MehBeer FF: || Yeh Kambaqt Dil || (Chap 2- pg 6)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys, I'm new here & my name is Reema... I thought to join
this forum since long but too lazy to create account but finally I'm
here.. Well, I watched Badtameez Dil from the very first episode &
just loved the show, so just thought to write.. This is my first attempt
so if I do any mistake kindly ignore it or frankly tell me, so that
I'll improve in my writing.. I'm writing this in hindi dialogues as the
dialogues will sounds good as the show...


Here goes the prologue.. This story filled with love.. Not only love but hate, ego, love.. So, now do read & enjoy...


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Prologue


It
was evening, stars were shinning in the dark sky when Abeer along with
Nisar & some of their friends were chilling out near the sea-shore,
it was chilled weather, the sea waves were flowing frequently, Abeer
enjoying the moment & tuned his guitar & hummed, seeing this
Nisar too tuned his guitar with the same tune...


Abeer heard
some giggling & he looked at the direction when he saw some kids
were playing with a girl, her hair was loose & as cold breeze was
blowing, her hair was frequently dancing in the air.. Abeer couldn't see
her face but he could hear her voice, it was so melodious, unknowingly
but a smile came on Abeer's lip... He again played a string of his guitar happily when one of his friend played the mouth organ...


Juki teri palkon mein..
Mil jaaye mujhe panaah..
Palkein gire aasu bhari..
Reh jaaye mere nishaan...
Tute dil ki mat kar..
Tu fikar mere humnava...
Pyaar doon tujhko is kadar...
Reh jaaye mere nishaan...
Mere nishaan.. Mere nishaan..
Mere nishaan.. Mere nishaan..
Mere nishaan.. Mere nishaan..
Mere nishaan...


Khaak mein mil jaaun mein jaise ke ek lamha...
Aa lag ja sine se.. Ban ja mera rehnuma..
Dekhta hun sapne tere..
Sun le meri jaane jaa..
Khwab yeh sach ho jaaye..
Gar khuda ho meherbaan..
Mere nishaan.. Mere nishaan..
Mere nishaan.. Mere nishaan..
Mere nishaan.. Mere nishaan..
Mere nishaan.. Mere nishaan..

Sajde.. Mein tere sar jhukta bas..
Chahat ki hai yeh daastan...
Ruth gaya mera rab jo mujh se..
Toh mita de wo mere nishaan..
Mere nishaan.. Mere nishaan..
Mere nishaan.. Mere nishaan..
Mere nishaan.. Mere nishaan..
Mere nishaan.. Mere nishaan..
Mere nishaan.. Mere nishaan..
Mere nishaan.. Mere nishaan..
Nishaan nishaan nishaan..
Mere nishaan.. Nishaan.. Nishaan...
Mere nishaan.. Nishaan nishaan...
Mere nishaan...


Abeer
sings this song while his eyes were close that he was so lost in his
own song when he felt something on his face he opened his eyes & saw
the girl was passing from there & her dupatta fall on his face due
to the breeze, before Abeer could do anything the girl passed from
there... Abeer smiled & the people clapped for him as he sang so
well...


"Dude, you are a rock star!!" Nisar complimented him...


Abeer once looked at the road where the girl got inside her car, he wondered who the girl is...


"Yaar
Abeer kal college hai, yaad hai na??" Laksh said when Abeer rolled his
eyes as he was least interested to attend the class & they all
headed for their respective home..


In car, his friends were
chatting but Abeer was lost somewhere, he was remembering the girl
only... The girl who has a sweet voice, sweet smile..


"Abeer!! Abeer!! Bhai, kaha kho gaya??" Nisar called..


"Kuch nehi yaar.." He replied & played the mouth organ & refreshed his mind & prepared himself to start a new day...

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I added a new character Laksh as Abeer's friend... Will add more character when story progress...


Okay!! This is the prologue, don't forget to comment.. Good or bad it was but do comment yaar...

<p align="center">Please Buddy me for PM...

Advance thank you... 😊



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LatersBaby thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Very nice start 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Good start keep me updated
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i loved the proloque .. im waiting eagerly for the updadete and please update soon!!!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting prolouge do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow!! Reema.. Welcome to the forum.. It's really nice prologue.. Hmm!! You added the song.. I loved this song.. Thanks for pm.. Keep update 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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title is nyc n prologue is quite interesting... update soon!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing start
Looking forward to read more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow lovely start to the story and what a way to introduce the story with non other then the song. ..Welcome to the forum and thanks for the pm. ..
Must say it has been beautifully written so far...glad to see you enjoying the show...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Amazing concept yar...
welcome to the forum...

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