Mehbeer OS : In rain under the tree

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hi guys ... Thougt of thus... Its a short OS ...hope you like it ...!!! Tell me if should make more...

In a stormy night... in abheers house...Meher was packing her bags ...

A. Meher...!!!

M.leave me abheer.! Im leaving... Im nit stayung any more ...

A. Pkease meher... Please ( with teary eyes...)

M. No. .. Thats enough... I have had enough insultfrom your famuly towatds me... And my family...

Abheer pins neher to the wall... And hides hides his face on one side of her neck ... And very close to her ears...a lone tear escaped his eyes and fell on her shoulder... but he ried to control ... so he wouldnt cry,... his heart was broken... .. he coulnd t believe the love of his life was leaving him... and ... he just wanted to stop her...

A. Please ... Please meher.. Ill talk to my parents... Please forget evrything ... Lets have a fresh starrt... But please give me a chance... Give us a chance .,... Please...( meher coulndt hold her tears any more )

M. Thats enough abheer... Please... Dont make things hard for me... I really need to end this... I cant... I really have to do this ...

Abheer lowered his head to place it on her shoulder... And he wrapped his arms around her... Thinking that this was the last time he could do this ... Have the right to do this.,his eyes ... coukldnt hold his tears any more and let them fall on her shoulder..., meher...also... Hugged him...thight... Thibking this was the last .time she could experience this... her eyes were puring out all the pain she had...

Flashback ends ...

They were huggibg each other... ... In the strong rain...of bombay... Under a tree... besides there was a lamplight .. yellow lanmlight... and ... it was a beautiful park... where they use to go on long walks afetr they got mariied... thier favourtite place...Again... They had given their love a second chance... They were huggung so tight that ... They were getting a bit wet...

A. What i thought was that... 8 years ago ... I would never be able to hug yiu.. ... We would never be together... But look..now... We re once again...

M. You thought exactly what i thought... I cuoulfnt live without you... All those 8years ive been thinking obly about yiu... Only...you. ... Never tgought of moving on... My heart was still living those past moments spent with you... Your love... Your care... Was all i had of you...

A. There was no day in my life in which i didnt remember you... In fact.. . You werr my inspiration... In all my lyrics... In my music... In each abd evry thing i did.. I remembered my topper meher... ( and he smiled a bit after saying this )

m. promise me... you wont leave me ever again... i wont be able to live without you... any single day of my life.-... i want tyou with me... i wan to be with you... i love you abheer... ireally love you...

a. i love you too meher... i love you ...

And... He cupped mehers face... And kissed her on her cheeks. .. ... And kissed all the raindrops which were on her face ...mher felt his love after 8 years of such a long didstance.. such hatered ... misunderstandingd.. they came to an end and they were again ... with each other... with the love they had hidden in thier hearts for almost 8 years have come to an end... .. They hugged each other... Again... And this time... Very gently... Meher rested her head on his chest...

So guys... How you like it!!!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Heyloo😃
Very nice os I loved it😳 amazing try Meher and Abeer ohh ❤️ they are so beautiful loved the os nice try keep it up👏
Edited by LatersBaby - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome, please continue and can I ask LatersBaby as to where you got your profile picture from? Is it from a flashback, but I didn't see it on TV which episode is it from? Well I was watching it online p but please tell me which episode it's from
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's just superb
Too good
I am looking forward for your next os,ff etc
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Posted: 10 years ago
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its awesome yaar...plz do write more and if possible plz pm me..i wil b busy till august..so i will c pms..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely os..
loved the way u have sed the words to describe the situation..
thanks for writing the ps and do write more..
and pm me ur all updates.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely very nice os plz do write more
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i never knew you were in this forum
i am following this serial since the release of the first promo
good to find you too in here dear
by the way amazing os
as amazing as always
do write more in here too

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Love your os and you should continue it and write more. Please pm me your os's.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sabz13

Awesome, please continue and can I ask LatersBaby as to where you got your profile picture from? Is it from a flashback, but I didn't see it on TV which episode is it from? Well I was watching it online p but please tell me which episode it's from

I got this from google dear 😳

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