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Posted: 11 years ago
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prologue
Chapter -1

Rachna & Alex are on the beach with Kaira ...Kaira is playing with sand and Alex is enjoying with her ..Rachna is watching the two of them ..and wonders how cud that stupid girl leave such a man for money??

Rachna had been very close to Alex since her college days because he was the one to treat her nicely .introduce her around ..and be by her side whenever needed ..Rachna had seen Alex breaking down and then gettiing up for the sake of his daughter...though Alex's life was an open book for Rachna ..Alex didn't know much about her past accept that she sometimes in n8 got up shouting ..Don't kill them ...no don't shoot!!!!

As Rachna was lost in her thoughts she didn't notice that huge waves were coming towards her...

As they were approaching near everyone was moving away but Rachna kept sitting there ...

suddenly she felt pulled by a force which drove her 10-12 metres far ...

Rachna was shocked seeing that waves had gotten so high and then turned to see Alex looking at her angrily..

Alex: are u out of ur mind??everyone was moving away and u sat there still...wt if something wud have happened to u..

Rachna (SMILING) : nothing wud have happened Alex...

Alex(angrily): how can u say that ...u were at risk...

Rachna (moved forward and hugged him tightly): Because I know u wud be always there Alex for me..the way u have till today been...

Alex( hugged her back): what if someday I m not with u..

Rachna: that wont happen ..u cant go away from me...i will catch u and bring u back...

Alex: okay okay b..now come we need to go home...

Rachna : hmm ..ya...

On the way Rachna & Alex were stealing glances from each other...and smiled when their eyes met...

None of them were sure of their feelings...Both of them somewhere in their heart wanted to move ahead but with whom they were still not sure...

Alex used to just think Rachna as of an attraction and Rachna cud not understand why Alex was not important for her in the way the previous guys in her life were??She sometimes felt how the other guys came in her life like a storm and left like thunder...

Benaras

KT is in his office remembring his employees words who had warned him that if he didn't pay their 6 months salary they wud stop working and today nobody was at work.. and Chaya cud sense tension mounting ...but she was helpless too... she cud not do anything..

Today She went to hospital to see Dadi where she saw Dadi was being shifted from her room
Chaya( to nurse) : why are u shiftinh her1!!!
Nurse : its the doctor's orders ..
Chaya: wt ..I need to talk to the doctor...
Doctor: yes mam speak..
Chaya: doctor ..how u can be so irresponsible.. u know she is critical and she needs special care and u r shifting her to general ward..
Doctor: u must thank god!1 that we are shifting her to general ward ..or else i cud have thrown her out too..10 lakh rupee is the hospital bill ..which hasnt been paid yet
Chaya: mind ur tongue doctor...
Doctor: its too late maam
Chaya: gets her cheque book out and cuts a cheque of 10 lakh ... ..now get her back..u r getting ur money..
KT comes to the hospital with money and aska the doctor to take it and doctor says the bill has been paid by Chaya Raichand..
( chaya is a reknown writer all over the world who has written about her feminist ideas)
KT(to chaya): why did u do this..
Chaya: wt ??
KT: don't try to be innocent and don't try to interfere in mah life..u r just no one do do anything for me..
Chaya: oh!1 hello Mr. I didn't do anything for u ..I did it for my Dadi ...now stop this nonsense and leave..
KT leaves in frustration...

pRECAP: rACHNA talks to Alex about taking over Kt creations...



Chapter 2
Edited by AnjaliPunia - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Hey I'm 1st
Eagerly waiting for next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: musicgirl

wow what a twist 👏

5 years later and mature and strong Rachna now hopefully
Totally opposite now: Kabir bankrupt and Rachna successful! Can't wait for more

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its gonna be tough hard journey...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#14
AWESOME UPDATE..
CHAYA'S CHARACTER IS ERY STRONG HERE'

UPDATE SOON
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Posted: 11 years ago
#15
Oh! Rachna and Chaya both are very different girls here. Love it. You are building the story in a way, we love the alternate pairing too. Interesting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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agree with usrfan(above)...i actually like Alex i don't know y or what caught me to like the character but he's got a soft-corner in my heart...I actually wasn't resentful about picturing him & Rachana together...
& an interesting update it was! keep writing! :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#17
Very nice! I love the way you are progressing the story. There's a good balance. Please update soon :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Wow chaya's totally different here! Really tough girl..I like it
And awww cute Alex..another guy in Rachna's life now, huh? 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks for the PM dear
Great update...I like the bond btwn Rachna and Alex, but I hope it remains just friendship , coz I would love to see Rachna with Kabir
And Kabir...gosh wht to say abt him 😡...on the verge of losing everything, but still as arrogant as ever 😡...when will he finally change and accept ppl's help wholeheartedly ????

Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#20
Thanx 4 da pm.,. Stry goin superb and interstin... nxt update jaldi pweeez... eagerly waitin...😳

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