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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

hey neeru dear i am so sorry for the late comment but i am liking the way your ff is progressing so please keep updating dear 😊

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Jaishrikrishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

holi day celebrate

apurva comes wid her dada dada plzz

purvi- why u here ur exams na that are not over yet go study

apurva-mamma i studied n exam will not tommorrow its day after tommorrow so prob mamma

arjun- purvi let her play

purvi- arjun but ahe fell ill na

arjun of purvi ok we play only wid gulal n not da water ok

purvi ok but not play whole day

savita sulochana tai cheek n they also do this

bhag is there

arjun play wid apurva

suddenly there is a movement

all r stop

teju n jignesh comes

savita - ruk jhaho don't come here

teju- plzz aaji plzz forgive us

teju n gignesh abut u touch her feet

she move a step forward

purvi plzz aaji forvive plzz

sulo- also savita ji plzz

teju- too long now i spend my life wid u wid my family n u know gignesh also forgive us n sunny also sheetel in his life he married a lovely becoz i came here i meet both them they r happy in there life naai(jignesh mother) also forgive but i dunno i am not happy widout ur blessing we need dis

savita - over ur ok leave

teju- plzz aaji wid u nothing in ur life

savita turn her face

purvi - aaji plzz

savita - purvi purvi told da teju she better from here

teju(about to go but suddenly faints)

purvi- teju teju what happened

jignesh teju plzz bring sum water

arjun - ya

jignesh- there is a good news

purvi true great i become mausi party time n saw savita aaji forgive them they need ours specially urs teju ur best grand daughter nan

sulochana- plzz savitaji

savita - ok but i am too much angry wid her ntold her she not shown her face to me

every1 again enjoy da holi

arjun abut to put gulaal to purvi but purvi have sum hesitation she wants abut to leave

arjun saw purvi (thinking in his mind )

dream sequence (lamhe film)

O...O...

Mohe chhedo na

O mohe chhedo na nand ke lala

Mohe chhedo na

O mohe chhedo na nand ke lala

Ki main hi brij bala

Nahi main radha teri

Mohe chhedo na nand ke lala

Ki main hi brij bala

Nahi main radha teri

Mohe chhedo na nand ke lala

Radha se hogi

Radha se hogi teri chhichholi

Aankh micholi tum humjoli

Holi main yoon mujhe kyon rang dala

Ki main hoon brij bala

Nahi main radha teri

Mohe chhedo na nand ke lala

Ki main hoon brij bala

Nahi main radha teri

Mohe chhedo na nand ke lala

purvi - what happen arjun

arjun - nothin purvi n becomes emotinal n he told how much long this wait its too long 5 years n u never comes near by me why i am nothing wid out u love u too much cann't wait

n drank too much bhaag

he took a glass of bhaang (purvi saw dis ) arjun stop now

arjun - don't why u come here not not nera plzzz i am not made 4 u na,

purvi- arjun what r u doing

arjun - leave me along don't worry 4 me i handle it myself not ur support go

purvi- no i am not leave u in dis state

arjun why u come here u don't like me na

purvi- who told u ur special in my life

arjun- don't lie

puurvi plzz arjun

arjun- ok told me u love me

i love u n say u love me

purvi - arjun shade up n goes

a bell ring beep in purvi's cell

purvi- hello

purvi- arjun arjun where r u

arjun - what happened u r not in good sates ok

she laid him on da bed

all r comes there

sulochana- what happened purvi why u r so worried

aai phone from hospital

hospital sulo said

ya where i left 4 hospital n apurva take care ur papa i come soon

doctor its a correct news

doctor- ya, ovi gains counsious she is there we gives sum medicine n that's her medicine preception

purvi- can i meet her

doctor- n make ur distrech papers

purvi- ovi how fell now

ovi- puruo

purvi- ovi ok don't speak n take a rest

ovi sees contiously towarda da door

purvi watch n told u want arjun he not come u know today is holi n he is busy in dis . he comes here soon

n about to leave

ovi- puurvi p u r v i

purvi- take a rest ovi n i come back to meet da doctor

next- punni comes to meet ovi

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Jaishrikrishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

arjun comes next day

he saw purvi there how is ovi now

purvi- she is fine now its her preception take it n abut to goes

arjun- say sorry 4 yesterday what happen wid me dunno what i told u i forget tell me

purvi- no sorry nothing happen

arjun- where r u

purvi- my time is over now ovi goes consious now i leave this place where i going dunno

arjun - u leave me

purvi (sadly) ya n tears in her eyes

arjun- what happened wid pavitra

purvi- u never cumes near him now its ur turn he is now resposibility of u and ovi n apurva ur pari also

arjun- means tum apurva ko sath nahi le ja rahi

purvi- no its ur daughter arjun i started my fresh life plzz leave me

arjun- purvi

arjun goes in ovi's room

how r u now feeling good

arjun- don't sit

arjun- u take meal today

ovi- ya purvi gives n where is she

ovi- i am happy that i come back wid ur support n love

arjun - yeh sab

ovi- don't say anything plzz ouit (main sirf tumhe dekhna chati hoo)

arjun- main doctor se milkar aath hoo n make ur disterch paper

ovi- plzz arjun don't go

arjun- i come back soon

ovi think dreams of arjun sum flashback movements

ovi in her house

arjun- from da hospital i watch u r not intrested in me]

arjun- nothing like that idoctor told u sum rest

ovi- arjun is sum1 in ur life

arjun- abut to say

(purvi behind da door say shhh no) n goes teras in her eyes

arjun-(saw purvi) nothing like that

apurva- papa who is she

ovi- its our daughter

arjun - ya ya

apu (try to say)

arjun- ur work is not completed na tommorrow ur exam after holi

apu- ya its not fair

ovi- our daughter now become big i miss her childhood pharase how she beep, noor feed her, nor play wid her

arjun- she is purvi's daughter we have son child

ovi - ohh she is onir's purvi daughter but why she is call u papa

arjun- bacchi hai

ovi- where is purvi onir, where is our child

arjun- he is sleeping n now chup take a rest not talk too much doctor advise u na

arjun- why u pack ur laggage where r u going what apu feels after u was not in her life why u leave her n also pavitra he dependent on u

purvi - ya i know why i too much wid him both r my life

arjun- so why u go we told everything to ovi

purvi- no plzz she is not in good condition i not want destroy her home

arjun- what abut u

purvi- me nothing its only gift for me that given by ovi its responsibity in absence of her i take care of her childrens

arjun- apu is ovi

purvi(cuts b/w) ya

arjun- kaise sumjhoo hoo

purvi- i am only here tab thak ovi not recover her condition is not well when she is well n ok i leave dis place n also apurva's exams over na n ur trun to take care of pavitra he is ur responsibity if i goes near him he never comes near u

go there now its time to woke up him

arjun goes in pavitra room

pavitra beta pavitra

arjun - pulls his bed cover

avitra fears n frightend suddenly wake up

pavitra who r u

arjun - ya ya ur papa

arjun -come beta come

pavitra - beat him

arjun- stop stop n frightend

purvi- whjat happened

arjun- i donn't do this its diffcult how u manage

purvi- nothing diffcult only love can work its lomg way 4 u

n she told - no beta noo noo its ur papaa dunno beat ur a good boy na shake hand

pavitra- nooo noo

purvi- mamma told u na plzz listen to me na

pavitra (frghitenly) shake hand wid arjun

arjun also

purvi- kiss ur father

pavitra- noo

purvi- ok next time n told like that ok now help me to being ready to pavitra

arjun me purvi- ya

arjun - ok

there is song played

taare zammen pher

arjun- how r u feeling ovi

ovi nice

arjun- now take doctor advise he told me sum exercises

arjun- ovi put ur leg on da floor slowly

ovi- no arjun

arjun- ya tumhe zaldi aacha hona hai na to karo

ovi- u treated me like i am child

arjun - koshish karo

ovi- no

arjun- i am wid u( in mind becoz purvi sent me here)

ovi- ok n pick arjun hand n one hnd on arjun shoulder

after sum days

ovi - i am geeting bored all da time sit sit sit no 1 give me any work

she put her leg on da floor

ovi- what happened wid me i have no any power but i try

ovi - ( goes towards a room) - which room is dis

ovi - who is there ya who is i think its sum store room why lights r off

ovi - who is ther i think sum1 laid on a bed

ovi who r u switch on da light

pavitra woke up who r u

ovi- kaun ho tum a child pavitra ur name na

pavitra - frightened

ovi - why u feel me i know u never seen me before i am ur mother

pavitra frifhtened

arjun - what's here oh sum1 in da pavitra's room may be purvi nut i saw she goes sumwhere so i think she is not may be kaka but i like to abut to show

purvi told me goes near pavitra its help u a lot n now purvi helps i get in touch wid pavitra

arjun- (goes there) ovi

arjun-(comes tightly in arjun's arms)

arjun- what happen ovi n puts back her

ovi- its our child na pavitra u told me na purvi's daughter name apu n ours pavitra cute name but why he like dis why he not come near me n u also not meet him before me

arjun told - ya he is pavitra our child but

ovi - but kya

arjun- told all da story(mentally illness)

ovi -sadly becoz of me he is like that so sorry beta

ovi- it means u care him a lot

arjun- ya i(but realise sumthing no i dunno do this)

arjun told no i not purvi cares him

ovi - purvi what she live in da onir(sulcho tai house)

arjun- after u goes in coma she take a responsibity of pavitra she take cares

ovi- oh she ok (after sum minutes)rits means purvi onir r here they stay here

arjun- ya

ovi - i wanna meet her

arjun- not now know its time to take medicine

after sum time

ovi meets purvi

ovi goes in da room

apurva - show her result i am getting good marks

purvi - show dis ur papa

apur- maama who is that aunty who live here n papa now mostly stay wid him why

purvi- she is ur mausi n dhe is ill nas so papa take cares her

ovi- apu nice u got good marks in ur exams-

apurva- ya n much intrested in ovi n goes tto show report card to papa

ovi- purvi u here why u not meet me in these days

where is onir

purvi- he is gone sumwhere for a meeting

ovi- thanks for dia in abence of me to take care a lot arjun told everything

purvi- why thanx i am ur sis na

ovi- ya a nice sis thanx n sorry 4 past misbehaves n ehere r u going why u pack ur laggage

purvi- oh onir found sum job in kolkkatta so i leave there n u comes back so take responsibity of ur house

ovi- abhi i wake n u go not too much time spend wid u ok good journery

punni- i think ovi's room is there now its time to fired her mind so many meets i need to meet her n now today i got a chane hope no 1 sees me

punni meets ovi

n told all abut onir n purvi relatiomship n arjun purvi realationdship

what now ovi reacts in next part

precap- manav meets his family every1 happy

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naomihyuga

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

nice update waiting for ovi's reaction

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Jaishrikrishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

punni told ovi all da past pharces that she losst

ovi stand (shouted ) purvi purvi

purvi- arjun go plzz ovi comes here i think

arjun- what happened her

arjun about to goes from there

ovi- stop arjun stop

ovi- why purvi why u do dis its not fair

(punni comes from da behind n smiling)

arjun- don't listen her u dunno what she do she sulochana aaji

n u what r life now

punni iam happy in my life what u do think urself u cheat my sis ovi

purvi ovi forgvi me n arjun we don't do anything in five years when u left ours n iam happy that u come back now take ur responsibity n aarjunn n i am leave now

ovi - no stop stop tell me why u do dis why u know me better na

punni- yes purvi yes tell her i am wid her

arjun - shut ur mouth ur mouth listen me not hers she not tell u everything in good manner now sit here i tell u n why u worry purvi told u na she left dis house na i am sure she come back here i know her

purvi- plzz ovi forgive me

ovi- why i forgive u

purvi- ok i leave now

ovi- stop cont me u do nothing n u not going any where its ur house n u leave apu npavitra but they react when u leave they r small kid n stop punni u always brainwash me abut purvi now u leave from here u always happy to watch divide me n purvi i know what type of lady u i am not kid now so better u leave

punni- what happen to u ovi u know na purvi arjun relationship

ovi(cuts) stop punni not mislead me now u go from there i know purvi better thau she told na she u nothing to in past five years so i beliveve her she never told lie i know her whther she tell lie or not or ok go

punni- ovi u did a big mistake in ur life future give u answer n i want to go wan't like my instant in front of purvi

purvi- what u told ovi its better i leave there no ovi its not right u came now u take ur responsibity

ovi- no iam not right now not felling good n when u go who take cares pavitran i am not here i bit selfish n apurva iam not like a typical mother

purvi- u better do dis then me

ovi- i told u not leave so u not going any ehere n where u gone i know now u n onir's n

ovi hugs purvi

arjun smile a lot

punni)in her home) shouted Mr mittal mr mittal

Mr mittal - what kya hai

punni(told everything) that ovi insult me she suffer a lot

mr mittal - chill but i do n now leave dis matter n not interferior in ovi purvi arjun they live whatever they want n u know i won da case now that chawl is mine now make a more mall there that sachin n deshmukh n sulochani aachi losses

i am happy don't spoil my mood

mr mittal where r u gone

mittal- to share my happiness wid rita

punni- i am ur wife she is not

mittal- that not ur matter n now she becomes my leagally wife soon n also not interfere in my life

punni- i want to go to court

mr mittal no u do dis i know if u do lets try sure u losses just like kranjar n deshmukhs n i keep u on roar ur family ur manu aai baba u want sis in dis age they suffer i know sum extent no 1 accept them i sure u n ur aai baba not found any roof if i throw all of u them so better leave me n my life

punni(angrily ) goes

in deshmukh house all r happy that ovi get counsious n they meet her

savita- ovi

ovi- aaji u come

savita- told all abut punni punni's life

ovi- punni ke sath aisa hi hona chaiye

purvi (in da car goes sumwhere) she saw suddenly MANAV n shouted baba baba n said stop da car

purvi- goes there baba baba

a man turned his face

that is manav

purvi - baba u (happily) missing u a lot plzz come home come back deshmukh house is not widout u we need u

manav- how r u i don't know u

plzz baba not like that aai is not in our life also so now we need u a lot more why u n aai left me ours

ok she not ther but why u u alive so why plzz come plzz

manav- purvi plzz go from there i am not intrested

baba- if u not come wid me i am not going from there

manav- ok as u wish

purvi- baba i give u a good news ovi comes back in her senses

manav(happy but suddenly ) what i do purvi all ur aforts has going in vail so better leave not any umang left in my life

;purvi- i am ziddi now u come wid me n know na balan , soham ur son

manav - don't tell me that names

purvi- sure i like tell that r that r there they live happily( thinking sorry soham i use name becoz i want my baba to back home that only da way)

purvi- sohan in ur house n take all benefits

manav- no he not he killed my archana banan i not leave u

purvi- come wid me for ur purpose i am wid u

manav- why u do dis i am not aai mkaise hai

purvi- she is not happy widout u even all r nothing widout u

manav- ok i come ok u purvi too much again give a ray of light my makasand

purvi -( now baba come back n now i sure change him just like old baba)

in deshmukh house-

teju fells not better savita goes from there turn back n about to go

teju- aaji plzz give a glass of water

savita about to go n told is every1 is here here sum 1 needs

( , sohan, sachin,sulochana, jignesh hide there )no 1 listen

sulo-(whispher)- i know purvi's ideas always work now shhh watch

savita- (off) n goes near da teju- take it

teju- aai

savita- is any 1 is here only me na take dis glass n dis fruits also

teju- thanx aai

savita- oh oh zyada nahi i am not forgive u only becoz og humanitity i do dis

teju(smiling) ok aaji n she give thumbs n all gives thumbs from da behind

bell ring open

savita open it every1 come

savita-all of u r here

sulo- savitaji open da door sum1 waiting there

savita open da door

purvi- purvi beta u

sulo- aare purvi tu iss wakt

purvi- turn

all r sees manav

savita-(happy n tears pouring downn)

teju also come stand beside jignesh

savita manav kaha chala gaya tha( too much happy)

hugs manav

manav- i come back becoz of purvi n saw sohan angirly

sooham fells uneasy n left

all of them - thanx purvi u always helps ours GOD gives u all da happiness in ur life sure

no one talks there n da environment is emotionally

song played

ek dusre se karte hai pyaar hum

ek doosre ke liye marna pata to mar jaye hum

precap- manav meets balan

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Jaishrikrishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

balan meets sohan

balan- now days u not comes to meet me why?

soham- baba now i am not intrested to take revange that my family purvi says right

balan- i heard that manav comes back it is right

soham- yes baba he comes back purvi found him n take home now family is completed

balan- what happen wid u tum par us purvi ka jadu chal gaya hai right now manav back tumahra maksad aab suru karo

soham- i am not intrested now that is my family

balan- ur family what about me ur baba na

soham- baba u r my baba still in my heard not not take revanges

world needs love happiness n peace

bahan- philosphary u give lessons purvi brain washes u totally that purvi hhh

soham- plzz purvi is my lovely sisters a very kind person her heard simply a pure n u nothing do bad wid purvi

balan- why she stolen u wid me

sohan- no she if sumthing happen wid her i saw u

bLAN- u told like me dis now concerated on dis take deshmukh property n run from there so i don't to take revange wid that family

sohan- no baba my motive is chaANGE Now sachin is my bro n now baba(manav) also come back family is complete only miss aai(archana) there

balan- that ur aai baba

sohan- that my family i share da property wid my family not intrested in property now n need only love n affection of my family n soham goes ffrom there

(balan face shocked)

soham-(goes near manav)

sohan- baba forgive me plzz

manav- sohan not come near wid me aai give u place there so u live but not comes near me not show ur face go

soham- plzz forgive my past mistakes i am now change

manav- what's n stood goes from there

savita - manav foegive him he change now

manav- aai plzz u forgive him so okay

(teju comes there) savita about to goes from there

teju- aaji plzz

manav - aai u also not forgive teju na why she bnot commit any mistake n every thing clears now both teju sunny gives happy there lives respactively both r happy in there life

savita- manav but in logo ki wajah se snehlata ne mujhe bahut sunaya tha main bhooli nahi hoo

manav-(purvi told me all da story) n senhalata ji leaves from here na she left mumbai n goes ahemdabad n lives wid sunny n his wife ruchika( punni's sister) n she also forgive teju jignesh

savita- manav i don't forget dis ashe insent me a lot in da chawl

manav- just like u not forgive teju like that i never forget what soham did wid my family my archana always loves him but what she found nothing she left n get emotional

sum flashbaxck scence wid archana shown

mittal's house

mittal at da cell what i lose my election card

other side voice says)ya ur wife punni's father fails to impress da voters they r now old not now da tactics

mr mittal become angry hooo

n thrown da punni'S parents

manju- mr mittal forgibve my husband next time they did

mr mittal- no maine fhAsla kar liya hai

rita comes mr mittal when u marry wid me

mr mittal soon when i legally divorced wid her

punni- mr mittal u give me divorce

mr mittal- ya now i not need u my mall is ready there legally

they thrown punni n her family

purvi at her home- purvi apurva ready soon n take ur all da clothes u packed that

purvi cheak her bag u forget ur tooth brush always ur towel is there

ovi - she is gone sum where

purvi - ya ovi her vacations r started so she like to join summer came all her frnds goes there so i also think that she spend her time there its good for her n she learns sumthing

ovi ya great children always bored in da home in vacationsd but she is so assmall

purvi- ya her teachers n claamates only a 1 week program so give permission

arjun comes in hurry apu comes fast n take her bag ok purvi i mean ovi i need to go n i leave airport from there

ovi- where r u gone in hurry

purvi- ya business deal for a week

ovi- u know all his plan

arjun- ovi nothing like that we work in same office

purvi now arjun also leave

a child crying voice comes from da room

ovi- i think pavitra wake uo

purvi- u need to go there

ovi- me he not comes near me u know

purvi- try it i told u how to handle hin wid a pure love

purvi- u go there i need to go aaji house sachin's phoned me

ovi- i also

purvi- no pavitra need u u r his mothere n i stay there for sum days n u not know all da legal notices those r gabve mittal n not take too much strees

punni (comes deshmukh house)

punni- plzz forgive me

sulo- leave from there

anju vineet -plzz forgive aai we understand who r ours n who r not

sulo- no leave from there

purvi comes there n saw dis

punni(she falways forgive every1 so she definately forgive ours

sachin comes here is a good nwes we found house for sulo aunty not a big 1 n saw punni u r there

purvi its great news in mumbai its difficult to found a house

sulo- ya its news i aam happy n miss u savitaji a lot

manju- we r alaso comews purvi plzz tell aai for dis

what she said in next part

next balan manav meeting

a shadow comes towards da deshmukh housse

next balan manav meeting

a shadow comes towards da deshmukh housse

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Jaishrikrishna

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Posted: 12 years ago

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ppurvi- no punni i don't to dis i know what u done wid my family my sulo aaji that is my life i spend my life wid her n u all r do bad wid her

i not forgive u not time waste ur her

punni- u forgive all na u forgive soham, ovi naa

purvi- they nothing wrong in my sense but u hurt my aaji n my aai n if u want forgivenness tell sulo aaji they have a right not mine its not my decision

its totally her decision if u said yes so u come wid her ok if u want sorry so say heres not me

unni, vineet, manju- plzz aaji plzz aai give ours a second chance

sulo- about to pack her clothes n about da left da house

sulo- savita ji i miss u a lot

savita- me too n jaldi aate rehana n ishara karti hai punni ki taraf kya karna hai

they there r about to leave

sulo- stop only i give all of u a second chance u come MY HOUSE all r want dis even purvi also

punni- what she say no n u all always side her

sulo- becoz she is kind hearted in her heart she wants to forgive u i know well n if u not resect her u all about to leave

punni- so sosorry wee try really changed

they r left da house

purvi to sachin - what about mittal n chawl

sachin- nothing any news comes now we try to meant that land only for chawl not a mall but nothing any decision regarding dis

purvi stay there

teju fills pain - purvi teju teju what hapened

nothing purvi baby kick i am right when aaji forgive me purvi

purvi- woww so soon i talk to her

sohan baba - manav- u come again near me n goes

sohan saw purvi purvi baba why he like dis do wid me

purvi- i talk to him

purvi- baba what r u doing its not fair u not done not good wid sohan dada

manav- purvi not to talk to him in front of me

purvi- ok baba what what u doing wid dis pistol where u found dis

manav- from sumwhere

purvi - what u do dis

manav- killed balan he killed my archu

urvi- its means u not forget ur part if aai is there she saw u in dis condition if she saw u from da haven she never happt to saw u baba in dis condition her soul never founds her fath u wants u always happy in life

manav- widout her my life is nothing

purvi- i know we all miss aai but not like that i give all da hainess of all of u becoz i also want dis what she wants we all do like dis its give her apeace

purvi- if she sees loike u she never we happy

manav- so what i do forgive balan

purvi- no not forgive him but leave n closed that chapter n leave it for coutrt decision sachin dada try for dis they try for him a big saaza

manav- no coutrt nothing done any thing in past five years he only fthree years punnishment he placed bomb there in da mall nothing happened

purvi- belive in god one day everything alright n he gave his punishment

manav- now i dunno belive in god

ppurvi- if aai hear dis she definity tears in her eyes she belive too much in god plzz for her give dis pistol to police

manav- purvi u ok only for archu i give dis pistol

purvi left manav about to go police stion but sumhow he stopped n placed da pistol in da mud near sumwhere n leave

purvi- baba plzz forgive sohan

manav- iisne aaisa kaUNSA KAAM KIYA HAI ZO MAIN ISSE MAAF KAR TO

SOHAN- Yhe is right i nothing do wid dis family

purvi- dis family itrrs ur family n not need to any work

purvi- baba its ur child that god gives u again give him a second if he do bad wis u n ur family i sure take a responsibity n sohanm u hrar sis don't broken myu trust if its broken i never let u

sohan- definity i never broken ur heart

manav- becoz of purvi i forgive

purvi- so hugs both of u

all da comes n happy n they click a photo

now is savita aaji turn to forgive teju what i do for dis

idea

snehlata behan comes to chawl

ohh ohh savita wherer u

savita- u come again

teju jignesh also comes into da room

teju gignesh touch es her feet

she give blessing both of them

savita - you

snehalata- ya i am back n that my samdanm house so i stay there

savita- no u not

purvi- plzz aaji rehane dijiye all da peoples saw u

savita -ok

snehlata- (purvi now told me what's ur plan)

balan comes towards da manav's house

sohan- beta plzz come wid me

sohan- no i not

balan- that becoz of purvi i know she is there i want yo kill

sohan- u don't first kill me

balan- hhat ja yaha se

manav saw him

balan- go from there otherwise i no i don't to dis but complain u in da police u harassed my children sohan npurvi

if u do like that i not forgive u

balan- oh u r there nice to meet u

manav- go from there ok i call da police

balan(tooks pistol on da head of sohan)

sohan- u killed

balan- ya if sum1 comes betwen me

manav- saw ur baba now what a kind of person he is

balan go outside a house wid soham n took pistol uske sar par rakhi thi

manav- run fast

balan- took a van

manav- try to catch them but failed he runs fast

balan- took his pistol n shoots manav

but manav rescue

then manav took his pistol from da mud n sit in his car n follow him

on da cliff

balan- leave sohan ur revilary wid me na so u compete wid me

balan- ok now i killed u u stolen my child my dreams

manav- ur dreams to become big like a illlegaally

both manav n balan fighta wid each other soham comes to stop them but both r not stoped suddenly bullets shoot from da pistol n balan killed

sohan- baba u killed him

manav- now make reveangre is ove he killed my archana maine apna badla le liya jiska main itne time se wait kar raha tha

sohan-tears in his eyes

precap - a mystry man comes towards da deshmukh house

hope u all like n give ur wthether i continu or not n ur suggestions also😃

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Jaishrikrishna

@NeeruNature

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+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#28

here is my new update

i update myself that was so many mistake but bear dis n plzz reply

In deshmukh house every1 waiting for manav

savita - purvi are u saw manav

purvi- no even i also waited for baba where is baba n sohan dada also

soham comes back

every1 saw him n shocked

what happen soham every1 asked him

tears pour in soham's eyes

soham- baba

purvi- kya hua baba ko

he killed balan

what kyaaa

savita - manav ne kaha hai manav

soham told all da flash scence

manav killed balan then he said now i take my revenge now i went wid my archu she saw me n come too took me n n killed himself

n shown that a shadow come from da haven that archana n she took him ( a sad song played )

purvi informed every1

arjun comes back from da trip

he got da information wid ovi n they both go to deshmukh house

every where is sadess environment

soham feels guity himself

soham becoz of him that happens iif i not comes in there life so nothing like that happen they not meet wid balan i am unhappy mujkhe na aki aai ka na baba ka pyar mil saka

purvi consels him

ovi arjun comes

ovi baba nahi u don't do like dis

arjun comes

in da room purvi;s tears in her eyes why baba why u do like dis

u promise me but why u forget dis

arjun goes from there n saw purvi

comes in da room

purvi - no plzz arjun n wash her teas

ovi comes there n saw from da behind

soham about to leave but every stop him so he stay there

after 2 days

a shadow comes towards da deshmukh house

knock da door

suneni open da door

that person slowly comes there

savita kaun hai

savita to sees n shocked

sachin n soham shocked

sachin - who r u

that shodow told in loud voice

SOHAM MANAV N ARCHANA'S SON

every shocked

soham - i am soha m not u

shadow u tell a lie n saw me i am just similar to manav just like my baba's face i have

same voice same face

soham - that not mean u r that r so many similar faces people in da world u r like just duplicated

sachin - u soham, just like my father face show me ur proof

showod faced person- ya i have a

n shown them his childhood picture wid manav n archana

savita sees dis get emotional but she told i am not belive these

soham- how could dis now a days everything possible u found dis from sumwhwere n merched

sachin - so we dunno believe recently we lost our baba so plzz don't ditrub him n how much u want i give u

showow faced - i am also sad or dis i also know dis news baba is not more i am so unlucky saw in my life why dis happen wid me even my aai also she also left becoz that balan

soham- u know all da histroy that not means u r soham

i have also a another proof

goes from da door

aai come plzz n told every1

a lady comes in front da door

THAT IS VARSH

SAVITA - U

soham- aai varsha aai aap

why u do like dis aai i know u he blackmailed u na i know aap iisse dare nahi tell me da truth

varsha- nahi soham i mean how r u,he is real soham soham n shows da proof of his childhoodn teenage photos wid hers

soham- why u do like dis u told me

varsha- balan tosnatch my baby which i stolen wid archana tai n about to throw him but manage dis

after sum time he agreed n gives me a promise if u raise my baby( which was from his first dead wife) n if u raised my baby u soham u 1 ur balan n his first wife son not archana tai manav jiju

soham- no i don't agree dis why u do wid me aai

varsha - i told now truth after so many yearsi said a truth now i feel relief so i raised u beta n hide my son from balan n give him a dai maa

suddenly sum lady comes

ya i am that dai maa those i raised ur child soham that given me by varsha that is he the real soham n i give him paarvarish n varsha meets him sceratly nbecoz of fear of balan she never disclosed dis

varsha- n after archana n u all saw that child wid me so u think that soham n when i saw balan so fear of him i not disclosed wid archana n u all n i saw taai happy wid his child so back foot step now balan's death so no fear there so i told u every1 that he is ur REAL SOHAM N THAT IS BALAN'S CHILD COMES beta wid me

soham- no nothing like that

varsha- u r my child u support me a lot its my mistak i don't told u a real truth but its true come wid me n give there soham to deshmukh house

soham- no archana aai n manav baba is not my baba why u told me like that

varsha-plzz forgive me u all of u to me i know i done a crime but for da sake of soham n that child balan told him chintu u r my chintu

come wid me plzz beta

soham(i think real 1) showow faced opened i am ur soham now u all know da reason

dai maa - ya varsha told everything that is right

varsha- come chintu beta n stay wid me

soham(chintu) leave me i am not ur chintu i am not believe dis n leave from there i atart my fresh new life but why i leave from there that is my family

soham- ya whu u leave u come there for property if u losse there u left ur property

chintu- no i am not

soham- tell them a truth not blind him

savit- kya ho raha hai ya itne dino se jise soham mana that is not soham i don't believe dis plzz archana manav ka jo beta unka beta koi aur hai she said i am not belive dis n varsha why r me trust u

varsha- becoz that is truth AND TRUTH ALWAYS SAUR u know na ok i tell a lie but why that dai maa

savita - kiski kisiki suno i don't know God helps me

soham- u definitely comes there for proprerty don't fool my inosent family they trust u a lot u comes there for property

soham - ha ha ok i comes there for da property but now my aim is change

soham(shadow faced)- oh ur aim changed i don't think so u r stiill there

- i am therre for da family love ya iam greddy but not for proprerty but for family love ok u think like that i leave there

varrsha- comes beta wid me

chintu/soham- no i start my new life n knows da whole truth this was truth or not nleave

varsha- forgive me

savita- u leave from there

soham- aaji iam ur soham plzz ur love to me i left my aai baba only u n sachin u r my elder brother

sachin - leave from there

savita- ok n leave

in arjun's house

purvi about to put sum chart

apu kabhi bhi aa sakti hai jaldi jaldi work finish karo thaki usko time de sakoo nahi to she complains me

but suddenly her leg about to slap but suddenly arjun saw n pick her plzz describe dis breifly u r amazing in romantic scence

ovi saw dis from da stairs suddenly purvi's phone beeped

sachin inform da whole to purvi

purvi- what, i about to come

sachin - yes its argent

ovi - kya hua purvi

purvi give all information to ovi na rjun

they three r about leave

purvi- kaka plzz take care of pavitra plzz i come back soon n ya apurva also come back from her summer camp usko samlena , aaj aaygi

prcape- savita teju sence

soham(new 1 ) helps sachin in his case of mittal's

hope plzz only told where i do mistake in gramatically

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Jaishrikrishna

@NeeruNature

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

hope u all like my ff now its last part

iam stop my ff becoz right now iam not a good writer

now i join english speeking classes so after that completer i started to write my ff love but right now i end dis hope u all like it

in da d.k. house apoorva angry on her mom but d.k. told her he realise her duty of a big girl big sister n she thinks a lot so she act like matured n take care pavitra n play wid him first time

she sang a song

chhun chhun karti aayi chidiya, dal ka dana layi chidiya

mor bhi aaya, kauwa bhi aaya, chuha bhi aaya, bandar bhi aaya

chhun chhun karti aayi chidiya...

bhuk lagi toh chidiya rani mung kee dal pakayegi, dal pakayegi, dal pakayegi

kauwa roti layega lake tujhe khilayega

mor bhi aaya, kauva bhi aaya, chuha bhi aaya, bandar bhi aaya

chhun chhun karti aayi chidiya...

snehlata scolds teju (acc to purvi's plan) in front of savita

snehlata- teju what r u doing come here

teju -bring me a glass of water

teju- comes wid a glass of water

snelata- what's dis that;s too hot

teju- but maa that's is nice

no i want a cold water n throw da water go n take a new glass of water

savita sees dis she angry too mush but don't tell anything

then sneha saw savita n she again started her acting

teju - what dis n about to slap her

suddenly savita stop her n told her

savit scolds snehlata

told she is preggy n u behave her like that

u don't do dis my grand dauther if u hurt her do sumthing wid her i saaw u

snehalata- why u savita u not like her so why i not scold her atleast i accept her as my daugthter in law

savita u n why who told u i dunno like her i like her actually i am acting not to like to watch on u whther u like or not

snehlata- ohhohh change

savita teju milan

teju- aaji i miss u a lot plzz don't do dis wid me again

savita- ya i am not hurt u any1 whether thaat was ur saas also

snhla- oh

teju- keep smiling n told all her npurvi plan to savita

knowing dis savita - angry on teju but suddenly she forgive her n hug her

soham(fake1 ) help in his case

sohan comes to da sachin n told why u worried plzz tell me if i help u

sachin said - no don't want

sachin pick a phone

n worried

sohan -plzz told me ur prob its my problem

door rings

sohan open n found a legal notice about mittal files

he knows all da matter n willing to help sachin

but he refused but he gave a idea for solve dis n make that mall illegal n makes paper

they r destroy mittal mall therre

mittal's men inform him

n mittal comes there

he saw dis but

sachin - gives him a notice

mittal - read dis

n about to tear dis

but they stop him if u do dis court give u a leagal notice

mittal goes from there

soham

sachin soham milan n they won dis

mittsal losses n he got legal notice for destroy his mall from there n govt give chawl permission

soon sulco otheres arvive there

purvi meets da real soham

a such emotional conve b/w them

purvi- i know u r my real brother that was fake1 plzz

soham- purvi atleast u belive me no 1 belive me i am unlucky boy first i lose my aai then baba nthen my family

purvi- i am wid u n sure i give u justice come wid me n told dis

soham- no 1 belive me or u even all of them also scolds u no i dunno want dis n told widout proof i don't saw my face

suddenly he saw varsha n he chase her

onir showed n his evil plan wid fake soham(karan) n varsha( feared n onir blackmailed her at her son's cost n want purvi at any cost)

ovi's true facec shown her real plan

soham not able to watch dis but at a movement he saw onir n think why varsha aai is there suddenly something fell down

onir beware but soham run fast n onir could not able to saw any thing

arjun purvi sence

romantic1

ovi frusted n her true color shown

she said now her plan has to be come that why i stop purvi not to gone sumwhere

pavitra feel sickness

purvi goes hospital she meets wid onir

onir gets her emotional reagarding to live a place

purvi brings in her house

fake sohan wants so call onir onir distrubed n

he meets wid karan (fake soham)

ovi knows who is behind da fake soham

both shake hand

but ovi wants to killed purvi nn onir arjun n they r huge fight for dis

snehlata again scolds teju n savita stops her told ur plan is over na give a speech

so snehlata told just saw ur recation whether u change or not

savita- she is my daughter n whatever she do its her past mistake

teju pains started n they rushes to hospital

purvi ovi comes there

teju gives her a baby girl

every1 happy there n real soham also knows throgh purvi n about to come there but he saw fake soham n chase him

onir n fake sohan argue

fake soham meets real soham

but onir saw dis in frustration if they meet so he killedfreal sohan

suddenly soham death n blamed on fake sohan

fake sohan in da jail

purvi comes to meet n scolds becoz of u i lost my bro

he about to told about onir sumthing but purvi not listen him

sum1 blackmailed purvi

if u not lleft arjun i killed arjun

purvi ignored

a car accident but arjun saves

but pavitra kindap in his house

purvi feared n told dis to onir n arjun

every1 tensed

purvi meets wid blackmailer

that is ovi

purvi- u why u

ovi- ya i mean u leave arjun but first u give ur wrong causes to arjun uski nazroo main niche gir kar onir se fake love natak kar ke

otherwise actually i want to kindnap apurva but he ok nothing he is not my child he is ours n much attached wid u so nevertless i kikked him

purvi- tum itna niche gir sakti ho

purvi goes in da house in delima

pretened wid onir to be love in front of arjun

n she scolds alot wid kaka n misbehave wid D.k. all r shocked

arjun scolds purvi

n ovi comes there n she gives her sympathy n

purvi about to leave wid onir onir also at happy face

suddenly arjun stops her

onir (in mind) what happen to him

arjun - its ur plan ovi n give a tight slape

purvi- shocked

onir shocked

suddenly- fake soham comes

told purvi everything reagding da plan of onir n ovi

purvvi- shocked onir u i dunno believe dis n arjun not believe him he is not real soham

karan- yes i am not real soham that1 is real

n face shown

real soham appears

ovi- onir shocked

they told all da story n ho he saves him n they become friends n meet wid arjun n told everything

(plzz describe in ur words)

purvi arjun in forms police

police on da investigation of karan n sohan they areested onir in da case of want to kiiling soham

purvi ovi ko chod deti hai

purvi gives a speech to ovi

what u do ovi u r become selfish of dis love

love is a life but not that cost at dis codt u want to kill ur own child for what

i give u arjun but now not u commit mistake too much

ovi- ya purvi i am not a good mother as well as good sis ,daughter n wife

i leave arjun now for purvi she is real ur true love

onir

in court

he loose his doctor's degree n jail of seven years

onir relise his mistake

becoz of dis one sideded love that stupidity of mine i loose my job my passion my first love

to become doctor n throughts of that when he paased in his doctor's degree n his happiness that movement his aim dream fulfuil to become a doctor n helps da poor peoples but now what he stand

n he commit sucide

OVI moves her life

n decide to go abored not comes between purvi n arjun but connect wid them as a good sister n best freind

n hope she find a real life partner too

love is everything but as not like that u sreatch sum 1 love but a name of sacricice which u love a lot

END😳