Abeer OS : Irony Of Love

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Ravina

@Ravinanaik

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

OMG !!

this is super naina..

u write it so welll..

great work!!

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hiya

@coolhi1988

Achiever

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

wat a piece of writing...👏👏
superb.. great work!!👏👏
very well written..
touched by this...
thnks 4 d pm..

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jeharshu

@jeharshu

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Beautifully penned down di
it was heart touching
thnx 4r d pm di

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Superb OS

i just loved it

i think till date this is ur best os

kudos to u

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Nidhi54321

@Nidhi54321

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Nainaaa!!

That was something really good!!!

You potrayed his emotions so well..

I could imagine how hurt he always was.. But everyone took him wrong!!

I will comment in detail later😆😆

Bye

Love you

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sandhYA_123

@sandhYA_123

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

BEAUTIFUL OS NAINA.
LOVED IT.
IT WAS REALLY HEART TOUCHING OS AND ONE SHOT COMPLETED OS.
BEAUTIFULLLY WRIITEN BY U NAINA AND QUOTES WERE AWESOME. REALLY THEY SUITED TO MEHBEER.
LOVES ABEER POV.
U DESCRIBED ABEER FEELINGS VERY BEAUTIFULLY.
SO MUCH DEEP LOVE WAS SHOWN IN THIS OS.
LOVED THE DRUNKED PART AND MEHER ONCE AGAIN FALL INTO ABEER.
LOVES THE NOTE WRIIIEN BY MEHER.
ABEER DONT WANT TO LOOSE HIS LIFE MEHER BUT IRONY IS THAT HE HAD TO LEFT HER.
UR QUOTES ON LOVE R COMMENDABLE.
KEEP WRITTING UR BRILLIANT WORKS LIKE THIS.
TAKE CARE DEAR.

😊 😊 😊

Edited by sandhYA_123 - 9 years ago

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Heatsha8176

@Heatsha8176

Inactive

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

oh boy such a sad OS

Abeer realized his mistake too late

loosing his Meher his life

yes he did try to convince her to stay back but maybe not the way she needed

both in end suffered

not sure if he did right by not trying again

but then again some things cant be undone

beautifully written

thanks for pm nplz keep em comin

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

Aww naina..
u literally made me cry ...though I haven't seen the end of the serial and its last episodes due to my busy schedule...but after reading it is it felt needful on my part to see those episodes asap...
u portrayed abeer's feelings so well... his emotions of being away from his love...
aww...it was so sad one..but still I loved it..
it is actually one of our best writings..

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sanghita0000

@sanghita0000

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#19

WOW!! fantastic os dear...loved it a lot

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