Better late than never arvi FF chapter 8 page 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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here u go chapter 3 i hope that u guys like it.😛. tell me if u 👍🏼 it or 👎🏼. plz comment and constructiv critisism is very welcomed.

Chapter 3

Everyone except Purvi was sitting by table when there was a knock on the door. Who will come this early in the morning everyone thought.

Archu: sundari go look whos at the door

Sundari went and to open the door she saw four people standing there with expansive clothing. Sundar who is it archu asked while sundari escorted the guest to the living room, one by one K and D family walked towards the living room Archu was the last one to enter the room.

Savita: kuan hu tum???

Angeli: woh hum...

Archu: aaappp!!!

Savita: archu tum woh log ko janthi ho?

Arvchu: jiii aiii, who ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA , aur Angeli, Akash, Nandikishore.

NK:woh aunty its NK now u know short and sweet.

Archu: sorry aur NK.

Dk:ARNAV SINGH RAIZADA. The owner of Raizada empire. The biggest man in the business world. Archana tum issiko kese janti hoo.

Archu: darasal woh purvi ki biological family

When she said that everyone was shocked. And a lot of question came into their mind. Before they could ask anything Arnav interrupted.

Arnav: aunty purvi kaha he.

Archu: woh upar tajare horahae. Tum log jaha kya kar raho.

Angeli: aunty aap bolgaye. Ajj to purvi ka janamdin hai

Archu: kya, hum to bol gaye. Everthing has happened so quickly these days that I forgot that it was Purvis birthday.

Just as she said that purvi started to walking down the stairs not noticing the guest but when she was midway she notice her blood family standing in the living room. She got a big smile on her face that no one had seen the last couple of months.

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akash:

arnav:

anjali:

NK:

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Posted: 12 years ago
#22
ooo cool update soon and just unite arvi
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Please continue soon:)
Missed Arjun:(
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#24
add me 2 ur pm list.i will read this soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
jst read all updates.i loved it 😊.waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#26
Really nice story! Please add me to your PM list :)
jasminerahul thumbnail
Posted: 12 years ago
#27
Really liked it a lot.Arvi & Arhi 2gether in 1 ff.too good.but plz give this story a title.Poor purvi.she has 2 c arjun-ovi infront of her.Raizada family is Purvi's own family?ow?Is Purvi arnav's sister?when they were there,how come Purvi become alone & archana adopted her?thx 4 adding pics in btw.plz update soon.plz giv long updates.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

Really liked it a lot.Arvi & Arhi 2gether in 1 ff.too good.but plz give this story a title.Poor purvi.she has 2 c arjun-ovi infront of her.Raizada family is Purvi's own family?ow?Is Purvi arnav's sister?when they were there,how come Purvi become alone & archana adopted her?thx 4 adding pics in btw.plz update soon.plz giv long updates.


plz give suggestion on titel name, i suck at naming things. give a few names and i will choose😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
So Purvi is related to the Raizadas! Nice... Hopefully she goes to stay with them
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
hey! I have one request in the title can you add FF (fanfiction) to it so people know it is fanfic not a normal topic :)

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