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Ameres

@Ameres

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#1171

Mimi- ROFL! You are right about that there is nothing left to imagination now. A indeed got his way with her. But still you know its the start so a bit of hide and seek game maybe fun. 😉😆

Oh God! Mimi you do the best analysis. Yes, I didnt think about it but as always spot on. That s****r was a class apart. Literally! 🤣

@Update- I was thinking I'll post the first few parts here. Not so long waise hi. But yeah after wale ahem...that would be exclusive PM. ☺️

And dont hope too much. There isn't a jealous Abhay in there. I mean the reason is used to build the plot. I have tried to incorporate a sadu Abhay but dont know how it has turned out to be. Sorry in advance because I know its not what you want. There is no jealous scenes.

I hope Ami turns up. ;(

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mimi_s

@mimi_s

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1172

I love sadu Abhay...I will love what ever u write...and yes lets hope Ami turns up fr an hour...PLS post the update if its ready...😊

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mimi_s

@mimi_s

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1173

ok Anu... will go nw😊...will b back later...hop Ami turns up...and also others...😊...r u planning to post the first part today???

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Ameres

@Ameres

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#1174

Mimi check your dabba. 😛

Edited by Ameres - 13 years ago

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mimi_s

@mimi_s

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1175

Anu...honestly...excellent work👏👏...U r spot on with the charector...Abhay the kind of person he is...wouldnt have tolerated Ps intimacy with a dashing guy like A...and that also when he has reasons to believe that he is being neglected...and p is also spot on...but thora zyaada naraz ho gayi who...my poor A...😭...actually she is taking one step at a time...step 1...same room step 2...same b**...OMG she has actually taken 2 steps at a time...A dont loose hope...u r on the rite track...😆

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Ameres

@Ameres

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#1176

Did I tell you how much I love you oh here I say again, I LOVE YOU!! 🤗

Honestly the only reason I'm writing this is because I know chahe jo bhi ho there are two people who will be there to read no matter what. And that is good enough for me. :)

Gawd! We are still on this AT?!!!

We need to finish it. :/

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Ameres

@Ameres

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#1177

And oh thank you so much for that idea! :D

Dont laugh but I'm kind of superstitious when it comes to a few things. Not always but at times, so like I'm stuck on page 13 and i was trying hard to make it longer but nothing was coming to mind. But now i'm gonna write about that and make it longer. So thanks! ;D

Edited by Ameres - 13 years ago

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Ameres

@Ameres

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#1178

And yeah yeah, you can grill here as much as you want. No issues! 😆

But hamara aaj ka bakra kahan hai??

Ami! Come please! ;((

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mimi_s

@mimi_s

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1179

Anu...bakri ka patta nehi...but kasai is here😃😆...I know u r a bit superstitious...and u have an uncanny sixth sense...😉...remember when u were nt feeling ...rite...we were all worried abt the traingle ...bt something else wasbothering u...and we gt the news of the serial going off air......glad to b of some help...actually I am saying all this so that ...I gt a glimpse of my J Abhay...😊...but u pls write what u feel fits in well ...dont have to include whatever I say...😊

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mimi_s

@mimi_s

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#1180

Anu...u gt to make the new AT yaar...its pg 149..nw...and since u have already reached pg 13...thats a wow...itsa looonnnggg update...😊...love u...😉...gosh Ami come fast...then only we will let u go early...😃

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