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Posted: 10 years ago
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Firstly this is too short. secondly it is too good. so i thought lets do a real good interesting kinda comment 🤣🤣 maybe you might get motivated to write longer 🤣 so here goes 🤣 this is kind of like my running commentry i felt throughout reading this 🤣

Originally posted by: beauty14

Abeer OS| Growing Up First reaction-no i do not want my baby to grow up *nahi nahi nahi* * stomps feet*

"Not all those who wander are lost" love love love the quote 👏 sets the perfect premise and feel for the os. plus it is just perfect in general ❤️
-J.R.R. Tolkien

Love the self thought+ narrative kind of writing style from abeers POV i really really have to try this style some day but i just cant stop writing about feelings 🤣

Adulthood.

One word yet such a burden.

aww my poor baby is burdened 😭 come to me i will take care of you 🤣

That one word can be affiliated with so much of our lives. If the average man were to stop and think, than perhaps we'd be able to realize the sheer complexity of the word.

so true. but no one really wants to think these days. everyone is running -_-

By definition, it is a person whose attained full size and strength. In simpler terms, an individual who is burdened with the reality of life and its responsibilities, whatever they might be. For some, it could be the burden of providing for an household or for others, it's the day to day struggle to have food on the plate.

touche. People dont grow up. they just learn too many things in too bad ways and are never the same again 😭

Everyone has a burden. Everyone has a struggle. So, why don't I?

Because he is my baby 😳 But i know you are going to turn this around and make him super sad *wears sadistic heart* bring it on 🤣

For unfortunate reasons, I seem to fall outside the categorized norm. Why of course, I am, after all the Kuber Malhotra's only son, might I dare say born with a golden spoon.

the unfortunate reasons bit hit me hard. to the world he has everything. but even the golden spoon cant compensate for love and abeer knows that. 😭

Immediately, my name serves to act as a defense from the harshness of the world. I seem to possess the ability to deflect the heavy burdens associated with life.

But what others don't know is even that golden spoon falls short. Nothing is permanent in life as people foolishly choose to believe . We live in a transient world, where nothing stays the same for too long.

my poor poor baby 😭

I have no burdens.

No struggle.

Simply because I wander.

No, not because I lack purpose in my life, but for the very same purpose of actually living life. You see life is not meant to be a series of monotonous motions.


You may deem me as irresponsible, foolish, immature, but really, who is the fool here?

loved these lines in bold. so simple and subtle yet they hold so much depth and meaning 👏

To the world, I might be Kuber Malhotra's son, but I know. I could not have fit farther from that classification. By name and blood, I may be bound to him, but as a person, I am no one's but my own. And that neither him nor anyone else can take away from me.

can i just give him a hug already. no one but my own 😭 you are mine abeer baby ❤️🤣

So, who am I to ruin the misconceptions of others? I am not to blame for the disillusionment of others. It is their choice if they choose to live in a world of fantasy.

I, for one am quite content with the reality of adulthood.

this was amazing girl. you turned abeers childishness to his maturity and displayed/ explained it so well. loved the different shade of abeer you showed. your understanding of him is amazing.!


Definitely write more. longer. sooner. :) Will be waiting for your next work :)

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