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anoosree

@anoosree

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

I just don't understand the reason behind this mindless rushing...yesterdays episode was an absolute mess...not able to enjoy the scenes, they are jumping from scene to scene...koyee be scenes meh teharav nahi hai...don't know whether it's the PA team or the channel, but this mad rush is spoiling the show...like in a single episode, Pooja got reconciled, Supriya got manipulated, naina landed in mama's home, Pooja felt guilty hurting Naren. Naren convinces the family for a mela, he sets the mela and Pooja got kidnapped also.

What on earth. This entire happening could have been easily explored and presented in an interesting way over at least few episodes. They took the trouble of setting such s huge mela, and the entire sequence didn't last even for a minute. Two line song at the BG and the entire mela is over...Did they even watch the episode before presenting...it's not like they didn't shoot enough scenes...in offscreen segments, we did see few things, which were not shown in the show at all, like, Pooja, twirling with Surbhi, the entire family dancing and clicking pics, Pooja dancing with Harish & Naren dancing with a reluctant Supriya.

I noticed, right after Pooja's grihpravesh they seem to be in a marathon, they could have easily stretched Naren Pooja dream scenes, it was so beautiful, but it didn't last for 30s...similarly Pooja feeling guilty and trying to nurse Naren, again a sequence which could have been explored well and the entire mela could have been easily presented in couple of episodes,

Whoever is responsible for this, pls relax, slow down the pace, when the story is rushed, the presentation looks disjointed and scenes are not enjoyable. We don't want to see many things in a single episode, I am sure that won't bring Trps either.

Yesterday's episode was a huge disappointment in terms of presentation...

Edited by anoosree - 7 years ago

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sree.gattu

@sree.gattu

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Posted: 7 years ago

you're right anoosree , everything hurry . actually Kapoor also entered into Narja's life as mamaji's friend whom Pooja going to trust and make friendship with him . Kapoor not going to leave the show now . I think this track to go for 2 - 3 months . I think they hurry to make Kapoor and naina in Narja's life to create problems for Naren bymanupilating Pooja . so that Naren or supriya send Pooja to mental asylum and mental asylum asli haqdaar Kapoor , Pooja ko le jaye . enemies ke saath saath apne bhi ,supriya bhi making life hell of Naren instead of helping and being strebgth of him . akela Naren fighting and should fight from now onwords .

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Serenity05

@Serenity05

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Posted: 7 years ago

Well, I'm resigning myself to watching with increased detachment. Kapoor is being extra disgusting with the unneccessary touching, hugging, and hand kissing. He never behaved like this when Pooja could defend herself, only now that she is in this state of an innocent child. Ugh.

And Naina's antics will be coming up soon. This track will be particularly unpleasant for me. I long to see Narja fighting off enemies together instead, since there has to be so much evil around them.

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Silvy

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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Serenity05
Well, I'm resigning myself to watching with increased detachment. Kapoor is being extra disgusting with the unneccessary touching, hugging, and hand kissing. He never behaved like this when Pooja could defend herself, only now that she is in this state of an innocent child. Ugh.

And Naina's antics will be coming up soon. This track will be particularly unpleasant for me. I long to see Narja fighting off enemies together instead, since there has to be so much evil around them.

Iam Disappointed Too. Iam Not Enjoying Kapoor and Naina Tracks Either.
Want Narja Fighting The Ememies.

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anoosree

@anoosree

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Honestly I don't have any issues, how they spin the story or how many villains they bring, in fact the villains create the drama, the more drama the villains create, the more scope to show the protagonist in a positive light. My issue is with the pace. Looks like they are caught into the mindless Trp game and compromising with the quality of the show.

Unlike other shows, PA never rushed to romantic tracks to garner Trps, their strength was a solid plot presented in an intense & logical way...they build the characters steadily, the episodes used ooze with emotions of the characters. When we watch the episodes, we feel with the characters and used to look forward for the next episode. No matter how negative characters used to thrive, still positivity used to shine. We saw the transition of Naren, from malanga, to a romantic lover , to a responsible person, to a anti hero, to a passionate lover perfectly supported by solid story told in a steady pace...same applicable to Pooja too, from a lively girl, to a matured friend, lover, to a strong wife and today to a 8 yrs kid, all had its own reasons, but the reasons stayed with us coz it was presented in a beautiful way slowly and steadily, viewers were given time to understand the characters and their transition from what they were to what they became with the drama unraveling steadily at the background. But now drama has taken a forefront and characters have taken a back foot.

Story telling is an art, any story when it's told in such way that the plot and its characters lingers on to the mind of viewers even after the show is over, then naturally the viewers will get hooked to the show and will want to see more...which will translate to Trps... the plot lingers only when the characters lingers, that's exactly how, PA was presented all these days, that's why the Trps though didn't shoot up all of a sudden, still it was gathering viewers in a slow and steady pace, but now once they crossed 2+, they are trying to focus only on the drama to increase the viewership and rushing with the storytelling. Result, the emotions which could be presented in a couple of minutes is shown in 30s, kyuki they are in a hurry to show the next and as a viewer, neither I am able to connect to the characters nor with the happenings.

Next is with the positivity & negativity, there should be a balance between them, like in a 20 minute slot, 19 minutes we see negativity thrive and positive things don't get even 30s screen space, example, so much time was spent on showing how aggressive Pooja got with Naren, but when it came to her realization, again wrapped it in less than 30s...why...I am not saying fill the episodes with nice scenes, but my question is why not explore nice & cute scene the same way you explore the negative scene, like planning, plotting, hurting...

Let's understand people don't watch the show to see negativity thrive, they watch to see how ultimately positivity wins no matter how much negativity thrives. The reasons the shows Trps got boosted when Naren gets to know the truth and we get to see some positivity in the life's of the leads irrespective of all the planning & plotting happening behind their back...I don't know whether I have made sense, but whatever I wanted to say, I said..I rest it with the CVs now

It's ok if the Trps dip by one or two points or the show is out of top 10. It just doesn't matter to the regular viewers..Don't compromise with the quality, it won't fetch Trps, rushing with the story telling will definitely not help...might just end up tiring the existing viewers.

Sorry for the long post...

Edited by anoosree - 7 years ago

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anoosree

@anoosree

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: Serenity05
Well, I'm resigning myself to watching with increased detachment. Kapoor is being extra disgusting with the unneccessary touching, hugging, and hand kissing. He never behaved like this when Pooja could defend herself, only now that she is in this state of an innocent child. Ugh.

And Naina's antics will be coming up soon. This track will be particularly unpleasant for me. I long to see Narja fighting off enemies together instead, since there has to be so much evil around them.

I can understand your detachment, even I am not able to connect with characters after the bidayee episode.

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sree.gattu

@sree.gattu

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: anoosree
Honestly I don't have any issues, how they spin the story or how many villains they bring, in fact the villains create the drama, the more drama the villains create, the more scope to show the protagonist in a positive light. My issue is with the pace. Looks like they are caught into the mindless Trp game and compromising with the quality of the show.

Unlike other shows, PA never rushed to romantic tracks to garner Trps, their strength was a solid plot presented in an intense & logical way...they build the characters steadily, the episodes used ooze with emotions of the characters. When we watch the episodes, we feel with the characters and used to look forward for the next episode. No matter how negative characters used to thrive, still positivity used to shine. We saw the transition of Naren, from malanga, to a romantic lover , to a responsible person, to a anti hero, to a passionate lover perfectly supported by solid story told in a steady pace...same applicable to Pooja too, from a lively girl, to a matured friend, lover, to a strong wife and today to a 8 yrs kid, all had its own reasons, but the reasons stayed with us coz it was presented in a beautiful way slowly and steadily, viewers were given time to understand the characters and their transition from what they were to what they became with the drama unraveling steadily at the background. But now drama has taken a forefront and characters have taken a back foot.

Story telling is an art, any story when it's told in such way that the plot and its characters lingers on to the mind of viewers even after the show is over, then naturally the viewers will get hooked to the show and will want to see more...which will translate to Trps... the plot lingers only when the characters lingers, that's exactly how, PA was presented all these days, that's why the Trps though didn't shoot up all of a sudden, still it was gathering viewers in a slow and steady pace, but now once they crossed 2+, they are trying to focus only on the drama to increase the viewership and rushing with the storytelling. Result, the emotions which could be presented in a couple of minutes is shown in 30s, kyuki they are in a hurry to show the next and as a viewer, neither I am able to connect to the characters nor with the happenings.

Next is with the positivity & negativity, there should be a balance between them, like in a 20 minute slot, 19 minutes we see negativity thrive and positive things don't get even 30s screen space, example, so much time was spent on showing how aggressive Pooja got with Naren, but when it came to her realization, again warapped it in less than 30s...why...I am not saying fill the episodes with nice scenes, but my question is why not explore nice & cute scene the same way you explore the negative scene, like planning, plotting, hurting...

Let's understand people don't watch the show to see negativity thrive, they watch to see how ultimately positivity wins no matter how much negativity thrives. The reasons the shows Trps got boosted when Naren gets to know the truth and we get to see some positivity in the life's of the leads irrespective of all the planning & plotting happening behind their back...I don't know whether I have made sense, but whatever I wanted to say, I said..I rest it with the CVs now

It's ok if the Trps dip by one or two points or the show is out of top 10. It just doesn't matter to the regular viewers..Don't compromise with the quality, it won't fetch Trps, rushing with the story telling will definitely not help...might just end up tiring the existing viewers.

Sorry for the long post...

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Serenity05

@Serenity05

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

👏... you expressed my own feelings perfectly, anoosree. I totally agree, and it wasn't too long at all.

sree.gattu added even more valid points and expressed my gratitude perfectly, too. 😆

Nothing left for me to say, I hope the writers will do something to correct this problem soon.

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anoosree

@anoosree

Voyager

Posted: 7 years ago

Sree.gattu let them create as much problems for Naren as possible, he is going to handle them, we already know that because this is his redemption track, but not all villains have to act simultaneously. You have rightly said, what their intentions are, but frankly speaking by turning all odds against Naren, creating so much negativity around him, if they think I will feel sympathetic towards Naren, then I am sorry, I feel nothing for Naren right now, all I feel is irritated with the negativity. I felt more for Naren's miseries in the previous track when he was ill treating Pooja than this track. Because inspite of his disgusting behavior, efforts were equally put to show what trauma he was going through. For me to feel for Naren, I need to see his emotions, but all I get to see is drama set on bullet speed...show kab shooru ho raha hai kab katham ho raha hai, patha hee nahi chaltha aur show ke bad kuch yaad bee nahi rehetha...

These guys are so keen on showing actions now that they just forgot to show the emotions that leads to the very actions...

Previous track was so emotionally loaded that, I used to feel heavy after watching each and every episode, Pooja & Naren's pain used to touch my heart. So felt that a somewhat light drama might feel nice. Yaha to heavy ya light feel karna tho dhoor, kuch feel hi nahi ho raha hai.

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Serenity05

@Serenity05

Beginner

Posted: 7 years ago

#10

You've hit the nail on the head as usual, anoosree. Right now I'm feeling that same detachment from the characters emotionally, too. And your explanation just made me realise more fully why that is so. Thank you.

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