Pyaar Mohabbat ... Aashiqui. //SS// ArVi Ch1 pg 1

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Esha

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Aw thank you!

Let's see how well everyone else thinks this is:) like i said, more feedback, the better!

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geetrana45

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Wow what a superb start👏just loved it.Really excited for next update I wish u keep writing and I keep reading on and on.I know this is just start there's lot to come OMG so excited ArVi can't control pls update soon I know u r best when it comes to ArVi and AshVik.🤗

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kath1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#13

love it 👏 pls update soon 😊

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arvifan1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#14

wowww esha this chapter was just amazing 😳 Loved it...Cant wait fr the next part at all...plz update soon 😊

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Huma

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Posted: 12 years ago

#15

Absol amazing Start eshu ❤️
im super xcited to read next part update jaldi jaldi 😃

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Jagruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#16

Eshu Loved,Loved Chap 1
First of all..Title and Banner of ur FF ...just awesome ❤️

I really loved chap 1
read it so many times already..its written beautifully..every scene u described,i can just see all that happening in front of my eyes
Ahh I like Arjun's attitude..😆
and Purvi as a repair women..Great
Cant wait to read Chap 2 😛😛
Update Soon Eshu..*jumping*
Thanks for this fab update..🤗

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Esha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#17

comments sirf itna hi ... lol :(

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Ashlaika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#18

Eshu - loved the 1st chapter!!! Fabulous work as usual and great concept.

Hmm... Arjun knows Purvi trusts him and she really does. Instincts are great forces!

Cannot wait to see how Purvi gets Arjun to kick the smoking habit. She will, wont she? Her powers are great like that I hope :D hehehehehe.

Im soo looking fwd to chapter 2. Pls hurry up :P. U have ardent fans like myself waiting.

p.s My choti se problem. Some of us are hindi challenged, so while small and common words are easy to pick up. Full sentences and paragraphs in hindi are not. Can u pls translate for us too. Pleaseee :D Thank you!

Great job again and keep it coming! :D