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Posted: 10 years ago
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😊 Ronit, amazing chapter 3, another big secret, Wow David"s mother is full of
surprises. Can't wait to know the other "big secret ". Thank you Ronit. 🤗
Edited by Sandy66 - 10 years ago
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Oh sandy i m so happy that you are reading and liking chapters 2 and 3, em sure you will like the way the story is progressing :)
yes secret is there and slowly you will know it
keep reading and commenting , i love reading them 😃👏
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😊 Beautifully written chapter 4 Ronit. Loved how the story is progressing. Everyone is in
total disbelief and shocked after hearing the secret. Sometimes secret can destroyed a Family.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter . Thank you RONIT. 🤗
Edited by Sandy66 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sandy66

😊 Beautifully written chapter 4 Ronit. Loved how the story is progressing. Everyone is in
total disbelief and shocked after hearing the secret. Sometimes secret can destroyed a Family.
Looking forward to reading the next chapter . Thank you RONIT. 🤗


i feel so happy that you are liking the story so far, em sure u will like the rest of it as well,
i will soon share the next chapter here :)
its not easy to know such thing, to know that the woman u were thinking is your mother is no longer your mom, your life changed overnight hearing such thing
thank u for your comments, keep reading and reviewing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello all,
thanks for reading and appreciating my story,
i hope you will like the rest of the story
here comes the 5th chapter



Chapter 5

"Its already 9 pm and mom is still sleeping??" said Sigal, "how can it be? She never sleeps at this time, I am sure she must be very tired" said Moti.

Just then they heard Velga calling Sigal's name,

David said - "Sigal , I think mom is awake now, go and help her in cooking:"

Sigal said - "okay bro"

Sigal went out, closed the door after her and replied her mom, "yes mom I m coming" she went to the kitchen and started helping her mom in cutting the vegetables.

Sigal - "mom, hello good evening , I was going to wake you up"

Velga - " I saw you kids busy so went in and got fresh, just came in here to cook dinner for us, how was your day sweety?"

Sigal - "mom, it was so cool, I enjoyed it allot"

Velga - "good, did you both finish your homework?"

Sigal -"yes mom, we did it, bro helped us and we had good time" , "mom how was your trip? I came and saw you were sleeping that's why we did not disturb you"

Velga - "yeah it was a long day and I was tired, by the way did your dad call ?"

Sigal - "no"

Just then they heard the knock on the door,

Moti went to open the door and saw his dad, he hugged him and said "hey dad how are you, I missed you today", Eli hugged him back, he saw Velga coming out of the kitchen and ignored her, he was walking inside the kids room and sigal followed him, "hey daddy" she hugged him and all 3 went inside the room.

Velga stood there, staring after them; few seconds later she realized her food is burning so went inside the kitchen to check it.

David saw his dad coming, he said nothing but his eyes could simply tell he had allot of questions, both behaved like nothing happened and spent the time with the kids.

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At Aharon House:

Tanya came back from work, Daniel and Sima already at home, Mor went out to spend the evening with her friends, Mike had some work to do so he spent the evening alone in his room.

Tanya entered her parents room and said.

Tanya - "Mom, what's going on, I spoke to mike this evening and he told me , that woman..." She was about to continue and Daniel interrupted her...

Daniel - "Tanya, I can guess Mike told you everything so chill, it happens, we are rich people and such rumors are not to be trusted so don't trust those words okay, just relax"

Tanya -"But dad"

Daniel - "Ssshh,, Listen, I don't know who come up with such story, I do not believe it, you too should not believe it, if you'll believe it, what will mike think tell me ?"

Sima - "Dani, we cannot sit back and wait for it to be solved, we must do something,"

Daniel - "Don't worry, I m not sleeping in my duty, I said wait one week, Let that woman deal with her mother loss and then we will go and meet her so we can deal with the issue of our son,"

Sima - "Oh, you were thinking that, "

Daniel - "Yes, I was thinking to go meet that woman, so we can start from the bottom of this issue, we cannot sit back and blame each other for nothing."

Tanya - "alright dad, when you go, I'll come with you"

Daniel - "No Tanya, I can deal with that issue, for now I guess you all should relax, look at your brother and sister, both are ignoring those things so we too should be relaxed but don't worry I'm handling it okay"

Sima - "I guess he is rite"

Daniel - "Well, listen, you two have your dinner, I have to go to the club, my friends are waiting for me, Tanya , you too go out and chill out a lil"

Sima - "Okay, I guess ill have dinner alone tonight"

Daniel- "why alone, Mike is there, you can have a nice time with him"

Sima - "I wonder why every Sunday you spend your time with your friends, I feel alone here, don't you know that?"

Daniel - "ofo, don't be a baby now, I m sure you will have a nice time spend time with Mike"

Daniel went to get ready to go out, Tanya said "Yeah mom, I wanted to cancel my friends meeting tonight but I think now I feel much better so ill go out okay, hope you'll have a great time with mike"

Both Daniel and Tanya went out, Sima remained alone with Mike, she went to his room to call him for dinner,

Sima - "Hey mike, Are you busy ?"

Mike - "Oh no mom, I was just surfing the net, come inside, told you don't ask permission to come in my room"

Sima - "well your dad and both your sisters are out and I was wondering if u join me for dinner"

Mike - "Oh no mom, my friend will come any time, ill have my dinner with him, I have ordered pizza , if u want you can have some, "

Sima - "No, then its fine,ill eat in my room, you carry on"

Mike - "Mom, he will come in 1 hour, you can sit here and talk to me, Actually that thing about my being switched in my childhood is irritating me, I was searching people's stories over the net who got switched in their childhood, but mom, most of them discovered by their parents, I mean, some were not look alike their parents, and some parents realized that child is not their , you know , that clears all my doubts, because I look alike daddy and you guys never felt I was stranger,"

Sima - "yeah that's so true, I spoke to your dad earlier and he said that it can be someone who wants to take advantage on us and just because we are rich, may be... you know.."

Mike - "Yeah mom, actually that woman, I mean that who claims to be my mother, I doubt her motives, may b she is lying, I mean think of it, her husband was there he knew nothing, he did not move, you did not move, but her reaction that day made me feel like... Yeah maybe it's the biggest lie, but mom, why would a dying woman say such a lie ?"

Sima - "yeah I had the same question son, but your dad say that people at times can do anything for money, just ignore it and live your life" the Knock on the door interrupted their talk, sima said -"One hour already passed, how the time passed, I did not realize"

Mike said - "yeah so true, mom, you should come here sit with me, we can spend hours in talking"

Sima - "yeah so true, Oh go and open the door, we cannot make the guest wait outside the house."

Mike went to open the door, Sima left the room, she had to spend the evening alone,After dinner she went to her room, sat with her self-thinking about the things.

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At goenka's

The dinner was over, kids in their room, Velga and Eli in their room,

In velga's room-

Velga - "what are you doing , where are you going eli>?"

Eli -"listen, I have nothing to talk to you , just let me be okay"

Velga - "this is not done, you ignored me all evening, what's wrong with you>?"

Eli - "What's wrong with me, Do you have any shame velga??"

Velga- "what are you saying, I thought you forgave me"

Eli - "really, I forgave you,?", At times Velga, you cross your limits and your know you did the wrong thing, You switched the kids, hide this truth and now, you have no shame , rite , you think like I m gonna sleep near you and move on like nothing happened, really ?"

Velga - "then why didn't you yell at me when I opened up in front of you when we were outside near the car:"

Eli - :"oh you expected me to shout, to yell at you to show all the neighbors that we have an issue, it was our family issue and I don't want to make it a drama to all people, got it?"

Velga - "I m so sorry, I had to do it."

Eli - "really you had to do it, fine, you did what you did, now let me do what I do, I have nothing else to say, no more excuses because I was alive I was there for you for our baby but what you did??????????"

Velga with tears in her eyes said - "Eli, I m really sorry, I was silly I was idiot, I shouldn't do that but what can be done now please forgive me"

Eli -:"wow Velga, I cannot believe you, you make mistakes, I always forgive you and we move on, but this this, this is not a mistake velga, this is crime, R you getting it?? It's a crime, you switched the baby, you switch the baby whom you gave birth without thinking how will they raise him, what kind of parents they would be and worse than that you dared to make me be a part of your sick thing, you wanted me to hide this from David, tomorrow when he will come to ask me, how would I face him, you made me look very bad in front of my son, a son I raised, a son I teach to walk to write to eat to do every single thing. No Velga I will not forgive you, you have hurt my feelings, my emotions and now by locking my mouth , sorry sorry really sorry Velga but you have hurt me allot, I love you and always will do but No ...GO and seek forgiveness from our son, oh sorry, their son, I m going to sleep in other room, you always think you are smart, you do things your way only so deal with it.

He was about to leave the room and says - "Listen, I want you to keep it hidden from Sigal and Moti, they are innocent, this will destroy their life, thinking that David is not their brother, They would not know how to deal with it, so keep your mouth shut and don't expect me to forgive you, !!"

Eli left the room, David heard his parents voices, he came out and saw his daddy walking out of their room, his dad had no more words, David realized it was not the right time to speak to his dad, who always used to be calm, looked so upset so mad, Eli touched david's head and went inside the other room, David walked back to his room , trying to live with the new facts, "he was not their son, why, why it happened to him?"
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this story is like ek hasina hai :))full of secret
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Originally posted by: Smarte

this story is like ek hasina hai :))full of secret


😆 thank u thank u ... 😛
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my lazy readers
where are u all...
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readers
where are you all ???????????????????????
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i got only 1 like from mansi so i shall take it as she is the only one who read chapter 5
ill post the 6th chapter
where are my readers :(

Chapter 6



David tried to sleep but those thoughts not leaving him, why would his mother actually switch a baby and never say a word about it, those words coming out from their mouths, there is more to it, more to what he knows, its not just he was switched and he is not their son, but its more then what he knows, why his mother asked his dad to hide things, what's actually going on here, he walked out of the house and saw his Mother sitting alone in the garden, He walk toward her and sat near her, he said - "I thought you were sleeping", She looked at him and said "I slept in the evening and could not sleep now, I see you are awake too", he kept silent for a moment and said "Mom, I want it to be a dream, I mean whatever you said today to be not true, to be fake, you two are my parents, those I know and love, No one else, Mom please say it's a lie, you said it just because they made you say it, Mom say you are my real mom, please"



Tears falling from his eyes, Velga Looked at him and said "No son, I was not forced to lie, I said the truth and thanks to that nurse, I had the courage to tell you that I Am not your mother, I cannot lie more, I never wanted it to come out, but it did, I know I was stupid, I should have not do that, but I did, Please forgive me"


David was shocked hearing those and said "why did you do it mom"


Velga said "I can not tell you why I did it, but please know, I loved you as if you were my own kid, I never let you feel that I was not your real parent, I raised you and I love you my son", She was about to hug him and he moved back "Mom, can you tell me why??" , "Why did you do it", she looked at him and said "No son, I cannot tell you because if I do, this will ruin every one's life",

David stared at her in shock and said "oh great, I should not ask because it would ruin every one's life, wow mom, my life is already ruined, do you realize what hell I have been thru today, you promised to talk about it when we come home, then you fell asleep and kids came in, I kept my mouth shut but how long mom, all evening I am just thinking why it happened to me, why mom why, I think I have the right to know the reason you did it"


Tears fell from velga's eyes and she said "I m so sorry my son, I did not want it to ever come out, i switched you YES IT'S THE TRUTH I was selfish, I even not shared the secret with your daddy, he raised you as if you were his son, I had a solid reason to do it but my son, please don't ask the reason" ,


David looked at her in shock and said "uff, that means I will have to search the truth on my own, I guess better then you was that nurse who told the truth, but you did not renew any thing for me, whatever you said, I already know, mom, you been unfair to me because now every thing is different, the parents I knew are no longer my parents, I know from what I heard, dad won't tell me either because you locked his mouth too, that's why he fought with you didn't he?"


Velga looked at him and said "Yes, there are more things to it but David, I can not tell you"

David said "wow , that's amazing, you tell me the truth but only half truth, all I know is Now I have different pair of parents and that's it, Mom that's not fair, at least share the truth with me, I will keep it hidden I swear"


Velga said "No son, when time comes, you will know it, but now I guess its not the rite time"

Velga said it and went inside the house to her room, David started at her in shock.
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At Aharon's


Sima was in her room Alone, her husband and kids were out she was thinking about the happening at the hospital today those words, she knew that a dying woman would never lie, Her husband Daniel said that do not believe such words but still why would a woman lie?


No one believe it but her heart believed it , it says that yes that boy is her son, some inner feelings making her think about it, its not a lie but how?

She opened the photo album and saw her son Mike's pics after his accident, she still remembers that evening


"what that mean I cannot donate blood to my son" asked Sima, "My husband is injured as well he cannot donate and my other daughters are out of town, I am his mother, I gave birth to him why I can't donate blood to him" , "see madam, its like this, your blood group is A and this boy has blood group B. You cannot donate to him, unless we find someone else to donate it, do you have any relative who has the blood group B?"


"No I do not have any one here who can donate"

"Alrite don't worry , we have blood bank here, we will find it, he will be okay"


Sima remembered that day at the hospital, she never doubt but why she could not donate blood to her own son, Sima kept on checking the old files and she found the Birth certificates of her kids, She opened Mike's Birth certificate and was shocked to see that His blood group was A, she realized that something is wrong here, how come they wrote A while Mike has B,


She has to find out somehow," may be they had mistake in that hospital or may be Mike has blood group same as Daniel's , but why they wrote A not B, does it mean that the dying lady was telling the truth?, I should find it asap, some thing is missing, I wonder what"



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At Aharon's


"Sima, What happened why you still awake, its 3 am"


Sima checked the time and said "Oh, I did not realize that its already 3am, I was not able to sleep, you know the happening in today's events, I was thinking about it all the night"

Dani went in to change his cloths and said "Sima, I told you don't worry about it, I will handle it, I am sure its fake", "Sima came out of her bed and said "Dani, I think we should have DNA test done, this will solve all this matter because Now I doubt, I mean, my inner self saying that David is my son, I don't know why but when I was close to him I felt that connection, also I was thinking about the happening this evening and what I found,...", Dani interrupted her and said "ofo Sima, its 3am, don't you want to sleep, I told you I will handle it, so just relax, what DNA test, Come on dear, you tell me you believe that, just turn off the light and sleep, let me handle it okay", Daniel turned off the light and they went to sleep, Sima could not stop thinking about those things, she remained awake for a while and fell asleep.



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At Goenka's home



Velga sat alone in her room, she could not sleep, in front of her eyes she could see her little baby , the one she decided to switch, she wanted to forget that day but it was just like it happen today, she closed her eyes and saw his little face


"Oh my baby I love you so much, Whatever I m going to do is just for your best" , she hugged him kissed him... she did it again and again with tears, but she had to give him away, with tears in her eyes she said to the nurse "don't let them realize that he is switched" , she kissed her son's forehead and said "this is the best I could have done for you, I love you always" the nurse said - "madam, let me go do the job before any one sees me, " , Velga could not stop those tears and said to her son "Im sorry my baby, I keep you away from me, she will keep you happier I m sure, but know one thing... I love you and I will always do" she kissed him and hand him over to the nurse, the pain of being apart of her own son, the part of her body, her life is gone forever, will she ever meet her real son, will he ever accept and understand her , those questions raised in her head, she wake up saying - "please forgive me son", Velga wake up , her eyes were filled with tears, she was sweating, she realized it was just a dream, she heard the kids were getting ready for school, she quickly wake up cleaned her face and went to help them get ready

"Hey kids, you already wake up and ready for school wha.."


Moti said - "well mom, today daddy said he will drop us to school and he said get ready quickly so we thought we should not disturb you"


Sigal said - "yeah mom, when I came in your room, you were sleeping and I felt I should not disturb you today, see I got ready my self"


Velga kissed the kids and they left with their father who was already waiting for them in his car.

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