Swaron os:Suppressed love

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Chaitra Joshi

@-Chaitra-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: swaron9113
Amaging os.
U beautyfully write ths one too.
Do write more nd yeah aise happy ending mt dana.
U can write a lil more happy wala part in ths os.

Btw i lovd ths one.

Nd plz plz plz write one part in ths.
We wl love to read that.

thanx

and yeah next one will be more happy one😉

one more part🤔 i have no idea in store for it...but i'll surely try😊

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Simren

@DanCing_DiVa_SK

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Hey Awesum OS...beautifully penned down...Fab...loved it...please do keep writing more 😳

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austen_TanHa

@austen_TanHa

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Thanks for mentioning at the start that the end is happy coz then I didn't have to fear for her life after reading about her accident😊
Swayam was such a jack**s throughout the story although he did redeem himself somewhat towards the end.
Rey was my hero in this one though😃
You portray emotions beautifully so you stop thinking why and just keep doing it.
Good job

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Himani

@OceanicRockStar

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

wow...it was awesome...so beautiful...emotional...i just luved it!!!
after so long i read an emotional roller coaster...amazingly written
thanks for the pm
regards
himani

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Rajeshwari

@-Raj-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

Amazing nd so emotional too!!

Really well descriptions!

Finally a happy wala ending oS bY you!!

Loved it!

Ty for the PM.:)

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Lubna

@8JSmileyFace8J

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Sorry for the late comment!!!

This was a beautifully written piece or work!!!

i felt so bad for sharon!!!

she went through soomuch!!

and she still wouldn't give up on her love!!

and thank god for rey!!!

if he hadn't said all that swayam would have never understood anything!!

he deserved to feel all that guilt!!!

Awesome OS!!!

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darshita

@sweetydiyafrien

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

that was fabulous well written and amazing os... loved it...

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VAISHNAVI MURALI

@-vaishnavimural

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#28

awesome os.. loved each n every word u penned..

d whole os was soulful n beautiful..

sharon thinking abt her life how swayam hates her coz her dad n his dad for some partnership made him marry sharon...

but sharon s at no fault al she did was love swayam but he was angry coz priya who was his love s not anymore in his life n he blames sharon for it..

but priya moved on d next week itself n here sharon s waiting for 4 yrs for swayam to accept her..

rey's words n anger at swayam was well penned..

swayam understood sharon's love n s feeling guilty for treating sharon like trash instead of treating her as princess..

end was beautiful..

loved d title... if v don't get d person v love it doesn't mean life s over v ll meet some1 in future who can fill our life with colors n love n care..