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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: -TeekhiMishti-

res 😆

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unres. Because i will forget if i dont do it now 😆
wise decision😉
I didn't know you wrote.
hai? u didn't ? what did u think I had been doing in DTC then...writing is the only thing I know😆😆
That too sadistic stuff. Yumm. Jitna abeer ko tarpaoge utna mere dil ko sukoon milega 😆
sadistic isn't my 1st choice but apparently ppl tell me I m good at it
I remember ur eagerness to kill the poor lad off in d task fiction😆😆
You described the rain flashback really well. that scene is such an inspiration never gets old. there are about a 100 interpretations/versions of it yet every one is heart breaking.
I know...I wish they had shed more light to that particular scene in the show..it had immense potential

Loved the poem the most though. The end bit with you and me become we Perfect ending.!
What can I say I am an optimist , had to have a happy ending 😃

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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: Dhariya_

this was awesome

beautifully written...

I am glad u liked it dear😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
thanks dear😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
Woooh!
OS Finally after a long time n that too a Sadistic One ❤️
The way uh described "rain flashback" is simply amazing
"what he could never ever forget about that night though was not that rain, nor that storm , it was those eyes!! " these lines ❤️

poem part was sheer Brilliance
This was beautifully written... You always leave me mesmerized ..
Why Ur so damn creative...???? 🤣

Please Write some more Sadistic Stuffs
If Time permits

Regards
SHIVAM
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: -Adonis-

Woooh!
OS Finally after a long time n that too a Sadistic One ❤️
The way uh described "rain flashback" is simply amazing
"what he could never ever forget about that night though was not that rain, nor that storm , it was those eyes!! " these lines ❤️

poem part was sheer Brilliance
This was beautifully written... You always leave me mesmerized ..
Why Ur so damn creative...???? 🤣

Please Write some more Sadistic Stuffs
If Time permits

Regards
SHIVAM

I am glad u liked it shivam😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#16
Rads,
It's always a pleasure to watch a friend grow and you my dear have become an incredible writer. Your style is more polished now and I feel honored to have been reading your works .
Kudos Rads.
Love
Nidha
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Posted: 9 years ago
#17
wow...that's a real good piece of writing...ur so talented..well done...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: CavingIn

Rads,

Nidha🤗
It's always a pleasure to watch a friend grow and you my dear have become an incredible writer.
its friends like you who act as a building block ,thank for always being sooo encouraging and patient 😳
Your style is more polished now and I feel honored to have been reading your works .
its an honor just to know you and your stupendous work⭐️
Love
Nidha

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Posted: 9 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: MehBeerian_BD

wow...that's a real good piece of writing...ur so talented..well done...

I am glad u liked it dear😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
#20
So I have not checked my PM in a long while and I end up missing the Gem from you.
I am late sure very late reading this OS which was as always fantastics,

Jeez I need my happy endings well i can imagine that for sure with the one ending

Maybe you can continue with it

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