Mehbeer OS Series: Hues Of Sky / (07/08) New update page2

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So I'm turning this OS into series of OS'es. I don't know why exactly I'm doing this😆

SHOT 2: page 2




A/N :
This is just a very short piece of write up, fragmentation of my imagination about Mehbeer's past. This is very random, I want to warn you about the randomness of this OS beforehand. Read at your own risk.

Hues of sky - shot 1



Meher tried to calm her racing heart and control her hands from shivering but of no avail. She feels it as strange, how even this slightest proximity between them can effects her so much. "Abeer we've to go out now." Meher's words broke their silence of last few minutes.But there wasn't any reply from Abeer, as he stood before her like a statue and his constant staring is making her feel awkward now.

"Nissar and Sasha might be waiting for us at the canteen. We've to go." She tried to move away from him by taking a step back but he was quick enough
to take a step forward diminishing the recently created distance between them.Frowning at his not so usual behavior Meher leaned against the wall of that enclosed empty class room.

About a year had passed by, since they have first met in their college. So much so, had happened between them in this year but they finally managed to understand that the thing between them is love which is why that they always yearn for each others presence in a one way or other. The gravity of the thing between them is so much that it is not humanly possible to ignore. So they gave up to resisting each other and decided to give a chance for each other.



Abeer was looking at her intently and she could feel his piercing gaze, as
she hurriedly averted her face for a minute second, only to compose herself and then looking into his eyes again. His one look is all it would needed for her to slip into a moment of subsistence from the eternity of nothingness.



Gulabi aankhen jo teri dekhi (When I saw your rosy eyes).

Sharabi ye dil ho gaya... (My heart got drunk)

All of sudden, she listened him singing, as the intones of his voice intoxicated her, she looked at him surprised blinking her eyes disconcertedly.


Sambaaloo mujhko meree yaaron(Please take care of me my friend)

The surging rhythm of his voice seemed louder, every note became sharper, enticing, as her senses adjusting to the changed dynamics of his voice, her eyes closed, she felt his hands wrapping her waist leaving a sensation of icy cold or scorching heat or all at once.

Sambaloo mushkil ho gayee (Taking care of myself is really been hard for me)

And the moment, when he sang this, a fit of giggles escaped from her mouth, soon turned into an incessant laughter.


"Really Abeer?" her voice came as a half muffle in between her laughter, as she placed her hands on his shoulders, shifting her body weight from one leg to another to balance herself. Abeer's eyes narrowed and a frown appeared on his forehead. This is not the reaction, what he had expected from her side.

"Oh, come on! Meher, It's you whom I imagine, whenever I listen that favorite song of mine" Abeer said earnestly. His words were genuine. Not a single iota of any of it is sounded as dramatic. But then again "Oh!" she replied in a mocking tone, as if what he was saying is unbelievable and then she laughed again much to his annoyance.

" I really, am serious about singing those lyrics for you, but you're making fun out of it?" he said before moving a bit back but his hands are still encircled her waist.
"Congratulations, you've perfectly spoiled the moment" he spoke again, this time, there was a spasm of hurt in his voice, which wasn't ignored by Meher, a tiny little gasp hitches from her lips convulsing her throat, making it hard for her to talk, but she knew: she has to talk to him now, so she did, by carefully choosing her words.


"I'm sorry Abeer, this is all new to me, some one showering all the love in the world over me..." she inhaled sharply before continuing again. "...Every other time that you're overwhelming me with your love, I don't even know how to react" she was saying as she felt his grip around her waist tightened, that's what she remember and a moment later what she knows is: her feet was no more on the ground, she realized he lifted her up, her chin touching his nose, felt like floating in the air.Clutching on to his shoulders, she let out a girly squeal, her mouth wide open as an unknown joy seeping into her. And then she felt his grip is slowly loosening and she felt that her feet touching the ground again.

Unable to resist him anymore, she wrapped her arms around his neck tightly, and then bending her face side way, pressed her lips on his cheek. A very warm kiss that was making him close his eyes. The moment her face moved away from his, she saw a smirk playing o his lips, his eyebrow raised, as a wave of heat creeping along her neck reaching her cheek, making them a beautiful shade of red.

"My Meher..." she listened his rich creamy voice before feeling his warm breath fanning her face, his forehead touching hers, as he gathered her more into his arms. Her lips curved into a smile, a smile which reached her eyes that made her face elegant, like the bright sun on a cloudy winter day.

A buzzing sound of Abeer's phone break their stance. As he promptly checked his phone to read a message from Nissar:' Where R U ? We R waitin' for U..' Even befor Abeer can read the message fully.. Meher's phone buzzed too, and they know, its definitely from Sasha which could be something similar to the Nissar's message.

"These two doesn't leave us alone.." Abeer mumbled before duckling his face in her hair and breathing in her scent. " They don't even know we're together and that too alone.." Meher replied as a matter of fact. ".. We couldn't hide this to them any more.. Let's break this news today.." she continued. " Yeah! I know.. I don't even know why we were even hiding this before.." he said while playing with those few strands of hair over her forehead.

"Because, Even we weren't sure about us.." she felt his body stiffened against hers while saying this to him. "Then, are we now? sure about us?"

"Yes!" that was a very immediate reply from her. Never wasn't she so sure about anything than this now. " I Love you, Meher" she listened him saying, as she moved back, to look into his eyes. She was completely absorbed into the moment.

"Say.. I Love you Abeer.." his voice was all vulnerable, it's when she realized that she hadn't said to him those words not even once.

"I Love you Abeer.." she said pecking his lips softly, only to feel his smile against her lips.

"Say. Abeer is the best.." she wasn't surprised with this one more demand from him, after all who knows his craziness better than her, but she didn't obliged him this time.. Smacking his head "You're an idiot " she said as an ouch escaped from his lips, she covered them with hers...

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I'd love to listen from you. Please drop in your comments.. Thank you! xoxo

~ Sapna

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Such a beautiful OS!
Hehe..nice and sweet. *excuse the second grade vocabulary* 😆
I really loved the simplicity of the OS. Just a moment to take each other in and cherish one another.
Terrific job! I hope to see more from you! 😃
Please do PM me if you continue to write in the future. :D

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sapna🤗welcome to the forum dea

first thing.. Gulabhi ankehein is one my fav in ma playlist...❤️i loved teh whole os...yes its random piece but is an amazing piece of art i would say...i like the way u write..its simple and clearly delivers the story👏

thanks fr this..do pm me wen u write😛
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Originally posted by: beauty14

Such a beautiful OS!

Hehe..nice and sweet. *excuse the second grade vocabulary* 😆
I really loved the simplicity of the OS. Just a moment to take each other in and cherish one another.
Terrific job! I hope to see more from you! 😃
Please do PM me if you continue to write in the future. :D



Thank you so much :)
Vocab didn't matter at all.. 😆 will PM you, if I write anything in future, Thanks again :)

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Originally posted by: neetha

sapna🤗welcome to the forum dea


first thing.. Gulabhi ankehein is one my fav in ma playlist...❤️i loved teh whole os...yes its random piece but is an amazing piece of art i would say...i like the way u write..its simple and clearly delivers the story👏

thanks fr this..do pm me wen u write😛



Hey neeth.. thank you so much for your warm welcome :)Gulabee ankhein is my favourite song too..
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Originally posted by: coolhi1988

simply beautiful...
keep writing..



Thank you ! :)
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A/N: This one is dialogues- only shot. I don't know how much this makes sense yet I'm posting any way. This style of writing is: something I've inspired from my Wattpad friends- so this is a kind of experiment. Hope you guys will like this.

Hues of Sky - Shot 2




"Abeer!"

"Meher!"

"AbEEER- "

"MeHAAR- "

"What's wrong with you?"

"What's wrong with me?! I'm looking hot. Ain't I?"

"You, please wipe off that innocent look on your face- It's getting on my nerves, Why the HELL are you here?"

"Good morning!"

"Good morning?"

"Yes - GOOD MORNING!"

"It's freaking five in the morning."

"My watch also saying the same thing so- "

"You're here to say good morning at this early hour in the morning?-"

"..."

"Don't blink your eyes, and winking at me like that- definitely not."

"..."

"You're winking at me again?!.Jeez.. The way you were banging my bedroom door- few minutes back,
I thought it's something really serious."

"Something was really very serious baby. I was hungry, you know?"

"Of course, I know: You and your ridiculous food habits. No one eats at this hour. Some habits are hard to change right?"

"RIDICULOUS? why would you talk like that? How insensitive, baby, you are?"

"Stop nonsense."

"..And you know naa, baby, I don't eat without brushing my teeth. I didn't get any TOOTH BRUSH yet, even though I've demanded the one yesterday."

"UN-believable."

"..."
"You're winking at me again?"

"Aww.. baby, you look so adorable, when you are angry with me like this; and the way you crossed your hands below your chest like that, the way you are standing by balancing
your weight on your left leg, looking at me like as if you will kiss me and kill me at the same time.. Kya baat hai? Ek dum, heroine jaise!"

"Shut up-A beer."

"Okay, BOSS."

"..."

"..."

"Why are you leaving?"

"Do you want me to stay?"

"..."

"..."

"..No, I don't want you to stay, but I want to ask you something."

"Shoot it."

"Why are you here? was there any ulterior motive behind it?"

"Good morning."

"..."

"Tooth Brush."

"..."

"Okay, why don't you believe if I say: I'm here to say good morning or to ask for a new tooth brush?"

"Because I'm not so gullible to take whatever the shit you're saying!"

"Gulli- what? whatever. You know naa baby, your pretty vocabulary, some times freaks me up. It's not that we're going for any Spelling- B competition. So my point is-"

"Don't divert the topic, Abeer."

"Oh, Well.. I'm here because-"

"..."

"..."

"Speak up dammit- You're here because?"

"I thought you would like to see me early in the morning."

"..."

"Don't look surprised."

"..."

"Oh, come on! Meher .. you had said so many times in our good olden days- that you like me to see me early in the mornings. Because I look more handsome that's because I look
more like myself.And you even used to woke up early-"

"..."

"I know, some habits are hard to change. So I though you're still-"

"..."

"Okay, fine BOSS, I'm leaving now.But please go and check out your face in the mirror."

"..."

"You're smiling."

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Drop in your comments.Thank you! :)


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: VJDIPA

AWWW!!

Simply charming!!

Keep it up..


Thank you so much :)
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this is sooo cute eeeppp...every MehBeer lover will know who said the dialogues to whom...awwieee...i loved the last part..go check the mirror ur smiling aiiinnn soo cute
very well written sapna..u shud write more on MehBeer...i really like the way u write..style is quite different ..

thanks fr the pm baby 🤗
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Originally posted by: neetha

this is sooo cute eeeppp...every MehBeer lover will know who said the dialogues to whom...awwieee...i loved the last part..go check the mirror ur smiling aiiinnn soo cute

very well written sapna..u shud write more on MehBeer...i really like the way u write..style is quite different ..

thanks fr the pm baby 🤗



Thnk you so much 🤗

You made me feel😃 with your comment.

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