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Posted: 12 years ago
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previous chapter

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/sapne-suhane-ladakpan-ke/3886028/rabir-ff-love-happens-again-chapter-7-updated?pn=2

Chapter 2

Australia

Chaya calls Rachna .

Chaya: hello..Miss R.D.Garg..how r u??u don't even have tym to call me up??

Rachna: no Chaya there is nothing like that .bs..I have a lot of work..but u Dont worry dear I follow ur novels ,ur columns ..ur ideas..n its so nice..

Chaya: oh..thank u so much ..now I will get to the point ..u know na Rachna KT creations is on verge of sinking..&to add to problems Dadi'd health is deteriorating..

everytime I meet her she asks about u ..wt to do Rachna ..plz u meet her once...she is suffering so much..

Rachna: Chaya ..u know I can't come there..I lost everything there I have no guts ...Chaya to be there ..even today after 5 years I think about the incident..I become numb..

Chaya: Rachna ..I know that but for Dadi's sake..plz Rachna ..I beg of u..plz..

Rachna: I will see Chaya ..& will talk to u later...

Chaya: ohk!!

Alex enters the room..& sees Rachna sad.

Alex: hey miss beautiful ..why so sad???

Alex sits besides Rachna n Rachna places her head on his shoulders..

Rachna: tell me honestly..when u have to listen to ur mind and heart whom wud u prefer..

Alex(taking her hand in his): just one thing ...whatever i feel that is best for me and for everyone whom I love..

Rachna: Can u be with me here tonight?

Alex: I can be with u all my life..

Rachna : Alex...

Alex moves closer to Rachna and kisses on her cheeks and Rachna shys away ..

Alex: I will be always there to make u happy...ohk!!

Next day(office)

Rachna asks Alex to call the meeting of Board of directors ..

Rachna: hello.. everyone ..well i am here with a proposal...and I wish to know ur opinion on it!

Directors: ya sure R.D.wy not!!

Rachna: I feel we shud take over KT creations ..

Directors all look at each other in shock because everyone knew KT creations was suffering huge losses n was near bankruptcy..

Director(one of them): but wts the need ..we already are a huge collabration of lot of brands and The KT creations is on verge of sinking...n most important wts or profit or benefit..

Rachna : I knew u wud ask me this n thats why i came all prepared..

1.We haven't made a significant mark in India and KT creations has captured Indian market..so once we enter a deal India opens up for us.

2.The famous designer KT will work for us.

  1. If we take over that company we will get a lot of free publicity not only ion India but around the globe..

Director: ya ..but will KT who never bows down in front of anyone enter this deal/

Rachna: u don't have to worry about that he will bow down...I have already sent them a proposal ..n he will reply by evening..

Director: Ok then...

Benaras

KT is going through proposal sent by R.D garg and The advance cheque of Rs.1 crore..

Kt(to himself): I don't know wt to do..(Dadi's condition flashes in his mind...his workers without salary flash in his mind..)

I shud take this proposal Dadi's life is more important than my pride...

KT replies to R.D through email that he wants the deal to be finalised..

Kabir goes to the hospital..

Nurse: sir u cant go in!!

KT: wt the hell ..i wanna see my Dadi..

Nurse : sir only one family member allowed at one tym..

KT: i m the only family memeber..

Nurse: no sir miss Chaya is already inside...

Chaya comes out ..

Chaya: KT u can meet Dadi..I m leaving...

Nurse leaves and as Chaya is about to leave...Kt pulls her back..

Chaya: wts ur problem??

KT: u ...why don't u just leave me alone and my Dadi too...why u have to be there as a superwomen...I know u will also leave n run like ur friend ran away..

Chaya: mind ur tongue..don't even bring her in all this

KT: why no...she left and why she cudn't meet Dadi just once...

Chaya gets away with a jerk and moves out..

Kabir goes inside the room and sit besides Dadi..

and looks at her

Kabir: Dadi..I won't let u leave me this way.. I can leave everything but not u Dadi...u will have to get up and walk and become lively and chirpy as before..(tears roll down Kabir's eyes)

Australia

Rachna: Alex.. u and I will be going to India to finalise this deal..KT has given a positive response.

Alex: ohk!! I will get the tickets booked..Kaira will also see India now..

Rachna: ya ..how is she now..she was having fever na...

Alex: absolutely f9 now..she is with caretaker for now ..but I will bring her to u tomorrow...

Rachna: get tickets of as early as possible..

Alex: ohk!!

In the evening Alex informs Rachna that the tickets have been booked for tomorrw evening flight and they wud reach lucknow via delhi and then the taxi to benaras has also been arranged..

KT is informed about Alex :the chief supervisor of R.D.garg's company arrival to benaras ..

Rachna and Alex land up in Lucknow..

Chaya is there to welcome them ...

Rachna intoduces Chaya and Alex to each other..

They sit in the Taxi and leave for Benaras..

On the way

Rachna asks Chaya about Dadi's condition while Chaya remains silent..

as they reach benaras Rachna asks Alex to meet KT for the deal..and tells him that she has an urgent work...

Precap:Rachna is in hospital to see Dadi ..while Kabir is about to enter the hospital...

Rachna and Kabir bump into each other but Kabir is not able to see Rachna's face as it is covered ..he only sees her eyes..


CHapter 3 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/sapne-suhane-ladakpan-ke/3886028/rabir-ff-love-happens-again-chapter-7-updated?pn=5

Edited by AnjaliPunia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
oh shitt yaar kabir isn't able to see her..now it's become dramatic and i really loved it.
awesome update

update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMg!! They're finally about to meet! But I wonder what's gonna happen with Alex! Anyway love the update 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Owww this is great...
It seems alex likes rachna...happy that she will meet dadi...

Cant wait for more..great work and thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awww i REALLY LIKE ALEX...such a sweetheart! btw...doesn't KT have ANYYY doubts knowing the name Ms. R.D.Garg. I mean he calls ms.garg..ms.garg all day and the initials are even the same...wouldn't there be even a tiny bit of a doubt especially if he still remembers her?
lovely update,...made me wait too long, but finally! :p
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aww.. It seems Alex really care for her. I feel bad for him, after all she is Kabir's 😳 Why Kabir didn't see her 😡 Wonderful update as usual. Update soon please 😃
Thx for PM 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOW.. so interesting.. please pm me for your next update.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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it seems alex really likes rachna...wonder whats gonna happen wid him... nyhow wonderful update...! continue soon!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: RabirLover

it seems alex really likes rachna...wonder whats gonna happen wid him... nyhow wonderful update...! continue soon!!!!


don't worry i have a record..i settle down every character in mah story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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previous chapter https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100149602


Chapter-3

Kabir's office

Kabir: Welcome...Mr. Alex .I was waiting for u only..come have a seat

Alex: hmm..Its a pleasure to meet u in person Mr.Kabir Tripathi.I have heard a lot about u ..Ms.Garg is a fan of ur designs.

Kabir(was a bit taken aback..bcz the reference reminded him of Rachna): Miss .Garg??

Alex: oh!1 yeah I meant R.D.

Kabir: oh ohk!!!

Alex: so u are sure you wanna finalise this deal with us ..

Kabir: ya but why didn't R.D come here...

Alex: u know she rarely meets anyone and there are no photos of her in media..too..once she is confident with her clients that they won't leak her identity ..she meets them..

Kabir: but wts the reason for it??

Alex: I tried her asking many times but she never answered..

Kabir: ohk..!!!SO the deal is final ...I have signed the papers..

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Hospital

Rachna reaches the hospital with Chaya ..

Rachna's face is completely covered with a dupatta and only her eyes are visible..

Chaya tells her Dadi's room and as Kaira is crying she takes her out for a walk in nearby park..

Rachna enters Dadi's room and Tears roll down her eyes on seeing Dadi lying there unconscious ..all the past memories flash in her mind ..She looks at a photo kept at Dadi's side ..its hers.Dadi's and Kabir'S She remembers how Kabir was reluctant to pose with her but had finally complied to Dadi..

Rachna: I m so sorry Dadi...I know I needed to be here for u..u treated me as ur own n wt did I do .I left u Dadi even without meeting once ..I didn't even meet Kabir..in these five years ...

Dadi get up and talk to me talk to ur Rachna ..and she breaks down..

Kabir is on the way to Dadi's room..

Rachna realises that its been half hour she is in Dadi's room and remembers Chaya told her that Kabir came to see Dadi everyday at 12'30 p.m. Rachna looked at watch it was 12:28..means Kabir wud be here any moment ..She rushed out of room and in that hurry a part of her dupaata got torn and entangled in Dadi's bed .

As Rachna rushed out of the room...Kabir was progressing towards the room..

In the corridor..

Rachna bumped into Kabir who was going towards Dadi's room..and she was about to fall when Kabir caught her in his arms..Rachna looked into his eyes..and Kabir wondered whether he had seen those hazel eyes before ..

Rachna(breaking the eyelock): I m really sorry ...

Kabir: its ok..

Rachna left immediately..

Kabir started heading towards Dadi's room..

Nurse : Sir..only one visitor at a time..I hope u remember...

Kabir: ya I will call Chaya and tell her to come out fast...

Nurse : but...

Kabir's eyes fall on a bracelet fallen near Dadi's room ..he picks it up and looks at it..as if he had seen it before ..he was surprised to see it there ..he knew about this bracelet ..he knew it..

Nurse ( bringing Kabir out of his thoughts): sir ms .Chaya is not inside...there was someone else with Miss .Chaya who came to meet ur Dadi..

Kabir: who?

Nurse : A girl whose Face was covered with dupatta ...She came and she is inside...

Kabir: Girl with a dupatta she just left..wait...

(Kabir looked at the bracelet..then he remembered the girl who bumped into him ..he remembered those eyes)

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Flashback

Kabir:Ms Garg I don't believe this u messed my entire collection for this bracelet..How can u be so ..err..

Rachna: KT this bracelet is special to me..A very close person gifted it to me...

Kabir: a very close person ..ur boyfrnd I guess..

Rachna: no someone more important than that ...someone who has the deepest influence on my life...Its the only thing That mah Hockey coach Mr.Rajiv aggarwal gifted me before leaving Benaras...n its very dear to me...

Kabir: yeah..ok ..now clean up this mess...

Flashback ends..

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Kabir: Rachna ...it was her she was here...

Kabir rushes out to the gate ...n sees A taxi leaving ...and sees the same colour dupatta Rachna was wearing...

Kabir asks the people around where did that taxi go...

A person: saahab..madam wanted to go to the ganges aarti..n before that to the hotel..that only one driver agreed to take her to her hotel than aarti...

Kabir: Ganga aarti...today u wil have to come in front of me..Rachna ...

Kabir goes inside and sits besides Dadi...

Kabir notices the part of torn dupatta...

Kabir: so this is the reason she went to hotel first...(keeping the bracelet andpart of dupatta inside his pocket)

Kabir(to himself):It bothered me even 5 years back and its bothering me even now..she still had this bracelet n wt about the gift I gave her on her bday...that locket..Is that coach more important than me n wait she didn't meet me but has she met Rajiv in these five years ..n oh!God I m poor at remembering names then How I remembered this person's name ...I have so many questions but no answer...Dadi u r listening ..get up I have no one to share my thoughts with I need u Dadi...

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Rachna reaches the hotel ...

Alex is waiting for her..

Rachna : so how was the deal ??

Alex: very nice..Kabir is a humble person ..opposite of wt we heard from so many years..Rachna did u call ur sir ..amm..I frgt his name and told him that u r in India

Rachna: Rajiv sir..ya called him bt his no came switched off...Dnt wrry I had infrmed him before we left Australia...he will be in benaras after some days...after all he is also a busy Man ...

Alex: yaah!! coach of the Indian national team ..if I m not wrong..

Rachna : haan..There's a taxi waiting down u go I will change mah Dupaata and come down...

Rachna goes to get another Dupatta when her eyes fall on her hand..and she finds the bracelet missing..

Rachna : Oh!God My bracelet..I think it has fallen in hospital..fr sure...

She calls Chaya and tells her

Chaya's home

Chaya(to Rachna on phone): Don't worry hospital mein hoga toh i will get it...bye

There's a Knock at Chaya's door..

Chaya opens the door

Chaya: Kabir u at this tym...

Kabir enters the house and looks around..

Chaya: hello ..wt r u searching for???

Kabir: nothing ..

Chaya:so why here at this tym..

Kabir: I was missing u so thought to meet u..

Chaya(confused): Mr. Tripathi ..r u in ur senses ..wt rubbish are u talking...

Kabir: as if u don't know why am I here!!

Chaya: why??

Kabir(takes out the bracelet from his pocket and gives it to her):Give it to her..n ask her to stay away from me n Dadi...suddenly aftr 5 years ..wt made her comeback..I m warning ask her to stay away...

Chaya: Kabir wts ur problem??yesterday u asked why on earth she left n today u r asking her to stay away..

Kabir: bcz ur frnd didn't even feel the need to come n talk to me ..she was in front of me...cud not she just talk to me?( and turns to leave)
Chaya: so Mr. KT u r hurt bcz Rachna ignored u..

Kabir turns towrds her holds her tightly: no I M not..

Chaya: then why this anger..?why this frustration and why these hidden tears of pain??

Kabir realise that he is in close proximity to Chaya and he is hurting her n then he leaves her and moves out of the house...

Precap: Rachna and Rajiv are meeting in a hotel while Kabir looks on ..Rajiv asks Rachna for a Dance and as he holds her closer...Kabir braks the wine glass in his hand ..n is hurt


Construsctive criticism is welcomed...people...how is incorporating RajNa .is it okay ..or not??


Chapter 4 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/100467904

Edited by AnjaliPunia - 11 years ago

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