Crossing Paths- FF - Chapter 7 updated pg 44 see the note there. - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: Folla

amazing update so excited to next part

Thanks a lot Folla!
I'll update soon Folla!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thank you so much Dear!😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: rachna1970

Great start kate,,,loved it
Ansh'letter was so heart touching
Waiting for aaryas meeting
Thanx for the pm

thanks a lot Rachana!
Will try to update soon dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: vinnas

hii dear just now i read this beautiful beginning of the new journey ...it looks small nd simple but it holds a large amount of needed content . i just loved it ..
ansh how cute he is longing for his father soo much nd at the same time he showed his kindness his. caring loving nature through tht essay it establishes how tht sweet angel thinks ..how beautifuly his world turns when he get his papa..
having son like him aarthi is so lucky ..
though she faces tough conditions as single parent but handle all with such care ..
she ready fr pv for ansh sake..
shobama loving mom nd fear abt thr future...
im waiting fr yash aarthi pv for this sweet angel..
waitin frwrd for next update plzz update soon dear...
precap intresting -yash ansh meet aarya first meeting...

Thanks a lot Chandu dear.
Hey you are so good in commenting.
Yes dear Ansh is longing for a father and Yash will be his light .😉
It will take time Aarya's PV as still they have not met and first Ansh has to meet Yash.
I will try to update soon Chandu dear!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Chapter 2
Aarthi's home.
"Mama today my final race. If I win that, I'll be the junior champion of the year."

"Why if beta. You are the winner. I know you'll win."

"Mama if you say so I'll win definitely."

Aarthi kissed her sweet son and left home with him.

Aarthi dropped Ansh in her scooter at school.

"Ansh, keep this money, after finishing the race if you want to eat or drink something go and buy from canteen."

"Ok ma. Thank you."
He took it and ran inside the school.
While waving at her son Aarthi put her purse inside her handbag and was about to leave when she heard someone calling her.

"Excuse me, Ma'am you dropped your purse."

She looked at the stranger who is tall and handsome and looked down to see her purse.
"Oh! Thank you."

"You are most welcome"
Saying this the stranger went inside the school with another man.

Aarthi also left for her job.

The two strangers went to the Principal's office.
" Can we come in?"

"Yes come in."

"Sir, I'm Mr. Yash Scindia and he's Mr. Pratheik"

"Oh I was waiting for you'll. Never thought you'll will come so early. Can you'll wait for few minutes. I'll do the assembly and come."

"Sure we'll wait."

"You can wait in the room there and I'll send tea for you'll."

"Ok sir"

They went out of the Principal's office and they collided with a small boy. He was sweet and fat.

"Sorry Uncle. Did you get hurt?"

"No beta and it's ok. What's your name beta?"

"I'm Ansh Dubey. What's your Uncle.?"

"I'm Yash Scindia."

Just then the morning bell rang.
"Uncle I have to go. Nice to meet you Uncle."
Saying this he ran away.

"Nice to meet you beta."

" Yash he's such a nice kid and well mannered."

"Yes Pratheik. He must have got wonderful parents to teach him all this." Said Yash.

"Come let's go and sit there Yash."

"Yes let's go."

After few minutes the Principal came to their place.

"Come I'll take you there.I'll show you the place where's you'll can build the library."

So off they went to that place with the Principal.
They passed the ground and saw students there.

"Sir, is it the sports meet? "

"No, we have some races to select the champions of the year. So all are in the ground to see who will win the championship."

"Oh!"

"This is the place Mr. Scindia I can give you'll to build a playground. Sorry this school is not a big one"

"It's ok Sir. We want to educate this children. This is our motive. We'll try to educate them with what they have."

"Thank you Mr. Scindia for understanding. I have to leave now. If you want anything contact me."

"Sure sir"

Then the Principal left them..

After a while they heard a cheering sound and they couldn't help it but look at the ground.
"Hey Yash there Ansh! He's taking part in that race."

"Yh. I want to see this now."

"Me too."

So the race began Ansh ran faster and he was in lead but alas! He fell on the ground.

"Oh no. Ansh was in lead but now???" Said Yash..

He couldn't finish his sentence as Ansh stood up again and ran and he started to lead in the race again. Ansh ran and won the race but after the race he fell down in pain.

"Ansh!! Oh no."
said Yash.

"He's a marvelous boy Yash. a child wold stop running after falling down but he didn't. He taught us a lesson too."

"Yes Pratheik. I just hope he's fine."

"I too. See teachers are taking them. We'll finish our work here and let's go and see him."

"Hmm. Yes, Prathiek I'm already in love with that boy. He's so brave.."


By the time they finished their work it was nearly afternoon. Only half and hour before the school closing time.

They were back to the room which Principal gave him they met Ansh walking with difficult.

"Ansh beta how are you? We saw your race. Why didn't you stop when you fall down? Why did you run with pain?"

"Oh Yash uncle. This was my final race and my mom says I'll win. If she says that I'm winning. Coz her blessings are with me."

"Beta your ma and pa must be proud of you. You are a brave boy."

"Uncle I want to make them proud. You know
Uncle when my mom hears that I won and I'm the Junior champion of the year she'll be happy. I want to see her happy."

"What about your papa?"

"I haven't seen him uncle. Bhagavanji took him to him when I was small as he was good. Hope he won't take my ma. She's also good. I don't want to loose her." Saying this Ansh looked down.

"No beta he won't take your ma. He knows you are good and you need her." saying this Yash hugged the little kid. Tears came rolling down in his cheeks.

Who knows how it feel of loosing parents than him.

"Beta who will come to take you now? You cannot go alone."

"Teacher said they phoned my ma. She's working in an orphanage. She says there are kids with no parents and they need there love. OH! what am I saying. Uncle she'll come to take me she will rush here when she hear that I'm hurt. She can't see in pain."

"Ok beta go and sit till your mother comes."

"Ok Uncle. You are such a nice uncle. Wish my father was with me. He would be like you."

Yash smiled at innocent Ansh.

Ansh left the place with a friend and Yash and Prathiek too.

"Poor kid Yash. He has gone through a lot in life."

" Hmm His mother has being a great support to him and he truly love his mother. Come let's go and finish our work."

"Yes let's go."

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Edited by caller123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by caller123 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
waiting dear just now finished reading chapter 1 u are updating chapter 2 wat a coincidence I'll give comment for chapter in detail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Again sorry for late comment dear Ansh essay about parents made me emotional 😭 he was longing for his father i hope he will get a caring and lovable father. Aarti is working in a orphanage to give education to the children. She agrees to do pv only for ansh sake. On the other hand yash is also from a middle class family he too has no parents living lonely in a apartment happy to see pratik is his friend waiting for ansh and yash meeting
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: caller123


Thanks a lot Chandu dear.
Hey you are so good in commenting.
Yes dear Ansh is longing for a father and Yash will be his light .😉
It will take time Aarya's PV as still they have not met and first Ansh has to meet Yash.
I will try to update soon Chandu dear!

thanq dear...
fr the maintaining good commenting me takes more time to unresrve..(wink emos)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wonderful start👏👏Its really Amazing⭐️⭐️waiting for the next update

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