ATOOT PYAAR KA BANDHAN.. part 4 updtd pg 9 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
rithz damn interesting update soon 😃
AATOOT PYAAR KA BANDHAN👍🏼

my suggestion!
mil jate hain jo bane ek duje ke vaaste <3 but its too long😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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rithika its awsome girl 👏 👏... pld do update soon its very intrestng... loll i can imagine how this new arjun purvi would feel when they meet... remember magadheera scene when hero touches indu's hand he gets vibrations😊 i hope arjun too feels the same 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Arjun wud only hv instincts.. Buh purvi.. She wud b all oblivious.. Arjun's love.. Stronger thn anythn.. 😊

Oh so dis is y Archana n Manav wudnt tl ovi n purvi abt thr parents n now evn Archana knows tht its Arjun's baby !
Thank god.. Ovi aint related to hr past 😆 😆 N now as she hs her aai too,I agn hope she wudnt turn a brat.. 😕
One more thng,I really likd how purvi took dat promise of bein mahaan 😆 😳

Buh wht did Arjun say to DK??? Hmmm.. A secret.. Eager to kno.. Whts it !
Update soon.. Waitin :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Pihu.k11

Arjun wud only hv instincts.. Buh purvi.. She wud b all oblivious.. Arjun's love.. Stronger thn anythn.. 😊

Oh so dis is y Archana n Manav wudnt tl ovi n purvi abt thr parents n now evn Archana knows tht its Arjun's baby !
Thank god.. Ovi aint related to hr past 😆 😆 N now as she hs her aai too,I agn hope she wudnt turn a brat.. 😕
One more thng,I really likd how purvi took dat promise of bein mahaan 😆 😳

Buh wht did Arjun say to DK??? Hmmm.. A secret.. Eager to kno.. Whts it !
Update soon.. Waitin :)

he must have told about ovi baby's real dad name😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum update dear! 😊 plz update the next part soon...eagerly waitng 😳...by the way loved the ff name 😊 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: aathya

rithika its awsome girl 👏 👏... pld do update soon its very intrestng... loll i can imagine how this new arjun purvi would feel when they meet... remember magadheera scene when hero touches indu's hand he gets vibrations😊 i hope arjun too feels the same 👍🏼


arey aathya even if write the same then how can my FF be different so u will see something different here...😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey, i read it 2day o9ly nd believe me its dmn intrstng. Owsm track nd lvly cc.
M sry i cnt cmnt early coz my contnung xm.
I wish i'll be bck soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi everyone.. thanks alot for ur wonderful comments so here is the first part..
read and enjoy...

PART-ONE:

Position of Deshmukh family:

After the death of Arjun, purvi, ovi and onir archana and manav decided to leave the chawl which contained all the memories of the past and hence manav purchased a new building in a good area and was living with archana and savita and his two grand daughters.. but he treat them as his daughters..

After few years damodar died and even sulochana also came after manju and vinod left to dubai..

Tej and sunny got settled in Canada and sunny was handling the business there.. soham was accepted by the family and was living in London and sachin became a very famous lawyer and was living in delhi along with their families.. they all love the daughters of purvi and ovi a lot as they miss their sisters a lot…

Archana named her grand daughters with their mother's names and hence purvi's baby is purvi and looks like her and ovi's baby is ovi and looks like her too.. These two knew nothing about their parents and never asked it too.. In the childhood itself they understood that asking about their parents will make everyone sad so they never asked about it..

Though they atleast wanted to know how their parents looked like but they never asked it and even they never had the chance of finding it as nothing about their parents was in their house.. They just know the names of their parents.. that is it…

Archana and manav kept all the things which were the memories of their kids in the chawl house and locked it.. when ever they feel sad they would go and spend sometime their but this was not know to anyone in the house.. even sulochana's house was also abandoned and was left like d chawl house..

22 years passed by with the happy and sad moments in their lifes.. but however Purvi and ovi filled their lives with some colours.. for all the four archana, manav, savita and Sulo Purvi and ovi are their world.. what ever they do they do it for them.. in fact these were the extremely 2 lucky girls who got such a caring and loving family even when they had no parents…they even call there grand parents as mumma and papa..

MARCH 18(some year don't ask which one as I cant say):

It was 23rd year after Arjun purvi ovi and onir died in an accident…and it was even the birthday of purvi and ovi too..

Archana was sleeping in her room and then suddenly got up from the sleep with a shock… manav was shocked to see archana like that and asks her whats the matter??

Archu: (in a tensed mood) manav I need to tell u something…

Manav: what archana?? Tel me.. first u calm down and drink water..

Archu: (drinks water) and says manav I always get a weird dream every year on this day only.. I never shared it with u or anyone else..

Manav: dream?? What dream archana??

Archu: manav.. always on this day I get a dream in which I can see purvi in which she will lying on the bed in the hospital and will be saying that I will never leave u aai and will be back to u but after saying this she will die and I can see the face of a small baby in it.. I don't why I get this dream only on this day every year.. I remember that I have seen purvi dieing in front of me and I thought that was the effect but I cant get why it always comes only on this day??

Manav: (thinks for a while) I think god wanna convey u something thru this dream..

Archu: convey me.. what??

Manav: I think he wanna tell u that the purvi who is now with us is none other than our daughter itself.. I think that is what this dream meant.. and u see even purvi's every action and thought are just like her mom… sometimes I just get confused that whether im seeing the old purvi or the new one…

U see archana child may be like her mom but so much resemblance is just impossible.. and see ovi looks like her mom but she is not same in everything.. she is quiet different from her mom in many ways..

Archana then remembers the scene where purvi dies and then baby is born then she will feel that purvi's baby might be none other than purvi herself and will feel happy…

It was almost 6:00 in the morning and archana and manav moves to purvi and ovi rooms to wake them up and wish them Happy birthday and as they need to go to temple for the puja…

Purvi and ovi's room:

Both have very big separate rooms according to their choices but both the rooms are connected internally and separated with a glass partition in middle and the glass partition is painted with a pic of purvi and ovi together… due to painting glass is lightly transparent.. there is a glass door in the partition too thru which u can move into both the rooms from inside only…

The part of ovi's room is completely painted in pink completely girly colour and she has pics and posters of great models stuck on the walls.. As she was a model herself her room is always messed up with clothes and cosmetics.. Her book shelf is completely filled with fashion magazines.. She loves dolls and filled the rest of room with them…

Purvi's room has a classy look.. It is painted in sandal wood colour and gives a really classy and decent look…She loves to read books so her shelves are always filled with books of academics, novels and stories.. she loves painting too so she has a painting board at one corner of the room and all the instruments needed for it beside it.. Her writing table is filled with files of office and her laptop and presentation cd's etc.. She has been working under her papa manav and getting trained in handling the projects and office..she too loves dolls but she has only one big teddy in her room which she hugs and sleeps..

Ovi was sleeping peacefully in her room and Archana and manav went into the room and woke her up and wished her for her birthday.. she was very happy and went to get ready on the advice of her mom..

Purvi was sleeping in her room and was dreaming something.. she could see a deserted place that too in dark and no one are around.. she could see a girl in white dress and then a white car moving on the road.. Then she could see a temple like thing and the same car stopping in front of that temple..

While she was seeing this archana and manav entered her room and woke her up.. she got up in a shock and relaxed when both of them wished her for her birthday.. after thanking them she went to get ready for the temple…

About Arjun:

He was born to Mr. Arun Malhotra and Mrs. Anjali Malhotra.. So he was named as ARJUN MALHOTRA which was a combination of both his parents names.. He is the only son and is very attached to his mom and dad and very free with his mom.. she is his first and best friend.. He is more interested in business and wanted to be a successful business man.. Though he is just 22 years old he left his studies after graduation and took over his dad's business and almost he is handling everything.. he is very talented and bagged many deals in this short time..He is good at heart but doesn't express anything in front of anyone.. he gives an appearance of an arrogant and insensitive person infront of everyone..

MALHOTRA'S MANSION:

Anjali got up early and went into his sons room to wake him up and wish him but to her surprise he was already awake and was working on his lappy and was talking with one of the employee… he then sees his mom and ends the call and smiles looking at her..

Anjali: happy birthday beta.

Arjun: thank u mom…

Anjali: so even today u are working… oh god u are too much than ur dad..

Arjun: mom.. what ever may be the day we need to do our work right so im doing that…

Anjali: its ok I cant argue with u but as today is your birthday u need to fulfil ur duties as my son also so pls get ready to go to temple..

Arjun: mom u know I don't like all this..

Anjali: arjun I never force for anything but u know today u need to come with me to temple.. u only come to temple on your birthday every year rest all other days u neither go to temple nor even pray to god..

Arjun: ok ok ok.. I will come pls don't start ur lecture again… I will get ready and come fast.. ok..

Anjali: ok come fast…

DESHMUKH HOUSE:

Purvi got ready in a lehenga which is purple in colour with a green netted duppatta.. she was so simple but too adorable.. she left her hair freely with small clutch and then wore bangles of matching green colour… And she came down.. Ovi got ready in a salwar suit which is also of same colour combination of purvi..both see and wish each other happily and hug each other.. seeing them like this all the members of the family will be happy..

Purvi and ovi relation:

Both ovi and purvi love each other so much. Both can do anything for each other.. they always fight with each other but patch up very soon. when ever there is an occasion they both get ready in same coloured dresses may be same or different pattern.. Everyone in the house are happy with their relation, love and understanding for each other…no one could ever come between them and they never allowed anyone to come in between them…since the past 22 years they are not only sisters but also best buddies…

PRECAP:

Arjun and purvi at same temple…

Pls do like or comment.. glad if it will be a comment..pls dont bash if its lame..

and pls do suggest if u want any changes.. will love it more...😊

with love

Rithz...😊

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Posted: 12 years ago
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rits its just wow...loved the relation of Ovi and Purvi in this FF...also Arjun too he is the same as before and also loves his mom...Ovi and Purvi wore the same color dress...Awwee what a sisterly love...Purvi is also same as before...and Archana getting dreams of Purvi coming Back so this purvi is the previous one only...

loved this part a lot Rits...
and thanks for the fast update...

Precap is making me 😳

Try to update soon...
Edited by pkarvi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Love it rithi purvi,ovi and arjun bday same day,love the precap arjun and purvi in the same mandir,thanks for pm me rithi plz update the next part jaldi jaldi

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