Alexander - Roxxane : first meet ( third part updated )

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Posted: 7 years ago
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this is a story from my side about first meet of alexander & roxxane. pardon me 4 grammitical mistakes

One month later

One month is over which alexander had given 2 darius 2 surrender himself , now he had made up his mind 2 move towards bactria 2 hunt down darius . Alexander ordered cleitus & hephaestion 2 prepare d army as they have 2 leave 4 bactria. Barsine was worried about d silent treatment given by Alexander 2 her after puru & his faceoff as queen stateira had sensed d upcoming storm . Alexander arrives in barsine's room

Queen statiera welcomed Alexander but Alexander stopped her by showing his hand , he say we r leaving 4 bactria tomorrow morning so be prepared , proceeds 2 leave but barsine stops him

Shah says barsine hume aapse kuch kehna hai

Alexander stops barsine in midway by showing his hand & says tumhe jo karna tha vo tum kar chuki ho shehzadi, ab mujhe jo karna hai , mai vo karunga, by saying this he leaves d room

Next morning

Army was ready 2 leave , cleitus & hephaestion were waiting 4 d order of Alexander . he arrives with olympias , he waits 4 queen statiera , barsine & drypteis , olympias says 2 alexander there is no need 2 take barsine & company 2 bactria , u can deal with darius without them also, Alexander says barsine & company has 2 be present with me as they have 2 see what happen 2 those who dare 2 cross me . barsine & company arrives , Alexander stares them barsine says shah but before she can complete Alexander said kya hua shehzadi aaj phir aapki behan drypteis ki tabbiyat kharab ho gayi hai , fikr mat kariya mene sari tayari kar rkhi hain & point toward doctors , he ask them to get into chariot but Persian ladies stand still , olympias says we can wait 4 whole day , be quick & get into d chariot. Alexander orders his army 2 proceed.

Alexander's army finally reached d outskirts of bactria , they start setting their tents .

Alexander was sitting near d fire sharping his sword , in his mind flashbacks of puru keeping sword on his throat & barsine stealing away his sword were running . olympias & hephaestion were seeing Alexander from far even barsine was seeing Alexander from her tent was getting scarred of d upcoming consequences. Olympias says it had been one month but Alexander is still burning in fire , hephaestion says mallika even I tried 2 talk 2 him but he does want 2 talk about this matter, olympias futher says this time Alexander is not listening 2 her also even this is first time she herself is unable 2 read alexander's mind. Bucephalus his horse come close 2 alexander , seeing him alexander get happy , he caress him lovingly it seems like this time only bucephalus was able 2 read what going on his master's mind & what is he going through, apart from olympias & hephaestion , bucephalus was extremely close 2 alexander.

to be continue...
Edited by deepikagupta9 - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Really very well done, my dear Deepika! 👏I thoroughly enjoyed it.
You have got Alexander's smouldering wrath, and the sense of humiliation that is eating away at him from inside, down perfectly. And the touch of Bucephalus being the only one able to get through to him is very moving.

The same goes for his having put Barsine, so to speak, in Coventry, that means giving her the silent treatment. That too is exactly as it should be.

I am waiting for part 2.

Shyamala Di
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Posted: 7 years ago
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U r too gud deepika. Keep writing.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Awweed 👏
Continue soon.. post part 2 asap
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Bucephalus goes missing...

Alexander saw barsine peeping out of tent , he ordered his soldiers 2 stay alert all night & he retires 2 his tent but there was no sleep in alexander's eyes from past one month Alexander was not able to sleep coz puru keeping sword on his throat & barsine stealing his sword flashbacks haunts him . ye tumhe nhi karna chaiye tha shehzadi barsine says Alexander , maine tumhe aur tumhare parivar ko izzat di, jung harne ke baad bhi aur tumne mere majak bana kar rakh diya saare faras ke samane , keemat chukni paregi.

Barsine's tent

Queen statiera was pacing in d tent worriedly , she says it had been past one month but Alexander dint said a word 2 us nor did anything 2 us, drypteis agrees 2 her mother , dypteis says even his soldiers & generals also don't say or do anything 2 us. Queen stateira says barsine I m telling u alexander's silence is indication of some bigger storm 2 come in our lives , gods who will save us from him. Barsine tries 2 walk out of d tent but soldiers don't permit her , says as per alexander's order u r not allowed 2 step outside d tent , barsine returns back 2 her tent.

Next morning

Alexander's tent

Alexander was getting ready when olympias along with hephaestion enters his tent . olympias says 2 alexander it had been past one month u had not talked 2 anyone , why r u punishing all of us, what wrong did I did 2 u that u dint spoke 2 me from past one month before olympias continue , a guard arrives with a letter of darius. Seeing d letter Alexander orders hephaestion to bring barsine & company 2 his tent . Barsine & company hesitately arrives in Alexander's tent, Alexander stares barsine who avoid his stare, Olympias ask what is written in this letter & how did Darius knew we had arrived on d outskirts of bactria. Alexander said I send d final letter 2 Darius 2 surrender , so he sent his answer, Olympias says then read what is written in d letter. Alexander handover d letter 2 barsine , ask her 2 read it out loud, barsine hesitately takes d letter from Alexander & stares him, Alexander says aap dare kyu rhi shehzadi aapke hi Walid ka letter hai , read it so that we all know what darius's answer is. Barsine start reading d letter she reads that Darius is praising Alexander's bravery , again lend his hand 4 frndship by gifting him half of faras 2 rule , one third part of gold available in faras and barsine pause as suddenly a lump started forming in her throat which dint allowed her 2 read further, Alexander who was all these while was staring barsine takes letter from her hand , says I m offering my daughter barsine hand 2 u in as d part of Ur frndship, Alexander stares barsine who was looking down with tears in her eyes. Olympias ask Alexander r u ready 4 settlement, Alexander says now there is no possibility of settlement specially after what happened with me one month before while saying this he burn d letter. Alexander orders his army 2 get prepared 2 move towards Bactria, suddenly a guard comes 2 him , Alexander orders him 2 get bucephalus ready but guard kept on standing still, Alexander ask why r u standing here what's d matter.

Guard says my lord bucephalus , he paused a bit , Alexander asked what happened 2 bucephalus , guard continues that since morning bucephalus is not been seen anywhere we searched everywhere but he is not being found. Alexander shouts what an irresponsible behaviour is this !!! Hearing Alexander's scream Olympias , hephastein & cleitus came running 2 Alexander's tent. Olympias asked what happened Alexander what d matter why r u shouting like this, Alexander tells bucephalus had gone missing, he shouts that if something happened 2 my bucephalus or I don't got my bucephalus back , then I swear on zeus's name I will burn whole Bactria in ashes, he orders his soldiers 2 search in all directions , he himself go in search of bucephalus.

By mistake d rope tied 2 bucephalus was not tight , so bucephalus freed himself & went out 2 eat some fresh green leaves but he got lost , even got stuck in thorny bushes. Alexander was searching every where but he dint found his beloved bucephalus, he says where r u bucephalus plz come back , suddenly he heard d voice of his bucephalus, Alexander started walking in d direction from where d voice was coming, 2 his delight he saw his bucephalus stuck in thorny bushes , Alexander proceed towards him but stopped in his track as he saw a young lady was helping his bucephalus 2 comeout of thorny bushes, finally she succeed 2 help bucephalus , while coming out of thorny bushes bucephalus got hurt on his legs, d lady tore a piece of cloth from her dress & covered bucephalus's wound with it, she was luvingly caressing bucephalus , but she sensed someone presence so she immediately left d place, Alexander could not see d lady's face but was thankful 2 her 4 helping bucephalus. Alexander was happy 2 get his bucephalus back , he says I was so afraid that I lost u , don't u dare go away from me , he caress him luvingly, touched d cloth which was tied by that young lady. Alexander with bucephalus start proceeding towards his tent unaware of that 2 beautiful eyes were watching him .



To be continued,...






Edited by deepikagupta9 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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If they go by history she will try to kill Alexander on first meet and again try to kill him on their second meet😆
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Wah👏 couldn't wait to read about their face to face confrontation. Will Alex be enthralled by the beautiful Roxana?? Or would he rather be attracted to her fiery personality😳
Will Roxana try to kill him?, It would be such a treat to read about it.
Btw, thanks for the pm 😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Excellent work dear..👏. Plz write something about anu bamni also. I just luv them.
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Originally posted by: DoodieMoodie

Wah👏 couldn't wait to read about their face to face confrontation. Will Alex be enthralled by the beautiful Roxana?? Or would he rather be attracted to her fiery personality😳

Will Roxana try to kill him?, It would be such a treat to read about it.
Btw, thanks for the pm 😊


She will try to kill him and he will be enthralled...But I expect porus to interfere 😆
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New news has updated.. Plz vote and comment everyone.

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