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Ameres

@Ameres

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

Ok i now this wont be happening today at all but since i had written so i might as well post it. And we might get to see something like this in the future. Hope! :)

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Well this will take place after Abhay-Phulwa are returning home from the party. As they are alone this time so i assuming Abhay will be driving with Phulwa next to him. So Abhay is driving with eyes straight ahead with Phulwa staring out of the window thinking about all the sweet moments they shared in the party. (Yes assume yeh sab hua :P) In between stealing glances at Abhay. The awkward silence is making them both uneasy yet they are too stubborn to say anything. Suddenly the car breaks down.

Phulwa looks at him about to ask what happened when Abhay steps out without a word to check the car. He opens the bonnet and burns his finger a bit. He grunts and curses saying 'Yahi hona tha. Jab Phulwajee saath hoon tu aur kya hoga.'

Then he looks up to see Phulwa standing right there with a slight miffed expression but she doesnt say anything. Abhay too doesnt say anything and again starts checking the car. (since i have zero knowledge about cars so im assuming it just needed some water for it got heated.)

Abhay asks himself: 'Ab itni raat ko pani kahan se laon woh bhi yahan.' They are stranded in the middle of a sun san road with jungle around.

He is still thinking over these lines when he notices that Phulwa is not there. He looks around but she is nowhere to be seen. He gets worried and starts calling her name but gets no reply. Now extremly tensed and worried for Phulwa he starts running in the forest still calling her name. When suddenly he sees her walking through the thick branches.

He rushes forward and grabs her by shoulder and starts saying 'Kahan chali gayi thi? Koi aise bina batey jata hai? Janti ho yeh jungle kitna khatarnak hai? Kuch ho jata tu?'

Phulwa keeps looking at him with doe eyes unable to speak as she too surprised to see his concern for her. Finally she manages to say 'Woh mein...pani lene gayi thi..' (Assumption: Since Phulwa has lived in the kabila for so long and roamed in the adjacent jungles so im assuming she knew where to find some water.)

Abhay looks down to see Phulwa holding a bottle of water. Realizing that he is still holding her he lets go off her quickly and moves back. 'Oh huh ok.'

He takes the bottle and starts to move out of the jungle surprised at him self for showing such concern for her. Phulwa slowly follows him out too dazed at what just had happened.

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vita93

@vita93

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

Haye mera jaan, that was too good! (And unlike the CVs you actually bothered to explain why on earth Phulwa seems to how to do everything👏)

I'm so hoping this really happens!!!!:D And and when they're walking back, we hear ORP in the background...😍

And your dialogues! Haha Abhay's sooo expected to say all of this! (Sunte sunte hum bhi dialogue expert ban gaye😆)

Aww Abhayjee's cute concerned expressions!!! For a moment he totally forgot she's a dacoit and only remembered she's his biwi:D:D

I WANT THIS HAPPENING CVS WHERE ARE YOU (and elaborate on the meethi meethi pal please I need to see them too😆)

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vita93

@vita93

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Originally posted by: Ameres
Ok i now this wont be happening today at all but since i had written so i might as well post it. And we might get to see something like this in the future. Hope! :)
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Well this will take place after Abhay-Phulwa are returning home from the party. As they are alone this time so i assuming Abhay will be driving with Phulwa next to him. So Abhay is driving with eyes straight ahead with Phulwa staring out of the window thinking about all the sweet moments they shared in the party. (Yes assume yeh sab hua :P) In between stealing glances at Abhay.
Aww they're probably stealing glances at one another assuming the other one doesn't know:) How shweet!
The awkward silence is making them both uneasy yet they are too stubborn to say anything. Suddenly the car breaks down.

Phulwa looks at him about to ask what happened when Abhay steps out without a word to check the car. He opens the bonnet and burns his finger a bit. He grunts and curses saying 'Yahi hona tha. Jab Phulwajee saath hoon tu aur kya hoga.'
Aww mera bechara ladka, once again he hurts his finger:( Can totally imagine Abhay saying so😆

Then he looks up to see Phulwa standing right there with a slight miffed expression but she doesnt say anything. Abhay too doesnt say anything and again starts checking the car. (since i have zero knowledge about cars so im assuming it just needed some water for it got heated.)

Abhay asks himself: 'Ab itni raat ko pani kahan se laon woh bhi yahan.' They are stranded in the middle of a sun san road with jungle around.
YAY SUN SAN ROAD! Everything and anything happens on a lonely, deserted road...😍

He is still thinking over these lines when he notices that Phulwa is not there. He looks around but she is nowhere to be seen. He gets worried and starts calling her name but gets no reply. Now extremly tensed and worried for Phulwa he starts running in the forest still calling her name.
Wowee I want to see him running and being extra concerned! Kitni acche patinohodey :')
When suddenly he sees her walking through the thick branches.
He rushes forward and grabs her by shoulder and starts saying 'Kahan chali gayi thi? Koi aise bina batey jata hai? Janti ho yeh jungle kitna khatarnak hai? Kuch ho jata tu?'
Haye! (By now I'm probably biting into my pillow trying hard not to run over to the tv screen and kiss his face for his sudden overwhelming mounds of concern)

Phulwa keeps looking at him with doe eyes unable to speak as she too surprised to see his concern for her. Finally she manages to say 'Woh mein...pani lene gayi thi..' (Assumption: Since Phulwa has lived in the kabila for so long and roamed in the adjacent jungles so im assuming she knew where to find some water.)
(I'm assuming her saree gave her absolutely no problems since she's obviously been born wearing designer sarees)

Abhay looks down to see Phulwa holding a bottle of water. Realizing that he is still holding her he lets go off her quickly and moves back. 'Oh huh ok.'
He takes the bottle and starts to move out of the jungle surprised at him self for showing such concern for her. Phulwa slowly follows him out too dazed at what just had happened.
Sho shweet!🤗

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Ameres

@Ameres

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Aww thank youuu! 🤗

I guess hum ek dosre ke future stories padh ke hi khush hote rahe gein. 🤣

Khair thanks for liking yaar! :D Though all my explanations and scenes are based on assumptions. Lol. But still would love to see something similar. Just wish they would start showing Abhays concern more for her.

@Run to tv- Hahaha! You are not alone if i see something like this even i would be running to hug my tv! 😆

Honestly tab kya even now when i see any of their cute scenes or Abhay giving those sweet looks i feel like pulling him out of the tv screen and giving him a bear hug. Lol. :P

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vita93

@vita93

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

AAAHHH today's episode totally upped all our stories yaar, hasi mazak rona regret - everything all in one shot??

So sorry about the dance party meri dost, seems like they got dolled up only for her to come down the stairs (and the random western dress portion).

CAN I PLEASE GO WRITE A STORY FROM THE PRECAP?? Pretty please the precap has thrown in so much potential I'm gonna cry right now.

And watching Abhay walk down the streets barefoot and without his clothes is so sad because he looks so bechara man I wanna drive down to them right now (I can't drive) and pick them up and send them to the hospital straight away!😭

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Ameres

@Ameres

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

True yaar CVs ne ek hi jhatke mein sad dey diya.

Yeh tha zor ka jhatka, zoron se laga. But is jhatke mein bahot maza aya! 🤣

Yes that one complaint i have that they totally ruined the new expensive tux!! :P

@Story- Naiki aur poch poch? Go write it down now!! And post it soon. ;)

True precap was very saddening. I'm still shocked to see it. Abhay ki halat dekh kar tu even i felt like crying. Too painful. 😆

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vita93

@vita93

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

@Precap - Kapre kahan? Jute kahan? HE WAS AT HOME. Sigh I guess his concern for Phulwa was so overwhelming the first thing he thought of was to pick her up and run off into the streets (looking like some chawlwala with no paisa). Ambulance bulata!😒

Sigh what to say. Phulwako behosh dekhliya aur khudki hosh ud gayi. I think he fell in love with her 10 times in that car pakka.

I can only lol at the thakur at this point in time. His plan didn't just failed, it maha failed😆

Sigh all I'm doing is rewatching the episode again!

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vita93

@vita93

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

So I was thinking of writing something on the precap, but on second thought I realised it's really too difficult to come up something...they could make it seem not as serious, or they could blow the whole thing out of proportion.

Personally I'd rather they not too overdo the track too much because there's really a long way to go still. And oooh is this the foreshadowed situation where Abhay's saving his marriage (by saving her)??😃 Phulwa's saved his life once, it's nice to see him return the favour.

Anyhow I thought that once she's conscious, they could play out a small cutesy scene. Phulwa's burnt her arm quite badly, so I'm guessing it'll be bandaged up and she'll have trouble doing things. The doctor tells Abhay that her jewellery has to be removed in to prevent infection or hurting or whatever. He's helping her take off her bangles when she winces slightly, so he looks on in concern and blows on her arm (super concerned face by now). After the bangles, he slowly takes off her earrings and other random things like her ring and they're playing ORP in the back as a random wind floats in from nowhere.

He's about to remove her necklace when she suddenly grabs his arm to stop him. He's puzzled and she looks away and replies, "Yeh aapke pehna huya mangalsutra hain" and he looks down and realises so. "Isse aap mat utariye" and they lock eyes while he gives a small smile.

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Ameres

@Ameres

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

@ambulance- Exactly!! why didnt he do that? But like you said he must have been so worried that didnt think properly and just did what he thought was right.

@love- Sigh...dont know about them but i know i fell in love with them and Abhay all over again. 😍

@hospital scene- That makes perfect sense! They should show some scene like this. Clearly she is so hurt and there is no one around to help her. So its Abhays duty to help her in every way. I love to his concern and care for her. 😳

And the mangalsutar dialogue is super cute. I wish they show something like this that would highlight the importance of marriage in their lives so even Abhay would realize it. Really i wish CVs borrow your brain for a day or two. lol.

Beautifully described!

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vita93

@vita93

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

@Love - I know just what you mean...it was almost as if I was with them in the car, laughing away...I don't know about you but the scenes almost seemed as though I was actually in there with them experiencing every thing they were experiencing along the way😍

And Abhay...how do you not fall in love with him!

@Hospital scene - Aww thank you so much!🤗

With Phulwa being hurt there's so much potential for anything to happen since we've come to realise that it's usually Abhay who starts off some romantic mood and Phulwa who tries to kill it - and now she can't!😆

Oooh maybe he'll ask her what she was doing in the kitchen in the first place, and she tells him she was making food for him and then he feels bad and becomes even sweeter towards her:D

But seriously, I'd rather he go get some proper clothes once he's pakka she's ok - burnt Phulwa + bechara Abhay = recipe for tears:(