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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

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Posted: 11 years ago

#561

Ahh I see... Well I will admit she looks really hot in a bathing suit... and your choice of words were hmmm...intresting!!!

Edited by Vinnie79 - 11 years ago

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Sara Baksh

@sara1993

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Posted: 11 years ago

#562

So that means you didn't like my poem? you know it took me all day to put the words together...i was so excited to tell you about it...but you?...forget it...you're a much better poet than i am so you would think it's bad...i promise this is the last time i'm saying poems for you, okay?

Edited by sara1993 - 11 years ago

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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#563

ohhh ... No no !!! it was beautiful i loved it . Come on stop pouting smile for me... I like hearing your unique poems...

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Sara Baksh

@sara1993

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#564

really? then in that case i'll write another one for you...and i'll whisper it in your ear when we meet tomorrow...now it's your turn ...i told you my poem now you tell me one of yours...

Edited by sara1993 - 11 years ago

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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#565

One of my peoms huh... i thought you found that boring?

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Sara Baksh

@sara1993

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#566

boring? no thakur saab..your poems always bring a smile to my face...so come on please tell me...

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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#567

AAcha ..hmmm////
Ok close your eyes and listen: Vickram looks at her picture as he imagines her there...

Tumhari baghir kya jeena hain humey...
Tunhari baghir kya jeena hain humey...
(With out you what is my life)
Tum ho to zindagi hain
(If your are here then life is here)
tum ho to hassi bhi hain...
If you are here then so is laughter0
Tumhare bin sub kuch adhuri hain
With out you every thing is imcompleate
Tum nahi to meain bhi nahi ho...
If you are not here then neither am i ...

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Sara Baksh

@sara1993

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#568

tears starting to flow from her eyes as she listens to Vikram...that was beautiful thakur saab...not as good as mine though..she says smiling but very touching...i really miss you...

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Vinnie79

@Vinnie79

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#569

Are you crying?? come' on don't cry come on wipe your eyes...I miss you to honey...I will see you soon...it's getting late how about you get some sleep now huh???