MehBeer FF: || Yeh Kambaqt Dil || (Chap 2- pg 6) - Page 2

Originally posted by: raaz19

Wow lovely start to the story and what a way to introduce the story with non other then the song. ..Welcome to the forum and thanks for the pm. ..

Must say it has been beautifully written so far...glad to see you enjoying the show...

Thank you.. Yeah!! It's really takes much time to think how to add the song as I just loved the song & wanted to add this here... I'm glad that you liked my work... Thank you once again... 😊

hi reema welcome to forum do have a gudtime here.
the prologue was very good waiting for more

Wonderful start. U added an OC.
So maybe the equations will differ a bit hmm?
Anyway do PM me when u update.

Sounds like this is going to be interesting!

prologue seems promising reema

thanks for pm

Nice title..

The prologue was amazing cannot wait to read the story please continue soon

interesting prologue

Thank you for your love & support guys... Here I'm posting the first chapter...

Chapter 1

Sun rises when birds started chirping outside, sun rays came through a thin curtain & directly fall on Abeer's face, he shifted little & slept on his stomach when Nisar walked in his room & removed the blanket from Abeer's face...

"Bhai uth ja yaar.. It's 8am.. We are getting already late aur tu ab bhi so raha hai.. Uth yaar.." Nisar said...

"Sone de na Nisar.." Abeer lazily said while covering his face again..

"Bhai college nehi jana hai kya?? Aur tera phone kabse try kar raha hu switch off kyu araha hai??" Nisar sits beside him & asked...

"Haan shayad bettery dead ho gai hai.. Bhai abhi sone de bohot nind arahi hai.." Abeer replied lazily...

"Tu aise nhi manega.. Wait..." Nisar took the water jug & murmured "Ab dekh maza.." He poured out water on Abeer's face & he woke up with a jerk...

"Damn!! What are you doing yaar..."Abeer yelled..

"Nind khul gai?? Ab uth aur jaldi se ready hokar niche aja.. I'm waiting for you..." Nisar said...

"Tu dost hai ya dushman??" Abeer pouted..

"Jo samajhna hai samajh par abhi ke liye ja bai ready ho jaa!!" Nisar said when Abeer went to his bathroom..

Nisar came downstairs where Mrs. Malhotra was sitting on sofa, Nisar took a seat next to her..

"Aunty apne Abeer ko bohot bigad diya hai.." Nisar said smiling..

"Arey Nisar beta wo kabhi meri baat sunta hai?? Jo usse pasand hai wo toh wahi karta hai.. Pata nehi kab sudhrega yeh ladka..." She replied...

In Abeer's room, he came from washroom wearing blue jeans white shirt with a red jacket.. He came in front of mirror & brushed his hair while shouting "Ramesh Kaka!!" But no one arrived in his room, he called again & this time a servant arrived with coffee...

"Chote sahab apki coffee!!" The servant offered him the coffee mug..

"You idiot!! Kaha maar gaye the??" Abeer yelled when the servant looked down... Abeer took the mug & took a sip, he fumes & threw the coffee on servant's face & throw the mug on the floor...

"Yeh kya hai?? Mujhe cold coffee pasand nhi tum jante nhi.." He again shouted on him..

"Sorry sahab.. Aage se khayal rakhunga..." The servant apologized...

"That will be better for you.." He warned & leave the room...

Abeer walked down when Nisar said "Ready ho gaye ho to chale??" Abeer nodded & they bid a bye to Mrs. Malhotra & left...

On the road, Abeer drives the car, Nisar sat next to him & was checking facebook updates...

"Bhai St. Xavier college ke sare ladki tujhpe hi kyu fida hai yaar.. Koi meri taraf dekhti bhi nhi.." Nisar disapointly said in which Abeer laughed..

"I'm the super cool bhai.. Handsome hu dashing hu goodd looking hu aur isliye college ka prince charming hu mein..." Abeer proudly said & winked at him..

"Jo bhi ho jaye Khud ki tareef karna nehi chorega.. Hai na??" Nisar shook his head...

Abeer was driving the car & they were enjoying the music.. There was a big hole on the road & that was fill with muddy water.. At this place a girl was Passing.. Abeer couldn't notice the hole & the car's wheel fall on the hole & the muddy water splashed on the girl's dress... Abeer looked that in his car's mirror & he laughed..

"What happen.." Nisar asked..

"Nothing.."

Suddenly Nisar heard a girl's voice from behind, he looked behind.. Abeer also saw her from mirror... The girl was running behind their car..

"Wait.. Wait.. Stop the car..." The car shouted when Abeer stopped the car.. The girl came near the car & knocked on window glass "Out.. I said out..."

Abeer bring out the window glass & sarcastically asked "Me??"

"Yes you.. Now out.." The girl said when Abeer got down from the car "What???"

"Are you blind???" The girl asked with a disgust look..

"What???" Abeer exclaimed..

"Yeah I think you are blind.. Issi liye toh tumhe road par wo hole dikhai nhi diya.." The girl said pointing at the hole on road & continued "Yeh tumhari kharidi hui road nhi hai jo bina dekhe aise car chala rahe ho... Agar mujhe lag jati toh..."

"Par lagi to nhi na!!" Abeer said..

"Yes.. But look tumhari wajah se kya hua.." She said looking at the dress...

Abeer looked at her dress & laughed.. Meanwhile Nisar got down from the car & came near Abeer's side..

[P"Aww!! You are laughing... Yeh dress kitni expensive thi tumhe pata bhi hai.. Yeh mujhe mere maa ne di thi..." She sadly said...[/P]

"Expensive thi na?? Okay!! Wait.." Abeer took out his purse & took out some money & give the money to the girl "Take this.. I hope isse tum ek naya aur isse bhi expensive dress le sakti ho.." The girl looked at him angrily but she takes the money..

"Mujhe pata tha tum isse zarur logi..." Abeer said with a smirk..

"Aaa.. Itna bhi khudko important maat do ki sahi galat ka bhi faraq bhul jao.. Aur haan!! Yeh mat samajhna yeh meine dress kharid ne ke liya.." The girl said with an angry face when Abeer sarcastically looked at her...

"Yeh paise tumhe mein wapas karungi with Interest.. We will meet again.." She said in a disgust way & left from there...

"Ufff!!!"Abeer sighed, the girl once turned back to him when he winked at her...

"Abeer tu yeh sab kyu karta hai??" Nisar asked when Abeer playfully hit on his chest & said "Let's go!!"

Before leaving he once looked at the girl, he had a strange feeling when he saw her... "We should meet once again.." Abeer murmured & drive away...

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Precape: Abeer was shocked to see the same girl in his class, the girl looked at him in a disgust way...

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So, how's the chapter?? I hope you enjoyed... Leave your comments.. Advance thank you...

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Yayy!! I think again first LOL..
Abeer is such a cool dude.. I think the girl is Meher.. Is it?? Nisar is good person.. Waiting for next.. Thanks for pm..