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Gems.musingsRN

@Gems.musingsRN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#41

😊brilliant lasya,just continue.will contribute when u get stuck.[ps:dont go the kekta way,make it mehbeerish,but ofc,u are akready making it,so keep writing.]

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Lasya

@Dexterity

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Posted: 10 years ago

#42

So guys ! Here is the next part ! @ Ratna , thanks a lot dear for this thread...😳

"Tum woh haq kho chuke ho Abeer ! 8 saal pehle jab tumne mujhe cchoda tha , us galti ke liye jo maine kee hi nahi ! Ab jaao yahan se "

The same words were ringing in his ears , he slowly gets up from there and goes to his car , slams the doors and starts driving madly ... He is getting more furious ..*BANG *

"Tu itna kyun peeta hai Abeer, dekh kitni chot lagi hai ! " "Tu har baat pe itna over react kyun karti hai Sasha ! Waise bhi mera sar phata jaa raha hai... "... Abeer is practising ...

Ishq kiya jo tumse kuch iss qadar jaanejaa

Inkaar karke toh phir bhi paaye hai mere Nishaan

Mere Nishaan ...Mere Nishaan

Suddenly he remembers his junior Rockstar ! HIS son ! Aakhir beta kiska hai ... He smiles to himself, the memoires of his love and his NISHAAN , his son Nishaad ... Wait ... Nishaad , what a lovely name ! The Seventh of the octane ...he smiles to himself ... Meher still being so pulled towards MUSIC ...

"BIRTHDAY !", Today is Nishaad's Birthday, he rushes out from there ... Hurrying and thinking about the present to buy him ...

"Happy Birthday, Nishu " Meher kisses him and gifts him a guitar ... There is a party arranged in the lawn of their house ...and there comes our Rockstar ...

"VJ Abeer !" Nishaad runs to him ... Meher fumes ..."Abeer ! Tum yahan" "Chill baby (he winks at her), main jaanta hoon ki tumhe bohut jaldi lekin ab nahi...pehle main apne bete se baat toh karlun "

"Hey Rockstar ! Happy Birthday ! and yeh hai aapka gift !" He hi-five s with Nishaad and Nishaad thanks him

"Kholon?" He unwraps it and sees a mouth organ ... He is so happy and runs around the lawn playing it happily...

"Maine mana kiya tha , aane se , kyun tum iss tarah "

"Baby, birthday toh aaj humaare BETE ka hai , lekin tum kyun itni hot lag rahi ho?"

"Bakwaas band karo ,Abeer , Abhi jaao yahan se "

DJ interferes - "Bitiya , dekhiye na , aaj baba kitne khush hain ... Rukhne deejiye na.."

Nishaad introduces Abeer to his friends and they have autographs, selfies and lot much of quality time spending

"Kya main apko hug kar sakta hoon" He hugs Abeer and thanks him ... Abeer feels lot of emotions for him and even Nishaad feels that there is some connection between them...

To be continued

Edited by lasyap3 - 10 years ago

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arshisarun123

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Posted: 10 years ago

#43

kya post tha...wahh...waitn fr the nxt update

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Gems.musingsRN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#44

😊wow lasya,u r going good.
[ps:sorry for interfering,but i'd have loved if u included mehbeer and nishad stay together scenario.]tell me when u want me to continue.

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Lasya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda
😊wow lasya,u r going good.
[ps:sorry for interfering,but i'd have loved if u included mehbeer and nishad stay together scenario.]tell me when u want me to continue.

Ok then I would make a slight change hereby ...😳

Please you do add something and then I would continue from there ... 😊

Edited by lasyap3 - 10 years ago

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Gems.musingsRN

@Gems.musingsRN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#46

ok,connection error,i typed an entire update,and it just got lost.hold on lasya,i'll update by tomorrow.

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Fero

@Euphoria_V

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Fabulous guys

@ratna.nanda

Sorry

But u know because of ur dp, I feel like I am chatting with teddy 😎

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Gems.musingsRN

@Gems.musingsRN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Well,I'm not in a good mood actually,how many of u will be in a good mood if u find a long update that u have typed for over an hour just gets lost due to a network error.well forget it anyways.

But im trying my best to recollect and improve the update
.(@fero do u really feel so??LOL,but I found the teddy quite cute!and do u feel my replies are similar to from a teddy??just joking.)

BIRTHDAY PARTY-cake cutting.

Meher: nishu,bachon chalo,time for cake cutting.(she was carrying a chocolate-strawberry cake in a tray.)nishu,just give it a rest,will u??ye mouth organ aaj hi gharab karne ka irada toh nahin hai na aapka??)

Abeer was standing at a distance,watching his son and friends crowd around the cake,and saw how meher bonded well with all the kids.this was quite unlike those big bashes in malhotra mansion which was most of the time,excuses for his dad to sign deals worth crores,while he and his mom were clearly ignored.whatever he had in his heart against for meher,still he felt glad that she made sure that their son was enjoying to the fullest on his special day.

Nishad:rockstar,mein cake kaatne jaa raha hun,aap bhi aayiye na.

Meher:nishu,woh GUEST hai,unhe har baar pareshaan nahi karni chahiye .

Hardly had she finished her words,she was slightly pushed to the side,as abeer jumped and came near the cake,and back hugged nishu.meher was irritated.

Abeer:of course mere chotu rockstar, der kyun??waisey,cake toh bahut yummy lagta hain??

Nishad:bilkul,mere mummy me banaya hain toh yummy toh hogi hi na.

Abeer:WHAT?? I mean,tumhari mummy ne.ok(he nudged meher and said ,'baby ye khaane laayak toh hain na??mein tumhari 8 saal pehlewaale biscuits like flour balls ko ab tak nahi bhoola hun'.)

Meher:just shut up abeer.

Abeer moved a little away to see nishu and meher cutting the cake,nishu feeding cake to meher and DJ,and meher lifting up nishu in the air,while the other kids chorused 'happy birthday'.he felt a weight in his chest,how much had he missed,he has no place in his Son's world all thanks to meher purohit.he clenched his fists,looking away.she better has a good explanation but she's more interested in shooing him away from nishu.that was not going to happen,not anymore.but he can't stay away from nishad now. But how??

A mischievous glint shone in his eyes as he saw nishu walking towards him with the cake in a plate.meher and DJ was seeing off his friends near the gate.

Abeer kneeled and hugged nishu as both fed each other the cake.

Abeer:happy birthday again champ!hmmm,cake's pretty good.

Nishad:toh aap bhi ab jaayenge??

Abeer:actually ek problem hain champ.mein toh iss shimla sheher mein naya hun na,toh jab mein ne aapke gift khareedne ke liye shop gaya toh ek badi tez WIND aaya aur mera gaadi went flying,flying.mere purse bhi andar tha.aur mein toh rasta bhi bhool gaya.

Nishad:lekin wind mein Mr.bean ke car fly karte hain,Pogo mein.yahan??(he looked at abeer doubtfully.)

Abeer:par yahan shimla mein ,Mr.abeer ke car ne bhi fly kiya.(he thought to himself seeing nishu's doubtful face 'well done meher, tumne toh mere bete ko apna carboncopy bana diya,ye chashma kaafi nahin tha, shayad'.)
haan think hain,baarish bhi aanewala hain,mein paithal hi chala jata hun.

Meher was walking towards them suspiciously. Both father and son saw that.

Nishad(rushing to meher):mumma, woh ,woh..

Meher:kya hua nishu??bolo bacha.

Nishad:actually mumma,aap mere liye ek chotu sa help karoge.woh mere rock star hain na, unki car wind mein fly ho gaya,aur unke pass purse bhi nahin.unhe toh rasta tak nahi pata.toh,toh kya him unhe humare ghar mein rahne denge??I mean,jab tak unhe unki gaadi mil jaaye.

Abeer(to himself.): I'm not going to find it ever.

Meher:WHAT NONSENSE?? WIND??CAR??nishu,ye kya keh rahe ho??and u know hum STRANGERS ko ghar mein rehne nahi dete.

Nishad(with a cute,innocent face.):plsss mumma,woh stranger nahi hain,mein roz unka show dekhtha hun.and mujhe apne weekend icecream bhi nahin chahiye,plsss mumma(tears started to well in his eyes).

Abeer:(grinning)ye hui mere betewaali baat,chalo meher,countdown shuru,3.

Meher:nishu..DJ,suna aapne??

Abeer:2.

DJ:shayad woh sach mein rasta bhatak gaya ho.air bitiya janamdin par baba ko rone mat do na.waisey bhi aakhir abeer toh..

Meher:daaijaan!

Abeer:and,1.

Meher:OK nishu aapke r-o-c-k-s-t-a-r yahan reh sakta hain.(she spoke through gritted teeth her eyes flashing at abeer.)

Nishad:(hugging meher,half dancing)aap duniya ki best mom ho,love u mamma.dekha rock star,ab mein aur aap saath rahenge ek ghar mein,wow,kitna maza aayega na??

Abeer:ofc champ,thank u.hum sabko bahut maza aayega,hain na nishu-ki-mumma??

Meher[ignoring him.]:lagta hain baarish aanewaali hain DJ pls nishu ko andar le jaayiye.

Abeer:DJ,mera ye chota bag bhi,plsss(saying it like nishu.)

DJ smiled warmly at him and spoke in a low voice:

DJ:mujhe ye shayad kehna nahi chahiye,par nishu baba bilkul aap pe gaye hain(abeer looked mildly surprised.). Isliye toh kal maine aapko ek nazar mein pehchana.bas itna kehna chahungi ki aap bitiya ko dosh mat dijiye,ye sab karne ke piche ek bada kaaran hain.

Meher:kya baatein ho rahi hain wahan??DJ??

DJ:(loudly): aur mein keh Rahi thi,ki nishu baba ko le jaane ke baad aapka kamra dikhaungi.haan bitiya[looking at meher.],hum chal rahe hain,chalo baba.

Once they were out of earshot.meher walked furiously to abeer.

Meher: tumhe itna bhi sharam nahin ki ek chote se bache ko jhoot bolkar apne baaton mein laa rahe ho??aur kitna giroge tum abeer??

[it started raining.]

Abeer(caught hold of meher's arm):jhoot??aur tum Jo apne,nahi,humare bete itne saalon se bol rahe ho,uska kya??

Meher:mein nishu se jhoot nahin bolti,bas sach nahi bataya.aur tum kal subah nishu ke uthne se pehle jaana padega tumhe.bas.

Abeer:wow 'jaana padega',not bad meher purohit.Lekin game toh abhi shuru hua hain baby.and when I go,it'll be with my son and his mom.par sapne dekhne ki zarurat nahi hain, itni aasani se nahin chodungi tumhe.8 saal ka hisab aur kahani mujhe chahiye,tumhare muh se,aaj raat hi.
but excuse me for now,I have an appointment with my chotu rockstar,you see(.he winked)

Abeer strode into the hose,leaving a furious and confused meher in the rain.

To be continued..

(Hope u all liked the update.@lasya u can continue.)

Edited by ratna.nanda - 10 years ago