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Posted: 9 years ago
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" Iss abeer ko toh main chodungi nahi... kya samajhta hai apne aap ko...??? main yahan do ghante se iska wait kar rahi hoon aur ye hai ki pta nahi kahan flirt kar raha hoga...??? abeer... i will kill you... pta nahi kis ghadi mein hum dost bne... ufff... saari galti teri hai meher... tu hi pagal hai... uss bhawre se dosti kar li aur ye hai ke isko koi farak hi nahi padhta... kahan phas gayi tu meher...??? " an angry meher blabbered to herself...
" ye nayi hobby hai kya tumhari...??? pagalon jaise khud se baatein karna..." abeer smirked while his hand crossed against his broad chest.
" just shut up...!!! kahan the tum...??? main do ghante se wait kar rahi hoon tumhara... "
" kisne kaha tha wait karne ko...?? chali jaati apne boyfriend ke pass..."
" what do u have exactly have against him and why...??? "
" its none of your business... lets just get to that work... "
" you are strange sometimes... i wonder what happens to you whenever we talk about shrey... koi panga hai kya tum dono ke beech... "
" i dont have that much of time meher... " abeer said out of irritation.
" yeah because you have to flirt with hot chicks... why would you care about me... i am only a friend... "
" exactly... only a friend... " abeer sighed.
" okk... lets go..."
" hmm... "
" abeer to be honest... i am glad that you came... i was very confused yaar regarding what should i give shrey on his birthday... " meher confessed while walking beside abeer, holding his hand.
" i came here only for u not for him... "
" ok ok... i know... thank u buddy... "
" anytym buddy... "
" abeer... are you okk...??? i mean if u dont want to be here, u can leave... " meher said when she found abeer looking here and there with a sad expression on his face.
" i am ok... just decide what do you want to gift shrey... then we will go for coffee... "
" done... its been so long we had coffee together... "
" almost 2 months... " abeer said, his eyes fixed on meher.
" thats impressive... "
" wish i impressed you before... " abeer whispered.
" kya...?? "
" joke tha... "
" bahut bura tha... " meher shook her head and sighed.
" i know... "
" ye shirt kaisa hai...??? " meher asked showing a shirt to abeer.
" too funky for him... "
" and what about this... ???"
" too bright for him..."
" its easy choosing stuff for u yaar but for shrey... i am never able to decide what to buy... "
" but have you given it a thought... why doesnt it happen...??? "
" it happens because you are my best buddy n i know you... " meher beamed with happiness.
" that means you dont know shrey well... " abeer smirked.
" i never said that... " said a confused meher
" let it be... what about a watch or something...??? "
" that is a good option... well done abeera... "

after two hours...
meher and abeer were sitting in Barista coffee shop.
" abeer... see we found nothing for him... what would i give him now...??? "
" why does he need anything when he has you...?? " said abeer who was a little pissed off by now. it was hurting him to see meher loving someone else other than him...
" abeera... dont talk non sense yaar... Things like that don't happen... "
" it happens meher... tum nahi samjhogi... "
" kyun...??? main kyun samjhungi...??? main pagal hoon kya...?? btaun na main kya nahi samajhungi...?? "
" chod na... "
" btao na... darr gaye kya...?? bolo na... " meher asked abeer, pushing him off limit.
" kya bolun...??? sunn paogi...??? "
" haan... bolo na... "
" tum andhi ho meher...?? tum kabhi nahi samajhogi...??? kyunki agar tum mujhe nahi samajh sakti...?? apne sabse acche dost ko nahi samajh sakti toh shrey se toh tum 3 mahine pehle mili ho... usse kaise samjhogi...??? jab tum ye nahi samajh payi ke main tumhe dil-o-jaan se chahta hoon toh uss ladke ko kya samajhogi...?? jab tum ye nahi samajh payi ke main tumse dur nahi reh sakta toh shrey ke saath kaise rahogi...??? jab mere dil ki baat nahi samajh payi toh uss gadhe ki feelings ko kya samjhogi...??? "
By this time meher was utterly shocked and soon recovered.
" kya kaha tumne...??? main tumhe nahi samajhungi...??? mujhe nahi dikhta ke tum mujhse... kya tumne kabhi dekha...?? kya tumne meri feelings ko samjha...?? nahi na... toh main kyun samajhun...??? kya tumhe kabhi baki ladkiyon se fursat mili mere liya...?? kabhi nahi... then why did the hell do u expect me to understand your god damn feelings...?? Abeer i am done with you... Yes, i am heartless like a stone... Is this fine with you...??? dont show me your face again... "
" tum mujhse pyaar karti ho...?? tum jaise ladki mujh jaise ladke se kaise pyar kar sakti hai...?? kaise meher... ??? " abeer asked holding meher's hand stopping her from leaving.
" kyunki pyar soch ke nahi hota... pyar dimag se nahi dil se hota hai... maine jabse se pyar ko samjha hai, jaana hai, sirf tumse pyaar kiya hai... sirf tumse... "
" toh itni footage kyun kha rahi ho..?? jhansi ki rani ki tarah aake kaha kyun nahi...??? "
" meri marzi... waise tumne bhi toh nahi kaha... " meher blamed abeer.
" i love you meher... please dont leave me... "
" i love you too abeer... "
And then they both hugged each other ignoring the people who were staring at them in the coffee shop. They all clapped bringing back abeer n meher to reality. they broke the hug and were embarrased on seeing the scene and left the shop holding hands.
" chalo tumhare ex boyfriend ka birthday gift bhi mil gaya... "
" birthday gift...?? kya...?? " meher asked in confusion.
" tum dono ka break up..." Abeer pulled meher into his arms and winked at her.
" hehe... best birthday gift ever... " meher giggled.
" you are certainly the best gift that i can ever get..." Abeer whispered into meher's ears, making her heart flutter with the proximity.
" me too..." Meher confessed.
" i got the gift but when will i unwrap it... " abeer asked dropping a kiss below her earlobe.
" u are such a jerk... u dog... get lost...!!! " meher playfully hit abeer's arm and pushed him away.
" tell me no... ??? "
" what...??? "
" the time for unwrapping...?? "
" after marriage... till then i can give u kissey... "
" neki aur puch puch... i am ready.."
" so am i... "
and then he captured her lips in a passionate kiss. a kiss which was his dream and her fantasy. he was kissing his best friend whom he madly truly and deeply loves... Abeer pulled her close to himself as if he couldnt get enough of holding her and feeling her. meher also replied back with equal love n passion... the love which she might have never confessed fearing that she would lose her friendship with abeer if he doesnt feel the same about her...
Meher smiled in the kiss thinking it was the beginning of her "happily ever after" with her one and only... Her prince charming...!!!

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Heatsha8176 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#2
awe that was lovely
poor Abeer was feeling tortured shopping with meher for her bfs gift
luckily he snapped n confessed
otherwise he would've been oblivious to her loving him too
his joke of her breaking up with her bf as his gift was true Abeer humour
love stories when best friends realise they love each other n come together in end
thanks for pm nplz keep em comin
jeharshu thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#3
Superbly written di
Loved abeer's irritation for shrey
Lovely ending
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Posted: 9 years ago
#4
BEAUTIFUL OF NAINA.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY SWEET AND CUTE ONE.
LOVED THE ABEER JEALOUSY FOR SHREY.
LOVED THE CONFESSION PART OF MEHBEER.
IT WAS SO SWEET.
BRILLIANT WORK.
TAKE CARE DEAR.

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Posted: 9 years ago
#5
simply superb👏👏
thnks 4 d pm..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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amazing os naina
loved it very much
thanks for the pm dear😃

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