UPDATED || TS: To Make Her Smile || Part 2 (Last Part) : Pg 2

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@.SSSS.

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

That was amazing.This TS, I just love to bits. This was like as if it was written for my taste. Thanks for writing this Kriti.

A guy singing a song for his girl, just only for her- is the most intimate thing in my opinion. I'm so envy of Meher, no matter how immature it sounds.

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Jinro Soju

@Acidity

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

awesome... so sweet TS... loved it...

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Sadia

@sadia98

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Mission accomplished

Loved it

I want to know what will happen in the morning though.

Amazing update,these two are awesome when they forget the past

Thanks for the PM😊

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Rashi Bhargava

@newmoon18

Sparkler

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

Beautiful
Loved it

Rally u write superb

Keep smiling

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Nikki

@desire_nikki

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

awww..
it was so damm cute...
and I love this song like anything...
and with MehBeer. I just loved it...

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AshaNegiFan

@AshaNegiFan

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Superb!!! phenomenal piece of writing 😃😳😳

thanks for the pm an keep up the good work😊

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TeekhiMishti

@TeekhiMishti

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Ahhh this is so cute ❤️ like a baby girl playing with a baby puppy in a land full of unicorns and rainbows level cute ❤️

Kriti girl i loved this. After such intense and ridiculous things that are to come which just leave me depressed to imagine this and read this gives me such happiness. It was cuteness over load. Loved the song ❤️ and loved the abeer version of it even more ☺️

You make the simplest things seem so beautiful. This was a feel good kinda OS ❤️ Abeer and meher singing to each other. Meher finally smiling. And abeer continuing even in the house. And that last scene had my heart when meher asked him to stay and he did.

the agar tum kaho at the end after that felt like such a emotion and love packed line. it synced beautifully ❤️

I loved it all.

Kudos girl You nailed it 👏

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neetha

@neetha

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

i just read both the parts now kriti..this is just chhoo cute...i loved it wen he actual walked on his palms following her steps..awwieee i would be soo happy if someone would do tat fr me..its such a cute gesture..beautiful song this is and as always ur amazing kriti..*hugs*