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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ratna.nanda


good job.do continue[just note that in the situation,mehbeer have already met in school[read previous posts in this thread.] and abeer is angry with meher for hiding about their son.]


Yeah I have read that stuff ! Please do read more 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Kaha hai mera baccha Meher !! *hiccups* Kya kami reh gayi thi meri Mohabbat mein ki tumne mujhse itna bada sach cchupaya ! Answer me , damn it ! , Kahan cchupake rakha hai tumne use !"


"Abeer ! Please dheere bolo, tum nashe mein ho ... "


"Nahi daaijaan ! mujhe nahi peena hai yeh Doodh ! "(Runs to the living room only to see his parents...)
Edited by lasyap3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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"Mom ! , ... VJ Abeer ! , Wow ! "


"Nishad ! , andar jaao ... "


"Ab samjha , toh yeh tha mera birthday surprise , wow Mom ! Aap duniya ki best mom ho !!"


Abeer was keenly watching him and wait ... what? BIRTHDAY !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lasyap3

"Mom ! , ... VJ Abeer ! , Wow ! "



"Nishad ! , andar jaao ... "


"Ab samjha , toh yeh tha mera birthday surprise , wow Mom ! Aap duniya ki best mom ho !!"


Abeer was keenly watching him and wait ... what? BIRTHDAY !



ok,u r taking the situation wonderfully,u gave a name to jr.abeer too😆.OK,but nishad calls abeer rockstar and meher mumma usually😉.and let me add some too:

nishad hugged meher while meher gave stern looks to abeer,who had a naughty grin on his face now.

abeer said'toh nishad,kaisa laga aapki surprise?waisey,surprise dena toh koi aapki mumma se seekhe!.'

meher was confused,but regained her composure and called out,"daaijaan,pls aakar nishad ko lekar jaayiye,kaafi raat ho chuki hain.'
'aur haan,nishad,aap ne ab tak dhoodh finish nahin ki,chalo fatafat peelo'.


'milk,yuck' said abeer and nishad together.

abeer's grin became wide,and meher was fed up.

nishad said,"toh aapko bhi doodh pasand nahin hai rockstar,dekha mumma rockstar bhi doodh nahin peethe'

meher:'bas nishad,meine keh diya na.aur hum aapki pasand-napasand ke baarein mein subah baat karenge,sleeptime,now,jaao.'

nishad:'par mumma,rockstar?'

abeer :'birthday surprise hain champ,kal ka pura din aapka,OK.abhi toh bahut baat karna baaki hain,hain na nishad-ki-mumma[stressing the words]????.

[daaijaan[DJ] enters.]
DJ:bitiya,baba ne toh dhoodh...[sees abeer,and is shocked.]ye toh??
nishad:'mere rockstar,daaijaan.mere b'day surprise bhi'

meher:dhoodh ko chodo DJ,nishad ko sula dijiye,mein thodi der mein aati hun.nishu,no fuss.goodnight.

nishu turns to leave with DJ but runs back to hug abeer.abeer is dazed and tearful.
nishad:'rockstar,mein bahut khush hun.aap kal aayenge na,nishu will wait.now,goodnight.goodnight mumma'.
[and he leaves with DJ,who turns back,and meher nods at her.]

meher:kal ka bahana acha tha abeer,just leave.bhool jao ki tum yahan kisi se mila bhi tha.

abeer:bahana??tum mummy ke saath saath military captain ban gayi ho,order de rahe mere bete ko.aur dhoodh??[he staggers]seriously baby??8 saal pehele maa ke saath mere piche padi thi,ab mere bete ke piche.tum log samajh nahin sakte kya.MILK SUCKS.soch raha hun,agla gaana iss idea par kyun na banaya jaye??

meher:tum apne hosh mein nahin ho abeer.kaha na,jao yahan se.baat karni hai toh phir kabhi.

abeer:kya yaar??yahan se kaun jaa raha hain,ab toh abeer yahan pe aaya hain,jaane ko toh sawal hi nahin.aur tum bhi.aakhir 8 saal ka hisab toh mujhe lena hi hain.aur tum mujhe sab kuch bataogi[his eyes became red],hamare bete ke baare mein.abhi.

u can continue @lasyap3.


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Posted: 10 years ago
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This is fun...
ratna.nanda u nailed it with the above continuation...
Abeer and his dialogue abt milk... ha ha... rofl
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Posted: 10 years ago
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great going guys.
plz continue..😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wowww awesomee updates just loving this track...pls pls smone cntinue
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Superb yaar... Great going ...plzz continue someone soon plzz
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😊thank u all who liked the update.if @lasyap3 doesn't make it,i may add one more update by evening.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ratna.nanda



ok,u r taking the situation wonderfully,u gave a name to jr.abeer too😆.OK,but nishad calls abeer rockstar and meher mumma usually😉.and let me add some too:

nishad hugged meher while meher gave stern looks to abeer,who had a naughty grin on his face now.

abeer said'toh nishad,kaisa laga aapki surprise?waisey,surprise dena toh koi aapki mumma se seekhe!.'

meher was confused,but regained her composure and called out,"daaijaan,pls aakar nishad ko lekar jaayiye,kaafi raat ho chuki hain.'
'aur haan,nishad,aap ne ab tak dhoodh finish nahin ki,chalo fatafat peelo'.


'milk,yuck' said abeer and nishad together.

abeer's grin became wide,and meher was fed up.

nishad said,"toh aapko bhi doodh pasand nahin hai rockstar,dekha mumma rockstar bhi doodh nahin peethe'

meher:'bas nishad,meine keh diya na.aur hum aapki pasand-napasand ke baarein mein subah baat karenge,sleeptime,now,jaao.'

nishad:'par mumma,rockstar?'

abeer :'birthday surprise hain champ,kal ka pura din aapka,OK.abhi toh bahut baat karna baaki hain,hain na nishad-ki-mumma[stressing the words]????.

[daaijaan[DJ] enters.]
DJ:bitiya,baba ne toh dhoodh...[sees abeer,and is shocked.]ye toh??
nishad:'mere rockstar,daaijaan.mere b'day surprise bhi'

meher:dhoodh ko chodo DJ,nishad ko sula dijiye,mein thodi der mein aati hun.nishu,no fuss.goodnight.

nishu turns to leave with DJ but runs back to hug abeer.abeer is dazed and tearful.
nishad:'rockstar,mein bahut khush hun.aap kal aayenge na,nishu will wait.now,goodnight.goodnight mumma'.
[and he leaves with DJ,who turns back,and meher nods at her.]

meher:kal ka bahana acha tha abeer,just leave.bhool jao ki tum yahan kisi se mila bhi tha.

abeer:bahana??tum mummy ke saath saath military captain ban gayi ho,order de rahe mere bete ko.aur dhoodh??[he staggers]seriously baby??8 saal pehele maa ke saath mere piche padi thi,ab mere bete ke piche.tum log samajh nahin sakte kya.MILK SUCKS.soch raha hun,agla gaana iss idea par kyun na banaya jaye??

meher:tum apne hosh mein nahin ho abeer.kaha na,jao yahan se.baat karni hai toh phir kabhi.

abeer:kya yaar??yahan se kaun jaa raha hain,ab toh abeer yahan pe aaya hain,jaane ko toh sawal hi nahin.aur tum bhi.aakhir 8 saal ka hisab toh mujhe lena hi hain.aur tum mujhe sab kuch bataogi[his eyes became red],hamare bete ke baare mein.abhi.

u can continue @lasyap3.


@ Ratna ! Thanks ... Actually the name Nishaad is special as it's related to music ... the "Ni" of SaReGaMaPaDhaNiSa... By the way my name is Lasya 😊

Now coming to Story ...

"Nahi, Abeer ! Ab nahi , tumne kaafi pee rakhi , Jao yahan se ..."

She is leaving and he clutches her hand and twirls her and she lands straight on him, he slowly puts the strands of her hair behind her ear from her face ...

"Bolo Meher , kyun tumne itne saal mujhse yeh baat chupaayi, kyun door rakha tumne mujhse Nishaad ko... Aur tumne use yeh bhi nahi bataya ki main uska ..."

"Bas Abeer ! bohut ho gaya, raat bohut ho chuki hai , jaao yahan se... Aur haan aayinda kabhi bhi Nishaad se milne ki khosish mat karna ... woh kabhi nahi jaanega ki tum uske ... "

" Baap hoon main uska Meher !!, uske ragoon mein khoon doudta hai mera ! Haq hai mera us par ! aur tum par bhi "

"Tum woh haq kho chuke ho Abeer ! 8 saal pehle jab tumne mujhe cchoda tha , us galti ke liye jo maine kee hi nahi ! Ab jaao yahan se "

She slams the door on him by pushing him outside ... She slides down near the door and cries ... DJ comes and consoles her

"Bitiya , jo bhi ho, ek na ek din toh sach baba ko pata chal hi jaayega ... Itne saalon mein bohut kuch hua ... Lagta hai ab tumhe apni ye ..."

"Nahi DJ, Abeer ne mujhe cchoda tha , tab maine ek cheez khud se aur Nishu se bhi waada kiya tha ki main hi uski Mumma aur Papa hoon..."

She goes near Nishaad who is peacefully sleeping and looks at him lovingly and caresses his head ... he wakes up a little... Meher asks him "Nishu , main koun hoon bacche aapki"

"Offo ! Aap meri Mumma aur Papa ho ! Sone do na Maa ! "

"Love you Nishu ! "

Ok... this was little serious and next one would be damn good !To be continued in next post 😉
Edited by lasyap3 - 10 years ago

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