MY KADOOS PARI UPDATED ON PG14 19/6/13 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61
Just read all the parts.. and must say they are awesome!
i enjoyed like anything!
keep it up 👍🏼

looking forward to other parts!
please update it soon, can't wait ! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice update dear...😛
do update as soon as posiible😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
one question.. arjun how come dint identify purvi?
i mean he dint see baby kirloskar's face at all??
even if the hairstyle is covering a part of the face but still u can identify.. right?
Edited by rithvikasha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woooww.jst read all updated.awesome.gr8 job dear.keep going...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww nice update.. 😃 plz update soon...waitng fr ur next part... 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update ..loved the office part ..update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rithvikasha

one question.. arjun how come dint identify purvi?

i mean he dint see baby kirloskar's face at all??
even if the hairstyle is covering a part of the face but still u can identify.. right?

its because ovi changed purvi's face features like her eye lashes,her nose ring.,mole on her chin like this she made many changes and many moreso that arjun cant identify her not only this ovi changed purvi's way of walking,talking everything
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68

thanks for all those who read and commented on the story

i will try my best to keep the story intresting

part 10:

rohan :hi purvi,hi ovi what hapeened both are looking sad

ovi:kuch nahi bus meri kismath karab hain

rohan:kyun kya huva

purvi:you know iv joined office and ovi came for modeling project

rohan:mujhe yeh sab pata hain isme kya naya hain

purvi:ovi needs to go to London, Paris, France and all for her modeling

rohan:oh that's great whats the problem in it

purvi:problem yeh hain who akela jana hain

rohan:are you kidding who koi choti bachi nahi let her go and explore

ovi:thanks rohan mein bhi yahi keh raha hoon manjavo na purvi plzzz and made a puppy face

purvi:kuch bhi kaho ovi I will not agree how can I let you go alone

rohan:ok ok purvi do you have faith in me

purvi:ofcourse you're a good friend of mine and I totally have faith in you

rohan:ok then I will go with ovi problem solved

ovi:yayyy

she went and hugged rohan

purvi saw this and smiled

rohan:ok rohan but plzz take care of her mein tumhari barosa se meri behan ko janederahi hoon plzz take care of her

ovi:plzz purvi don't show bidai scene of hindi serials im going for 1 and half month only naa

rohan:don't worry purvi I will take total care of ovi

purvi:ok bye I need to go to office im getting late

in office

staice:baby I need leave for 2 days

purvi:why stacy

stacy:my friend died so I want to meet her family

purvi:why do you need 2 days for it just go to see her final cremation and come to office again

stacy:please baby she is my best friend I need to go and spend some time with her family

purvi:she is dead now though you go she will not come again why do you need to go

stacy is crying

arjun saw all this he stormed out of his cabin

arjun:stacy go im giving you leave and im sorry for your friend

stacy:thanks mr kiloskar

arjun:baby meet me in my cabin now

purvi:arjun why did you call me I have lot of work to do

arjun:are you out of scences baby that girl wants to see her friend for last time and your asking her to do the work

purvi:isme galath kya hain who ladki nahi ayegi even if she goes then why should she spoil some time

arjun:mujhe laga ek aurath ko risthe ki bare mein bahoth kuch janthi hain aur woh ek rishte ki keemath janthi hain lekin tum

purvi:agar abki bashan katham hogaya toh mein chelthi hoon I need to work

purvi is about to go but arjun held her and pulled towards him

arjun pov:mujhe aise kyun lagtha hain tum meri purvi ho

purvi moves away and she waves her hand before him

purvi:arjun arjun arjun where are you

arjun:nothing go and do your work

purvi did her work and called stacy

purvi:hello stacy its me baby

stacy:yha baby any imp work you mail me ill try to complete

purvi:can you please tell me the address of your friends house

stecy told her address

purvi went their

stacy:baby you're here

purvi:sorry stacy for all the things I told you this morning im sorry

purvi hugged her stacy is shocked

purvi:stacy where are her parents

stacy shows her the girls mother

she is devasted she sat like a dead person

stacy:everyone are trying to make her cry so that she dosent go into shock but no one was able to do

purvi went near her and took her hand in her

purvi:I know you are very sad that your daughter went far way from you but im sure she is here only she is seeing you

the women saw purvi

purvi:please cry let out all your sadness if you don't do it your daughter will be crying seeing you in this state she cannot leave this world let her go for that you must show your emotions

I know being a mother its not easy I can understand as I myself a mother but for some moment think as a daughter how would you feel when your mother is sad for you and she is depressed for you

The same way even your daughter is crying seeing you

The women hugs purvi and cries

Stacy got another shock

Stacy:what is this girl morning she spoke as if the relations are just for name sake but the way she spoke now wow

purvi:stacy I know what are you thinking that what this girl is changing her character morning one type now one type

stacy noded her head and stared at stacy

purvi: im doing all this on purpose take 1 week leave I will manage and auntie needs someone to love her if you stay with her then she feels her daughter is around and she comes out of this greif soon and plzz don't tell anyone about this take care bye

stacy:bye baby

purvi went to her house

pari and ovi are playing with each other

rohan is busy getting teased by them

pari:hi fairy

purvi went ad took her in arms

purvihi pari beta what did you learn in school today

pari:I learnt rymes and 1 to 10 numbers

purvi:wow meri pari bahoth kuch seeka vusko book lagrahi hena

pari:haan bahoth book

purvi:first ill freshen and then ill make something for you

purvi went and freshened she prepared milkshake and magi for everyone

purvi:pari yelo khao

pari and ovi ate together

purvi went in the balcony and stared in the sky

rohan:purvi tum yaha kya kar rahe ho

purvi:kuch nahi bus aise hain

rohan:thanks purvi

purvi lokked at him confused

rohan:jab tk tum pari ki jindagi mein ayi tab tak pari bahothi spoilt,alone and confused child thi she used to crave for love witch she never got from her parents

purvi:haan mein janthi hoon vuski dono maa baap gusar gayi hai naa

rohan:no no purvi they did not die who jinda hain actually vuski maa vusko chodkar chaligayi she is not dead and her father never spend time with pari

purvi had tears in her eyes

rohan:vuski papa vuski mama ko itni pyaar karthi hain ki who vuski kudh ki beti ko door rakha so that he never remain his wife

purvi sees pari with concern

rohan:that's why thanks for coming in her life purvi

purvi:nahi rohan pari bhi meri life mein bahoth kuch changes ki

purvi left from their and went near pari

rohan looked at all the three girls before him

precap:arjun comes to know his mistake regarding pari

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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
nice update dear..
hope purvi gets to know that pari is really her daughter.
and both arvi gets together again
Edited by pkarvi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
Update was worth waiting :)
Too excited about the precap ! Which mistake is Arjun realising !
Do update the next part soon :)

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