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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello RRians...
My Bro tried to write Poem on On Going Track..
I liked it so thought share it here...
Hope you'll also like...

POEM

In the far off desert on Indian land,
Situated a village surrounded by sand;

Where, a girl named Paro lived,
Whose parents in her childhood were killed;

From then, with her Mami sa her life she shared,
With the name of BSD, always she feared;

After few year, again she paid a heavy cost,
Within an hour of her marriage, her husband she lost;

In this act of play, players were controlled by Tejawat,
To reveal the truth, came a hero called Rudra Pratap Ranawat;

In his life, Rudra had lots of tears shed,
It was only childhood, when his mother fled;

Whatever the hindrances, he always did his duty,
He was always taught never to trust beauty;

Jallad was the word by which he was called,
Hateness was the pillar, around which the story rolled;

This is the most unique one in the bulk of shows,
Let's see where the story goes.


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Dear its realy super. Gud job ya
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Posted: 12 years ago
#3
Awesomesttt poem👍🏼
so well described
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it's amazing!!!
perfectly describes the storyline!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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👏👏👏 Nice poem dear..say wishes to your brother..try to encourage him ..expecting another poem ..
Edited by sree-sree - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Great job!!
Loved both this one and the HP poem.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Woww that's a solid poem n that too sums up the story really nicely.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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such a nice one! every small thing can be found der on RR...
Lets see where the story goes! 👏
Hope 2 read poem written by ur bro again 😊
thanks birdie 4 sharing wid us 🤗
Edited by Coolioqueen - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's really good, he summed up the whole show till now so well in this short poem. He is very talented.
Thank you for sharing, enjoyed reading it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb!!!! 👏I was seeing each episode through the poem. Its just Awesome. RR was well described. Fabulous. All the fans will like it 4 sure 😉
Edited by .megs. - 12 years ago

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