ATOOT PYAAR KA BANDHAN.. part 4 updtd pg 9 - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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plz update it fast cant wait

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Rithika u r a great writer...It is a treat to read ur ss,ff..I luv arjun restlessness..Nw eagarly waiting 4 arvi meeting plz updt soon nd plz pm me..Meghna
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
OMG!!!!!!!!!! Fantabulous, Marvellous, amazing!!!!!! 😃😊😉
Love ur writing...👏⭐️

Awesome update 😉
thanks for the pm and update soon...😳😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice Update!
Looking forward to the next chapter...
Update Soon and thanks for the pm!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesom update rithz
wowiee Arvi in same meeting pls update soon :)

Edited by Huma- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome update rithi,plz update the next part soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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superb update...love it
plzz...update soon
thanx for PM.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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so here comes the next part..

PART-THREE:

DESHMUKH MANSION:

All the four reached the house and then purvi will go into her room immediately and changes her dress and comes down and asks manav to lets go.. archana stops them..

Archu: where are u going purvi?? U know na we need to go to orphanage…

Purvi : yes mom I know it but today im gonna give my first presentation officially and we have a very big meeting today and I need to prove myself.. pls ma let me go.. from today im joining the office officially and today is the day where I can prove and show what I have learnt form the past 6 months from dad..so pls allow me na..

Archu: but orphanage??

Purvi: ma I promise u as soon as I complete my presentation I will come of and papa will handle the rest of the formalities.. ok… by the time u will go and start their I will reach..

Archu; (thinks for a while..) its ok.. but remember come fast ok..

Purvi: ok.. (with a smile)

Archu: all the best.. u should crack the deal..

Purvi: thank u ma.. and I will..

Saying this she takes blessing from both the aaji's and archu and manav and then wishes from ovi and leaves to meeting..

MALHOTRA MANSION:

Arjun will be getting ready to meeting but he loses his important file which also contains the presentation for the day some where in his room.. so by the time he will get it it will be late and so he goes on hurry to meeting..

AT MEETING:

Almost 10 companies have come to crack the deal and the Deshmukh's company (DK industries) got their chance to give their presentation in the 5th place and the malhotra's company (arjun's company) have their turn at 7th place..

By the time arjun reached the meeting hall purvi will be giving presentation and arjun will enter the hall hurriedly and will sit in his place.. as he gets calm and sits and listens to her voice he feels something weird in him.. he feels as if he heard this voice some where and will be trying to listen more cautiously to her voice.. he will not be able to see her face as a pillar was in front of him which was obstructing his view…

As she completes her presentation he comes out of the trans state and will try to see her but suddenly the manager of the host company comes to talk with arjun regarding the registration.. As he completes the talk and looks around he searches for her but will not be able to find her…

After all the presentations are over it will be announced that DK industries had won the project and this gives arjun more frustration.. He will be confused and thinks " since I came they could never win over us but today they banged this prestigious deal.. the presentation was excellent and I think this is the finest and perfect presentation of them and I think that made them get the project.."

He then calls his secretary and asks to find out about the employee who prepared the presentation and leaves the place with little confusion and little anger..

AT THE ORPHANAGE:

Purvi and ovi will give gifts to all the kids and will be tensed somewhere about the presentation and suddenly she sees manav there.. she rushes to him and asks what happened..

Manav: my baby has done it. U won my dear..

Purvi: papa that means we got the deal…

Manav signals yes and then she jumps in joy and hugs manav.. she was very happy and then archu and ovi also hug her and congratulate her..

They distribute sweets to kids on this happy occasion and they leave home and celebrate their happiness with the whole family… they will have a great time and then will go to sleep happily..

MALHOTRA'S MANSION:

Arjun after coming home will be upset that he couldnot crack the deal.. and will sit in the hall and thinking about the mistakes he made in the presentation… then his parents come there..

Arun: what happened beta why are u so angry? Did u lose the project??

Arjun: yes dad.. I couldnot crack it..

Anjali: then who got it??

Arjun: DK group of industries…

Arun: what DK?? They were always behind us since 1 year and today they got such a big deal..

Arjun: yes dad that is the matter which is disturbing me.. since one year they could never stand before us in market and today they got the deal..

Anjali: whats so new in it.. it can happen na…

Arjun: no mom.. when u lose ur value in the market once it is very tough to get it back but they managed it and u know once they were top and were best than us and after I took our company I made them face defeat in almost all the deals and today they did it..

Anjali: arjun I don't know much about business but I can only say that winning and losing and all this is a cycle once one will win other time other will…

Arjun: its ok mom and even I do agree with it but in business we need to know how did the others win over us and im on it now..

Anjali doesn't understand anything and asks what but arjuns says nothing and goes away..

IN THE NIGHT:

Arjun had his dinner and went to sleep.. he was thinking about the employee who made this presentation was somewhere eager to know about her.. Thinking so he went to sleep..

In the sleep arjun could hear the voice which he heard at the meeting.. the voice was just ringing in his ears again and again.. the voice made him feel that he knew this voice since many days and had a deep connection with the voice.. his sleep was a merely a trans one.. he was trying to get up from the sleep but couldnot and the voice was not allowing to sleep.. Suddenly he could hear.. ARJUN.. in the same voice in his dream.. he could see himself turning back at that voice and smiling…

This made him get up suddenly in a shock from the sleep.. he was totally confused and sat in the same position for sometime then drank water and thought.. " why is this voice chasing me like this?? What relation do I have with it and why should I hear my name in this voice, why should I be happy at this voice and why do I feel so attached with it??"

So many questions were running thru his mind and he just sat like that in a confused state..

pls do like or comment and even both..

hope u all liked it..

with love

Rithz..😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG!!! Rithi thank u so much dear :) was waiting for u to update it n finaly u did it..! Im loving the bond btw purvi,ovi n armaan . So finaly arjun heard purvi's voice n thinking abt her :) hope these two meet eachother soon n update it soon..!
Edited by Ashvikfan - 12 years ago
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Rithi 1 thng more love u :) my telugu sistaa ..!
Edited by Ashvikfan - 12 years ago

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