ff twist n turns -journery of arvi

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hi iam new here

i made my own own ongoing track hope u like my eng is not so good but i like to write ff

puuni's weeding

every 1 enjoy there suddenly archana takes soham there evrery1 shocked n da same time happy savita tai hugs him manav in angry mood then suddenly soham comes there n say forgviness 4 him then archana ,purvi all r emotional n asked forgiveness 4 him to manav then after thissoham hurts n back to go then manav's said stop manav's heart melted n he forgivess him then all r enjoy again after that purvi get a call (no 1 answer) then again purvi's cell beebed purvi is sumwhere punni is there n about to pick up the phone thabi manju aathi n said hurry up jaldi kar court main mr.mittal (forget name)tera wait kar rahe archana manav every1 go again purvi phone beeped purvi take archana shoulted purvi disconnect da phone
COURT
there is punni's wedding performed
purvi phone beeped n purvi goes outside n take a call other side a person call
i know ur secrect those u don't tell any1
purvi- what's ur mean
blackmailer-guess
purvi -shadup n about to think disconnect
blackmailler - don't do this otherwise i told all ur family after knows that what da reaction ' what they feel u know n arjun also n about ovi what's she react
purvi -which screct
ur pregge period n whose da fatther
purvi what's u want
bm- meet u
purvi -where
bm -he told sumplace i.e on cliiffn take 5000/-- on tomoorow
purvi- what cliff 5000 how i manage
punni's wedding over there ia shodow - sum1 1 hear this conversation(whose that)
every 1 in da house manju looking but other hand hapy n distrubed da those mittal gave him
manju -purvi dis gift 4 u
purvi open it there is a necklace
manju - its too expe (throghts mera kitna mehga hoga iska itna mehgaha hai) 5000 thousand cost hogi
purvi's phone beeped again
blma- massed managed come tommorrow i wait
purvi looking feared
tommorrow -
on da cliff
whois da blackmailer?n who was in da coutiyer
hope u like or me cont. m english is not so good hope u understand
i wrote in english becoz i want to improve my eng 😳
Edited by neeru84 - 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
gud part but i think do improve your english a bit😉...hope you dont mind...😊...continue soonn...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx pkdhoshi like it n i don't mind becoz i know it
next part cond.
on the cliff
purvi is there wid da money
summovements there behind da tree
sum person comes there (face hide)
blackmailer- so u r come greatt
purvi shouted tum
person comes near
purvi balam soham dad
ya i am
purvi - tum mere bheche kyo pade ho
balam- becoz ur family stole my child soham
purvi- soham is not ur child he is ours
my bro my aia baba son
balan nooo n angry -tum logomujhse mera bacha cheena hai
purvi-tumne sirf istam kiya aab soham is his true lace
balam v- mujhe aab isi soham chiye
purvi - baat to 5000ki thi aur tum kya jante ho
balam - raaz sub kuch
purvi kya aur kaisa
balam- kaisa yeh nahi baatukga mujhe paise aur soham chiye muu bant rakhe keliye
aur main saab janta ki tum saat mahine preggy ho auryeh baccha onir ka nahi arjun kahai
purvi - bhagne ki khoshish katri hai
tabhi balam use pakdta hai tubhi purvi cliff se neche jukte haithabhi khoi hand pakdtha hai urvi ka
he is arjun
purvi -arjun
arjun- ha purvi
there is a romantic song played
purvi in dreams smile
n suddenly balam comes - tum arjun
ha main maine sub sun liya hai purvi ghabrane ki zaarurat nahi suddenly police come there n arrest balan
purvi kal maine court main phone aaya thaa main tumhre piche aaya tum tense aur mujhe laga kuch galat ho raha hai
flashback scence shown
tabhi suddenly
a voice comes
kyaaa
ovi is there
mujhe kuch lag raha tha
main nahi yeh sab purvi
arjun mujhe dokha diya mujhese joot bola purvi- ovi listen
ovi- shade up
n goes from there
so its clear that he is balan
but twist is there is balan is real culpurit aur sum1 else
next - soham meets balan in jail
hope u like n sorry 4 my mistakes😊




Edited by neeru84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice one neeru...eargerly want to know what happened...update soon please
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Posted: 12 years ago
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next part
sohan meets balan in jail
soham - baba yeh kya kiya aapne
balan - beta yeh sab mainie tere liye kiya un lo ne tujhe mujshe door kiya
soham baba main app se kab dur hooga
balan archsna tujhe mujse dur le gayi
soham - baba nahi yeh sirf meri ek chaal hai main us ghar main sirf property ke liye gaya hoo thaki us paiso se main aapko kushi de saku
balan - suchh aab to archana ke saath kuch bhi aacha its a good news purvi ke joot main archana gayi
sohan - yeh apne aacha nahi archana se ladai main purvi se kya dushmani uske saath pura hooga phele uski sis ne purvi such a nice girl
balan - soham what happen
soham - in deshmukh house i only like purvi she is nice girl nice heart n usne aapne jeevan mai bahut bdukh dhekhe hai nmain iske liye aapko maaf nahi kar sakta now i am laving
balan - sohamm
in punni's house
every 1 happy
reception party after punn's married
ovi comes back in too much angry mood
archana ovi ovi kya hua ise
ovi doesn't listen every 1 n go da room
arjun comes wid purvi
archana what happened ro ovi why she is so angry
arjun nothing
archana n purvi tu itni daari hogi kyo hai
manauv - archana kya hoga yeh ovi
archana i talk to her
purvi -n ahi aai nahi
archana nahi ovi aahi bhi tum dono ke rishte ko lekar pareshan hai i need to talk her
archana goes to room
ovi what happened
ovi ovi open da door
every1 listen archana manav - ovi kya hua beta
ovi ovi
ovi - opened da door
archana - what dis arjun purvi nothin b/weeten them purvi now married to oonir n she has a child
ovi aai plz alone me
archana what happened
purvi - listen ovi haisa kuch nahi hai
ovi - to kaisa hai tum aur arjun chiii
archana - kya hoa ovi
ovi plzz aai aakar main baatya to rishte badal jayege
archana ovi
ovi frusted n goes from da room from da party
archana stop ovi such bata kya hoa
ovi aai leave me
archNA MAIN TERI HELP karugi SUMJNE PAAR BAATA BETA
OVI AAP JANNA HI CHATI HAI TO SUNIYE ARJUN AUR PURVI KE BEECH AAJ BHI RISHTA HAI
archana ovi
purvi ke stomach mai jo bacha hai vo arjun hai ARJUNNN ka hai
archana - ovi shut up meri purvi aaisa nahi kar saktiovi to puch lijiye purvi se hi
archana - ovi kaisi baat hai yeh
ovi puchte kyo nahi purvi such baata
archana yeh ovi kya khe rahi such hai yeh
purvi kuch kyo nahi bol nahi baata
purvi (tears in her eyes ) n goes
ovi purvi stop such baatao
purvi maine koi galti nahi kari n yeh saab pata nahi kaise hoo
i know my mistake
n per isme arjun ka koi dhosh nahi arjun ne ovi koi dhoka nahi diya yeh saab ovi se shaadi se phele
archana purvi - yeh kya kiya mera vishwass ko toda chali ja yahaa se
onir aai suniye to isme purvi galti mujhe saab pata hai aur main usse accepet kiya hai
arjun haa aa aai aur purvi onir kush hai life mai moov kar gaye hai past hai yeh saab
archna jo ho onir thanks tumne purvi ke liye jo kiya uske bache ko aapna naam par usne meri paarvarish ko dhokha diya shaadi se phele ya arjun ki shaad ke kya phakark hai
archana goes
every1 in da party whisphering arjun onir stop it n dda party over
manju - what dis sub meri beti ko bolte hai archana ki beti kya kiya
onir to manav - papa
manav plzz n goes there
a phone comes from jail to arjun
arjun yes -
arjun ,onir goes police station balan se hamhe paata laga hai ki ki is sabke pheehe uska haath nahi hai blackmailer koi aur hai
balan ne baatya ki ushe kisi ne phone karke kaha tha n balan ne uska chera nahi dekha hai usne to aapni dushmani nikali hai
black sum1 else sum other mind behind dis aur ha soham milne aaya tha
soham (onir arjun)
blackmailer se protect ki zaarurat hai
onir arjun - kya kar sakte hai
police man -purvi aur ghar ke sab phone tape karne hoge ho sakta hai bho tubharap hone kare
onir arjun arjun - tumne purvi ka khaal raha uska saath diya kaash main te paata uske baache ko naam diya mere baacha ko aapna naam de rahe ho
onir - listen arjun purvi ka baacha merabacha hai maine ushe aapne bache ki tarehe dekha hai n goes
arjun - purvi mera bacha ki maa n happy n goes










Edited by neeru84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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purvi -aai
archaNA PURVI PLZZ MUJHE AAKELA JHOD DO
SAVITA - PURVI TUMNE JO OVI ARCHANA ki paarvarish ke saath kiya uske baat bhi aapna muho kaise dikha sakti ho tum
manaav- baaba
manav- purvi beta tumne yeh kya kiya aapni aai ka dil shukhaya hai
savita - yeh hamara khoon nahi hai na tum to ek thi pata nahi kiska
archana ne tumhe pala ' humari santan hoti to aaisa nahi hota ovi chaye kitni aarogant hai , moody hai lekin kabhi archana ko niche nahi giraya teju ne mere liye shelathata ke ghar rehna manzoor kiya bhaag kar shaadi kar sakti di aur waha teju snehlata ke o rder se rahi hai n soham - usne balan se rishta tod diya
manav- aai plzz stop
savita mujhe kuch nahi bolne toge jhaa rahi hoo mai
archana - purvi ne aais kyo kiya
purvi - ovi plzz listen
ovi- purvi baas jahoo yahaa se
arjun - ovi tum purvi se kaise bbat kar rahi ho
ovi- arjun urvi tumne arjun ko mujhse chin liya
purvi feels unwell
arjun - purvi kya hoga
ovi - arjun
purvi -sudden fall(fall hone ki movement mai
onir catch her - arjun tum purvi se door ovi ko dekho purvi ka khayalrehne ka liye mai hoo n mere baache ka bhi
arjun - oonir
onir takes purvin haa aagar ovi mujhse treatment lena chaye to main zaaroor karuga purvi se aur uske bache se tumahara koi rishta nahi hai n leaves
arjun - sadly in moement n remebers all good mov wid purvi n sad song plays
next- two month paasess




Edited by neeru84 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice update ...update soon neeru
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thanx sheenamathew93
next part
in desghmukh house
ovi is there
ovi- sunny tum teju ko bahut pyaar kaarte ho use paana chateho
er mujhe dekho pyaar vyaar kuch nahi hota hope teju aur tum mil jaho
sunny ovi i respedt n i understand ur feelings but pyaar ek khoobsurat rishta hai ii tnimk arjunji ne aapke saath bura kiya lekin aab bhi aapke saath arjun hai aap lucky hai aur beautiful bhi n mujhe aapkeliye such bura lagata hai aapko shayad arjun se aacha mil sakta tha just like me just joking
ovi-sunny baas arjun mere rishte ke baare main bolne ki zarrourat nahi hai
snehlata calls
ur daughter cheted u
savita kya kiya teju
snehlata- bho baag gayi jignedh ke saath jighnedh aur teju ek dusre ke kareeb aa gaye
door rings
tejun jignesh
savita archana manav
teju yeh saab
archana teju
sunny - teju yeh kya maazak hai
teju sorry sunny , i think is much parter 4 me than u sorry i found my love in jighesh n i think i happy wid him
snehlata- dekha savita tumahari beti ko phelhe sunny aab jignesh
dhokha diya hai sunny chal n jighnesh tunhe
savita teju rukh jaa jaa yaha se sunny ko hum accept kar sakte the lekin teri yeh harkat nahi
archana teju yeh saab tujshe ummeed nahi thi
jignesh teju galat nahi hai hum dono hi ek tushre ko chalne lage
savita ,archana - tere liye iss ghar main jhahe nahi hai tunhe sunny ko dhokha diya hai kisi ke pyaar ko mazak baanaya hai
snehlata - mujhe teju sukaar nahi njignesh jaa chal sunny
teju jignesh left
sunny broken heart saw ovi

purvi- onir i am not feeling well
onir lagata hai date pass aa rahi hai hospital admit karna padeka chalo
ovi arjun
ovi drink a bootle
arjun shoulted ovi yeh kya kar rahi ho hamare bache ke saath
arjun - hamara bacha iska kya matlab hamare beech koi rista nahi hai aab
mujhe iss bache se koi matlab nahi hai aacha hai chala jaye abortion ho nahi sakta nnahi to
arjun nahi to kya
ovi arjun lzz n felling unwell
arjun- ovi n rushes to hospital
onir there arjun comes
ovi ko kuch nahi hona chayiee
onir arjun sees manav archana comes
kya huha ovi ko
manav- onir beta
onir -purvi also admiteed
a baby cry surrounded
arjun ovi
doctors - every1 fine a girl child born
manav archana hear dis so happy
arjun- kya main mil sakta hoo
doctor- i think miss understing
baby is of dr onir n onir's wife deliver a baby
aa
arjun
aapki wife ka tho operation waha hai aur aapki wife ki halat critical hai bache ko bachna mushkil hai pre majhured delivery hai







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Posted: 12 years ago
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onir - purvi how is feel now
purvi aacha lag raha hai par aai baba sath hote to
onir- bho bahar hi hai
main tumhe kolkatta le chalta kekin dr.ne mana kar ddiya tha or i also think aur tum bhi chalti ki aai baaba ke pass raho thaki aai samj sake aur tumhe maaf kar sake dekho aaj yaha hai ovi ki delivery hai aaj
purvi- ovi ki lekin uske to samay hai
pre matured hai critical
onir ovi kaise hai
onir - uske bhare maat socho bahur kar liya ovi ke liye aapne bache ke bhare main socho
archNA MANAV sees from da distance
purvi - aai baba
onir -archanajiplzz forgive her dekiye kitmni pyaari natin hai aapki kya naam rakhe ki iska
archana sees purvi n goes
manav- archana onir baby bahut pyari hai purvi jaise per archana bhi aapni jhakhe sahi hai n goes

purvi - get a phone call
phehhana blackmailer again backkk
purvi- frightened fear in eyes
onir- kya hoa purvi
onir onirr bla black mailer ka phone

onir kya
purvi - kaha jha raho ho
police station

arjun- onir kya hua
onir doen't listen
arjun goes purvi's room
urvi arjun ovi kaisi hai
arjun sahi hai
purvi arjun jaho plzz
arjun mere baby ko dekhlene do
onir ka hai
arjun- tumhre kahne se saach nahi badal jayega
arjun pick da baby on his arm
purvi- arjun aab laaho
purvi tum kyo nahi aa jati mere pass
purvi- arjun baas
arjun left😳

archana comes purvi sleeping
archana- urvi n saw da baby -tumahari jaisi hai
archana take her- nani aas aayegi nani teri
phone ring beeped
archana pickup😃
archana hear dis
black mailer comes there otherwise i kill ur baby me yahi hospital mai hoo mai toomahre baby ko kill kar sakta ho mujhse aakar milo yaha par
archana hear dis n goes
archana goes there
onir comes purvi open da eyes onir main saab asach bata dena jhatiko
onir - kya main nahi jhati blackmailer aai ko kuch pata lage yahi ki haamari shaadi nahi hoohi hai n hum sirf ek saath re rahe hai
is bache ko naaye tene ka liye asaamaj main mere only prentened to be my husband
manavhear dis
onir kya tum dono
onir paapa aab
purvi ek jhoot ka bhoj uttar gaya blackmailer kuch nahi kar sakta
manav - blackmailer
onir- kahi samay se purvi ko pheshan kar raha hai
arjun comes there
onir phone aaya
purvi shayad pata nahi main so rahi thi
onir cheak karta ho
onir ha last no se unwanted call hai phele wala no. haiaur kisi se iskhe suna hai
purvi kaun mai so rahi thi
manav - maine yaha archana ko dekha tha isliye main yaha aaya
purvi- aai aayi thi unkho ne mujhe uddaya nahi
arjun- baby ke pass note
manav- yeh archana nai diya hAI
urvi- aai aayi mujhse bina bole chali gayi aai
manav- iska matlab archana ne saab sun liya aur archana aakeli blackmailer ke piche gayi hai
arjun onir humhe kya kare

breaking news spread hosiptal
aa mall mai dhamaka hoha hai kahi log mare gaye
police station
onir mai yahi rukta ho aap log jaho
police station-
ek deadbody found hai
aur number ushi blackmailer ka lagta hai jo mr onir de gaye the
mr onir,main manav purvi ka baba
police hamhe chek karna hoga number
arjun purvi ka phone
manav archana bhi baha gayi thi
manav phone beeped
paapa onir aap jalti aayeye urgent
manav
archana, savita sulochana comes
archana nahi
arjun- blackmailer ka pata lag gaya hai
arjun - archana aai
onir- arjun kaun
koi vinay
purvi ne ek baar jikar kiya tha ikis par tumahe sakta hai past main jaho
tu usno kaha tha vinay ka vinay uska ex- finannce tha
kya he was dead aur archana aai
manav- beta savita cry
dr comes
ovi ka kya haal hai
dr sorry arjun she goes into coma
arjun- kya coma nahi aur baby
dr- baby boy hua hai

next- 5 years passes😃











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Posted: 12 years ago
#10
change my ff name
teist n turn- journery of arvi
😭😭 no 1 is there

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