First chinks in the armor !!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rudra, you and you armor. Unlike the mythological Karan of Mahabharat, you were not born with it. But have been downing this armor for so long, that now it has become a part of you. An inseperable shield! An integral part of your psyche. You have gone through great pains to make it as invincible as you are. Nothing can pierce this piece of protective covering. The slings and arrows of a cruel fate, the heartless taunts of other children, the indifferent attitude of an uncaring family, the ruthless treatment from a unforgiving father, or the judgemental and scandalous eyes of the society that have relentlessly followed you since early childhood, all have failed to go past the thick skin, the loner that you are, have developed. And can't deny you the fact that if a man has to survive all odds in an hostile environment, the faster he plates his mind, heart and soul, the better are his chances of survival.

But Rudra, may be its starting to rust now! With the passage of time and constant wear and tear, possibly its has gone thin in places? No?...Even we know that's not the reason. If not, then how come just one word from a helpless girl, went straight past all the walls and shields you had build around yourself for years, and stabbed you right in the heart? Don't deny, cause the pain was so evident in your eyes. Your eyes mirrored the agony. It hurt like hell, didn't it? You winced to the core. Just one word...Jallad! Or is it because the one who said it has started mattering to you. She has started carving a strange niche for herself. And in spite of all your heartless promises of indifference to yourself, you are drawn deeper and deeper. She has a strange hold on you, and lately you have felt that pull. You are unable to fathom the turbulence that tiny frame and those large accusing eyes are causing in your heart and mind. Her words make you bleed. The pain of that one word, lashing you more unbearably, than any weapon could. Her hatred of you, her bitter words, her burning dislike for anything Rudra, has you feeling bruised and broken all along. Always on the giving end of indifferent angst, how come you are on the receiving end of pain today? Jallad...that one word will haunt you for the rest of your life. But why? You have been called worst by many. The names you have been called in your life have been crueller, harsher and you have'nt cared a damn. If anything, they have only made you smirk with callous arrogance. Nothing has gone past your armor, ever. Then why, just one word from her, and there are chinks in your armor? Your defenses are penetrated. Rudra, watch out...you are vulnerable now!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely post :)

Yes, the first chinks in the armor for 'Jallad' Rudra! Today it was very evident that Paro's words were having some sort of impact on Rudra. The moment she called him jallad, one could see something in his eyes...it wasn't anger...it was almost as if that reference had caused a sting.

In some really strange and unexplainable manner, these two have already connected. They are bound by circumstances...fate and neither of them realise it - yet.



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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: .Wanderer.

lovely post :)

Yes, the first chinks in the armor for 'Jallad' Rudra! Today it was very evident that Paro's words were having some sort of impact on Rudra. The moment she called him jallad, one could see something in his eyes...it wasn't anger...it was almost as if that reference had caused a sting.

In some really strange and unexplainable manner, these two have already connected. They are bound by circumstances...fate and neither of them realise it - yet.



Amazing...a helpless chit of a girl, he met a day or so before, under totally unfavorable conditions, has now the power to hurt him!! Her words pained him, and how? Its so much easier to be inhuman than to be humane.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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They way described how her one word went throught that armour! Great!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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The chinks have definately started showing ...eveline😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Beautifully put eveline..!! 🤗 ❤️

He has started to get affected by Paro.. But he does'nt realize it.. Her words have started to 'mean' him somehow.. Affect him..

Nothing has gone past your armor, ever. Then why, just one word from her, and there are chinks in your armor? Your defenses are penetrated. Rudra, watch out...you are vulnerable now!!

^I loved how you wrote it..!! <33

P.S: I liked how Aman ji was smiling when our Paro baisa was going all India-has-got-talent with her singingl..!! 🤣 That scene was random but so cute..! 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Jaz1990

They way described how her one word went throught that armour! Great!

Just one word and his whole life's hard work went down the drain!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Guinea

The chinks have definately started showing ...eveline😊

Didn't expect it to be so soon 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: CandYlicious_S

Beautifully put eveline..!! 🤗 ❤️

He has started to get affected by Paro.. But he does'nt realize it.. Her words have started to 'mean' him somehow.. Affect him..

Nothing has gone past your armor, ever. Then why, just one word from her, and there are chinks in your armor? Your defenses are penetrated. Rudra, watch out...you are vulnerable now!!

^I loved how you wrote it..!! <33

P.S: I liked how Aman ji was smiling when our Paro baisa was going all India-has-got-talent with her singingl..!! 🤣 That scene was random but so cute..! 😆

🤗..u liked it??!!
He will realize it...all in good time...and the longer he takes...the more we enjoy!! But the problem might not be his...Paro Bai Sa is so going to give Rudra a run for his money...😆
ROFL...India has got talent...love that yaar...I literally laughed out loud...it was so so random yet so needed!! And loved Aman in it...Rudra na sahi...Aman hi sahi...😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yes, the first chinks of his armor are failing him. This has been building from moment they met. Now the fun begins between the two and our enjoyment begins also. Watching these two dance around each other will have all of us saying Ahhh...

Thank you eveline...

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