Alexander - Roxxane : first meet ( third part updated ) - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very smooth going, my dear Deepika. It flows like a stream, and I really enjoyed it.
So Barsine has been left on tenterhooks. Serve her right.

Once Roxanne enters the picture, and the festering anger and humiliation simmering inside Alexander are drained and healed by this unprecedented new attraction, it will be interesing to see how angry he still is with Barsine. I think the intensity of his rage will come down considerably.

Finally, the Bucephalus segment proves one thing. It is said that the way to a man's heart is thru his stomach. In Alexander's case, the way to his heart is thru his horse!😉😉😉

Shyamala Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Very nice, keep going!

Will Barsine fall in love with a brooding Alexander now? Will seeing him in a new light with Roxanne open her eyes as to what his character is really about and what opportunity she missed? 😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Barsine ka time over after roxxane's entry, she dint value time now time will not give her chance.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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It was over even before Roxana's entry. It was over the moment he realised that she had stolen his sword and set him up for public humiliation.

Shyamala Di

Originally posted by: deepikagupta9

Barsine ka time over after roxxane's entry, she dint value time now time will not give her chance.

Edited by sashashyam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: sashashyam

It was over even before Roxana's entry. It was over the moment he resreali that she had stolen his sword and set him up for public humiliation.

Shyamala Di


Not over for sure ...He will marry her for sure
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Posted: 7 years ago
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He will marry her but will not luv her like roxxane
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Yeah, Barsine will just end up as his biwi. She missed the chance to become his dil ki malika.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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part 3


Seeing Alexander leaving with bucephalus , young woman turn 2 leave but 2 her shock , Alexander was right behind her seeing him d lady starting moving back, lady was covering her face with naqaab, very nice fragnance was coming from her & only her beautiful eyes were clearly visible, it was 4 d first time Alexander was getting drawn towards a lady , Alexander was mesmerized by this young lady, seeing Alexander approaching her , d lady rise her sword 2 attack Alexander , Alexander defended himself with his sword . sword fight started b/w them with no one was ready 2 accept defeat,

who r u asked Alexander but he dint got any answer from d lady , Alexander tries 2 take off d lady's naqaab but lady was not allowing him, when suddenly Alexander heard hephaestion calling him which distracted Alexander . taking alexander's distraction as an opportunity d lady tried 2 scape but Alexander snatched her naqaab 2 see her face, lady covered her face with her hands , only her eyes were visible , lady quicly left d place .

Alexander was standing with d naqaab in his hand when hephaestion approached him , seeing sword in alexander's hand , hephaestion asked what happened, did anyone attacked , Alexander dint said anything but only smiled which shock hephaestion, Alexander says lets go . hephaestion says 2 himself this is 4 d first time I m not able 2 understand u Alexander. as they were heading towards d tent , alexander says u go hephaestion , i want 2 stay alone 4 sometime.

hephaestion says 2 alexander do u want 2 share something with me Alexander

Alexander confusedly look towards hephaestion , alex says hephaestion we knew each other from years & i will never hide anything from u , infact u will be d first person I will share my heart wish, I m perfectly fine so just relax.

Hephaestion says after that incident u hardly spoke anything , I failed in my duty , before hephaestion could complete Alexander stops him by keeping his finger on hephaestion's lips

Alexander says who said u failed or how could u think u failed ? jo bhi hua usme tumhari koi galti nhi hai aur jinki galti hai unhe mai saza de kar rhu ga, so don't blame urself. Hephaestion if u fail that means I myself failed coz u r part of my soul, so relax , u go back 2 tent , I will be back in sometimes.

After sometimes alexander return 2 his tent , he start changing his clothes , when naqaab of that young lady fell down , alexander picks d naqaab & smell it , it has d same fragnance which was surrounding that lady, alexander was not able 2 forget those beautiful eyes, he was remembering each & every moment of their encounter with a smile on his lips.


Who r u ?? Says alexander



To be continue...

Edited by deepikagupta9 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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My dear Deepika,

I specially liked it that after Alexander's first encounter with the mystery woman, who produces a never before felt reaction in him, what comes up first is the Alexander-Hephaestion relationship.
For when the identity of the veiled female is revealed, and Alexander falls for her, the person who will have to make the maximum emotional adjustment is Hephaestion.

He is used to being almost Alexander's alter ego all his life, and it must now feel strange and disorienting, and also disturbing, for him to see Alexander wanting to be alone and not share with him anything about what happened just then. He must have felt shut out, which is why he reacts by taking the blame for what happened to Bucephalus on himself.

That Alexander would immediately try to reassure him was a given, but whether Hephaestion is truly reassured is another matter. I suspect not. All his emotional antennae must be saying to him: Watch out ! Unprecedented new developments ahead!

It is good that even after Alexander married Roxanne, his unique bond with Hephaestion did not suffer. But in the beginning, it must have been tough for Hephaestion.

Nice going, my dear. Keep it up!

Shyamala Di
Edited by sashashyam - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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thnks di , but hephaestion was taking d blame of faras kand not bucephalus

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