MehBeer TS: Meant to be| Completed | Part 2 Pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I love it ria...!!!!!
A big hug to u fr writing it 🤗
Waiting for more...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12

Originally posted by: --fero--

Superb

Please continue soon


Thanku so much😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😆😆
Thanku so much😳
Same reply. Same emoji😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Ishana-

Ditto for me too!😆

Please update asap. Love it


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Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: madhufx9...

How did u write after today's episode 😆

I couldn't write from morning anything after seeing that engagement pic

Res 😛

Wohhh this is amazing meri jaan 🤗
Very beautifully written ,

Didn't realise when it ended , thank u so much for writing ,helped to rectify my mood a little 😳
Bechara Abeer balling himself
We really like Abeer more na , we like seeing him cry🤣

Continue continue .
I really loved it .😳


ThankYou janemaan❤️
Yes we love Abeer a way too much😆
Sharafat dekho bande ki.. he is taking all blames😆😆
*Falling deeper*
Bye :*
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: VJDIPA

SUPERBLY WRITTEN RIA!!!!

Pls write more and pm me once you update..


Thanku dear😊
Yes i will surely pm you.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: war_is_peace

i am a fan of your stories
u write simple but i dont know what it does to me
ur plots are just so strong
and because u write dialogues i just go in a trance imagining the whole thing actually happening n hearing every line...

jaldi likho
i m waiting
desperately

ps - i chkd pms..i realised i hav already commented on all 😆

luv u 😳

i would totally love to see this happening in the show a month down the line


Thank you so much darling 😳
your comments really encourage me.😊
Love u too :*
Bye
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: naina927

I love it ria...!!!!!

A big hug to u fr writing it 🤗
Waiting for more...!!!


Thank You naina..
A hug to u too🤗
Love
Ria :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So here is the 2nd and the last part guys
Hope you like it.


Part 2

I opened my eyes on a hospital bed. I straighten my back when he enters. I look at him. I could not read his expressions. He comes closer and sits beside me on the bed. Then he looks at me. In that one moment i know that he knows. He cups my face with one hand. With the other one he holds my hand.

"How are u feeling?" he asks softly.

I couldn't answer. He touches his forehead with mine. Tears flow from my eyes.

"Why couldn't you tell me, Meher? Am i so bad?" he continues.

"No.. Abeer, i.. i just.. i just couldn't.. I am sorry" i finally speak still crying silently.

Tears formed in his eyes too.

"Do Maa and Bua know? he asks me. I nod in a no.

He chuckles a little.

"Ofcourse.. Otherwise bua would have killed me till now" he smiles. i smile too in my tears.

His hand slides down to my belly and he caresses it.

"I am really happy for this" he says with a smile.

In 4 days, this was the first time I genuinely felt happy. He was happy about it. His hand reaches my face again.

"But" he says. I feel the happiness drain with that one word.

"You need to abort this child Meher." he says softly. He presses my hand softly.

"I won't" i say determined.

"And you don't need to worry Abeer, I am not forcing you into anything. I am not forcing you to accept me or this baby. I will handle i promise " i continue. I knew why he said this. The doctor must have told him already.

"You know it's not about my acceptance, Baby. I would have been the happiest person. But its not good for your health. And i am not letting this happen" he says

"Please abeer don't say that. I cant afford to lose my baby. I cant afford to lose my baby again" i hug him crying.

He is shocked.

"Again?" the only word he utters.

And with this i tell him the truth. I secret i have been hiding from 8 years. The reason why in all these years i have hated him even more. I tell him how he handed me the divorce papers the same day i was going to tell him the news. How i couldn't tell him.

And how i lost my baby. I have hated him since that day even more. Because i am sure if he was with me, this wouldn't have happened. But was this his mistake at all? I was my mistake. I did not tell him. And then blamed him. I guess i realised all this too late. I realised when i saw love for this baby in his eyes. Now he had tears in his eyes.

"I am sorry.. I am really very sorry" that was the only thing he mumbled like about 10 times. That too when he wasn't even responsible for it. We were still hugging.

"I can't afford to lose this baby too ,Abeer. I know there's no next time for us."

He chuckles listening to that.

"Who said that to you? Do i look so decent that i would spare you so easily. I promise we will have awesome babies just like me. That's a guarantee.. Okay?" he smiles.

I smile too. He wipes my tears.

"But i will never let you put your life at stake for anything" he says seriously.

"Now please promise me you will do what i am saying"he continues.

I nod without even thinking for once. I believed him. I trusted him.

The doctor enters.

"Did you convince her Mr. Malhotra? " she asks.

He nods with a smile and gets up.

"The nurse will help you with formalities" she says and he nods.

"You are the husband right??" the nurse confirms.

He looks at me and smiles.

"No" he says.

"Ex- husband and To-be-husband" he adds and winks at me. Then he lip-sync's an I love you'.

I do not reply. I just smile. He blinks his eyes assuringly at me. I do that too.

At that moment i knew our love never died. Because we still could talk with our eyes.

...

End


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wowww

It's awesome


Thank you for updating it soo fast

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