Arvi SS: Trust( Uptaded on Page-24) - Page 21

Originally posted by: _trish_

hey sunidhi nice starting dear👍🏼arjun's care for purvi is so sweet, u expressed it so beautifully 😳

in 2nd part, baby want something 😆love that imli beat😉 i can totally imagine the sceneside by side their sweet romance there's a sad moment also 😭 but u wrote it perfectly yaar😊

in 3rd, the whole family is sad😔n manav ko sad time pe bhi gussa kyu aata hai?🤔n finally purvi ne apne bare me socha, now ArVi have 2 girls, nice 😊

good going sunidhi 👏i'll catch up all the parts soon ok😊

Originally posted by: MadloverofRD

Thank you so much Trisha for the sweet and beautiful comment 😊 . I am glad you liked it .

Originally posted by: ashvikian4life

hey sunidhi 🤗 sorry for the late reply dear just wanna say that if i dont reply to your ss instantly that doesn't mean that i have not seen it. do you think its possible that you updated and i have not read??😲 i keep a track of this paagal forum through my phone also so i get to know what you have updated 😉, its just that i take some time to comment , that's it😳.

coming to the update ,i am very happy to see the kool kirloskar family moment 😎with out the dramatic loud deshmukhs 🤡. i had always wanted to see the the kirloskars together and you did it , thanks for that. so pari and papa are now a team for the reunioun of pia and mumma😉 superb. and then the pia and purvi scene was simple yet meaningful , i am glad that purvi is trying her best to come close to pia and i feel it will happen soon.

😆 poor burglar didnt knew that he entered the kirloskar mansion. pari is so brave and she knows how to make chutney of such theifs😈 i am sure if arjun would have been there he would have beaten the living lights out of him😡 . it was so sweet to see the fear , anger and love for pari from arjun , thats why he is the best dad😛.

poor buzer i also have a pet so i know how it feels when they get hurt or something happens to them. glad that finally pia's fear for buzer is fading away😊.

i dont know what you will write in this ss , but i really want to se few things like some heartfelt scenes between dk and arjun and i want to see purvi pregnant again and this time i want to enjoy arjun being by her side all the time . arjun to be her side when she give birth to her baby etc.

you did a good job👏. waiting for your next update dear😃

Originally posted by: _trish_

it's really nice yaar 👏 i'll comment after reading all updts

dear, there's a suggestion for u, whenever u get enough time make an index at the first page with the updt page links. So that the new readers of ur FF can find the pages easily 😊 n tumhara FF kaafi crowded hai after next few updts dhundna mushkil hoga 😉

Originally posted by: _trish_

finally i finished all the parts 😃

4th, oh this purvi is little different from actual purvi, i like that 😉 but she has the kind heart. Awww... cute and emotional part yaar

5th, purvi is trying hard to be a good mother for pia 😳 n she is doing it really good. I liked the pet name BUZER 😉 hope he n pia get frnds soon. Awww... arjun is smiling and sleeping 😳 m sure he was dreaming purvi. Pari is so sweet and smart 😉 nice part

6th, ArVi romance kisne kaha tum romantic scenes nahi likh sakti?? it was so romantic 😳 u know ek couple ka romantic scene is incomplete without towel and bathroom 🤣 anyways, it was so sweet n romantic 😳 and pari ka kya kahena wah beti ho toh aisi 😆 and purvi's care for pia is just so perfect

7th, i love the pari arjun bonding. Oh this part is goes to Brave Pari she is really very brave n sunidhi u wrote it so perfectly. Poor buzer 😔 i feel sad for him but Now pia is ok with him 😊

Awesome dear updts dear 👏 keep it up. Do pm me ok 😊 n sorry in 2 parts the like button was not working so plz hope u dont mind

Originally posted by: similuvashvik

Arrre waaahhh Sunidhi teri icha puri ho gyi. See ur comments r so long fr ur ss ...Dekha maine kaha tha na shuruvaat krni zaroori thi isliye maine krdi 🤣 n meri dono partners ne ye silsila kaayam rakha... See dono shreya commented so big 🤣