grimaces.

Mansi's Sangeet:

Shashank's mom introduces Mansi to her nephew who lives in America and has come only to attend the wedding! Mansi greets him. Shashank shakes hands with his cousin.

Mansi gets a message again, Youre looking very hot! Im not in front of u but Im still watching you!

Raunak messaging to Mansi in the car while Kinnari is busy taking selfies.

Mansi gets another message, she moves away and reads it, Mansi, how is the sangeet going? To which song are u dancing now? alone or with him? Is he very close to you? Im jealous, Mansi, close ur eyes and try to feel that my hand is on ur waist, not his! My breath is on ur neck, not his! Im too close to you!

Mansi calls the number but Raunak cuts the call.

Mansi is worried, what shd I do? Whom do I go to and tell this? Who is this guy? Hes sending messages continuously! When I call hes cutting my calls. What does he want?

The flower bedecked car stops at the hotel. Raunak gets down and goes ahead, still messaging Mansi. Finally he calls Mansi. She asks who are u? why are u messaging me?

Raunak drawls, You still didn't recognize me? I had thought u would recognize my voice at once! Do something, ask ur heart! You will understand everything!

Mansi asks, who are you? Raunak says, Its only yours, Raunak!

Mansi is shocked, Its you! But this number isn't ...he tells her its his friend's phone. He says, let all that be, u tell me what are u doing? U must be missing me!

Mansi says, Raunak, I haven't come on such bad days that I will start missing you! Even my shoes wouldn't miss you!

Rauank says, Leave all that, did u get the dress I sent? Did u wear it? Of course u must have, right?

Mansi is shocked, he tells her she will wear his chosen dress at her sangeet and dance! Aah, what a feeling, u know! By the way, how are u looking? Im sure, u must be looking very hot and beautiful! Do u know Im just imagining abt u and Im sweating! Shall I tell u something Manu, today was my wedding and I came here to have my wedding night but I cant stop thinking abt you! Only u are on my mind! It seems tonight will be spent just think abt you!

Mansi looks disgusted, she says, shame on you, Raunak! What kind of person are you? Today u got married and ...

He smirks, I just got married, my feet aren't shackled! Im feeling so relaxed! I told u marriage is just a licence to flirt with other women and today I got that licence!

Mansi disconnects the call angrily, looking upset. Ankita arrives and comes to Mansi, she says, ur looking so beautiful! Such a lovely dress!

Sonu says, It will be nice naa! Shashank jeeju gave it! Ankita says so shashank gave this!

Mansi says she has to change her dress, Ankita asks why is shee changing? She looks so nice!

Mansi tells Ankita she needs to talk to her. Anki says, tell me what happened? Is everything okay?

Ankita says, are u angry with me for coming so late? Im sorry, Im sorry! She holds her ears in contrition.

She says, what could I do? It was Kinnari's grihapravesh, lots to do so I couldn't come. But now Im here, tell me what u want, today all ur wishes will be fulfilled, tell me quiclkly!

Mansi says, Tayi I don't want anything! You are here, this is enough for me!

The sisters hug emotionally.

Shashank and Mansi are sitting down, Sonu and Pranav are playing with Shashank.

Soham comes out of the house slightly unsteady, holding his head. He calls a waiter and asks him to get two glasses of ...he stops and says let it be, my head is hurting as it is. He asks for 2 glasses of cold water instead with lemon squeezed in it.

Naren announces on the mic, Attention everybody! Many of you have missed my and Ahana's dance! Missed Raunak and Kinnari's dance too! But now don't miss the dance of the special couple who are coming to dance now!

Music playing, Naren and Ankita swaying to it, while Mansi and Shashank dance in each other's arms.

"tuney toh pal bhar mein chori kiya rey jiya"

Shashank's parents, Prashant, the 2 kids, Naren Ankita all are watching them happily. They dance romantically for a long time, then everyone applauds.

Naren runs up on stage and says, Classical performance, right? Wow, what a dance! If u had danced at my sangeet then u would have won, 100%...

Mansi touches Naren's feet in respect, he asks, why are u touching my feet? U know when someone touches my feet, I feel Im getting old. Im not that much bigger!

Mansi says, You are bigger, because u have a big heart! Nobody can do what u do! He is puzzled, says, Really? What did I do? I didn't even dance!

Mansi says, everyone is born with their own destiny! Since when I was born, I saw our household in poverty. It was so bad that there was less happiness and more problems. I didn't even know when my childhood was spent and I grew up! But I didn't know what fatherly affection was! Today u filled up all those gaps, Jeeju!

Mansi is tearful, Naren wipes her tears and tells her not to cry, he says by that rule, her husband shd also touch Naren's feet.

Shashank says, nothing to it, now ur my jeeju too! He tries to touch Naren;s feet but Naren stops him and they hug.

Naren hugs both Mansi and Shashank and says may u two always be happy like this!

PRECAP: Mansi is on the terrace, she is calling out, Tayi, did u call me upstairs? Where are you?

Its dark on the terrace, menacing music in the background, Raunak comes out of the shadows! Mansi is shocked to see him

Edited by pallavi25 - 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the update! 😃
poor mansi :(
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Pallavi, i had to click like so you would know i appreciate you doing the WU today, but that's the only reason 😆
As to the show itself ... 👎🏼 Dislike !

To show as the highlight of the episode, a sleazy creep like Ranauk boldly stalking a woman who is getting married, and that even on his own wedding night to another person, is a new low for PR. Children watch this show? When it switches to 630 i will assume lots of kids will be up. Disgusting. 🤢
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To be honest i really like the detailed WU's you do. You manage to catch each nd every thing that happens.
thanks for the update
Edited by --MasterMind-- - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: naava

Pallavi, i had to click like so you would know i appreciate you doing the WU today, but that's the only reason 😆

As to the show itself ... 👎🏼 Dislike !

To show as the highlight of the episode, a sleazy creep like Ranauk boldly stalking a woman who is getting married, and that even on his own wedding night to another person, is a new low for PR. Children watch this show? When it switches to 630 i will assume lots of kids will be up. Disgusting. 🤢


Yes naava, I agree! The show is becoming more disgusting everyday! I only watch online and do updates!
This show is a total sleazefest now! Ekta loves sleaze...shes getting worse with every failure! She thinks sleaze will get her trps! 🤢

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Originally posted by: --MasterMind--

To be honest i really like the detailed WU's you do. You manage to catch each nd every thing that happens.
thanks for the update


Youre welcome! Thank you very much for the appreciation! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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With all the rape news.. They shouldn't show things like these on television.. At least show how mansi defends herself.. Than showing her as helpless or a victim!
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Thanks for the WU Pallavi, am with naava, only commenting coz you managed to tolerate whatever went on and update it in detail.

I'd like to say it's pretty surprising that while ArVi were berated for what was perceived by some as 'cheating' with eyelocks here, the sickening possibility of Raunaq raping Mansi isn't even met with half that rage or disdain! Oh well, guess this isn't as shocking and morally disgusting (sarcasm intended)

I've time and again repeated that the WORST track in PR was Ajit and Vandita marital rape one, and if they show Mansi and Raunaq track repeat that, it'd be a horror! Glad I've given up long ago!!


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Ekta should show some respect towards women.. This is increasing suspense in people's mind?! as she is intending it to be.. So she thinks?! Infact.. I doubt any women watching this show and track wld be in favor of such portrayal! This is ridiculous!! Who writes this stuff?! A man or a woman?! Have some shame!! I understand that characters like Raunak can and do exist, in real life. But this show isn't revolving around that. This show, Isn't about a girl's struggle and war against this, as its been informed and portrayed in Sapne Suhane Ladhak Pankhe.. A few times. This in PR, just seems to be a side show/story to entertain
WHICH is where the question of decency arises! Not appropriate or needed to be added, to the storyline..
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Originally posted by: rouble_lover

With all the rape news.. They shouldn't show things like these on television.. At least show how mansi defends herself.. Than showing her as helpless or a victim!


Ekta has become so disgusting and desperate for trps that shes using a woman's helplessness and rape! Its exploitation of the worst crime against women that is plaguing India right now!

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