Arjun/Purvi OS - Rose Garden//Part 2, Page 7 - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Glad you liked it Humi and Scarlett - thanks for the comments :) <33
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Peaches 🤗 I-F was being SO sassy, but glad it's all over 😭

I had some better written stuff but I guess IF found it 'invalid'? 🤔 Thank you for reading at least some of it - I totally understand though, it's really long! Didn't even proof read or anything, sorry for errors! and awhh hehe glad you liked those parts Peaches 😳 I liked Arvi's masti. . . and the chocolate kiss 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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keshu, angelz, cuffepardegirl - thank you all so much! REALLY glad that you guys liked it, thank you for the sweet comments and feedback <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: pkdoshi

read your complete OS in a go and really it was just just just awesme...especially Arjun and Purvi were too cute and very much in love...awee didnt wanted this OS should ever complete...keep it up Sheetal and if possible convert this OS into FF would love to read more about Arvi and their romance ...thank you for posting this on Valentines day...again want to say this...good work...👏

Omg my whole OS at once. . . did you not fall asleep? 😆 😛 Aw. . . I want to see them as a married couple, so had to write this :) and LOL writing part 2 was hard enough. . . think I'm gonna just end it here, sorry :( But I'll be writing more different pieces as I have When Two Worlds Collide and then working on Dear Arjun 😊 and no no thank YOU! <3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arvifan1

loved it! 😳 arvi forever! Awesum update 😊

Aw - glad you liked it! Thank you so much doll! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: arjunpurvixo

Peaches 🤗 I-F was being SO sassy, but glad it's all over 😭


I had some better written stuff but I guess IF found it 'invalid'? 🤔 Thank you for reading at least some of it - I totally understand though, it's really long! Didn't even proof read or anything, sorry for errors! and awhh hehe glad you liked those parts Peaches 😳 I liked Arvi's masti. . . and the chocolate kiss 😛


Read the whole thing, and no, I don't mind the length at all. It was all very cute and sweet 😊

Thank you so much for all the hard work darling, and posting it despite the troubles about invalid content and what not.

Some of my favorite bits are below --

"Yeah and I assume you're going to say that your SRK and Kajol?" the guard bitterly said. "I'm letting you guys off with a warning – next time, get a room!"

😆
"Wow – first time in Mumbai after a year and I've already lost the 'favorite kid' position to Ovi and we get caught for PDA, when we're a married couple?" I spoke, trying to keep a straight face. I looked over at Arjun and saw him chuckling.

😆
"You were right, they really should make a TV show about us."
😉


Well, what else can I say? We were like each other's sunshine.
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Loved this end! They are definitely each other's sunshine and their warmth spreads over to us too, when they are together.

Thank you so much for leaving this Purvi sassy - much better than the sacrificial, mahaan version we have seen since quite some time in the show.

I much prefer Arjun's cheesy lines (they were kinda cute 😛) than another cheesy romance being shown 😉

Thanks again 🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMFG SHEETAL CAN YOU PLEASE WRITE MORE CUTENESS PLEASE PLEASE!


Im smiling like an idiot! Initially i imagine ashvik in this form just because its eadier to read that way lol, but this is so precious!


LOLLL purvi slammed the door in Ovi's face lmfao too gold

Rofl, "Zayn likes it too" im all over your writing now arent i ;) lol 🤗

holy, Arjun is such a flirt, loveee this :o


Someone send this to cvs- like now lol



Sheetal, amazing amazing job! Read it a good few times now, and i love it!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Peaches, phew! I thought a lot of people would just not read it because of the length 😛 Well I think a lot of things don't I. . .? Oh gosh, LOL - I loved those parts too 😛 and hehe. . . it was so hard for me to pick the ending! I didn't know where I should do a mahaan sacrifice from Purvi (LOL you know I never would) or just them in jail or whattt 😛 Aw hehe gotta love cheesy Arjun 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: eshaaax3.

OMFG SHEETAL CAN YOU PLEASE WRITE MORE CUTENESS PLEASE PLEASE!


Im smiling like an idiot! Initially i imagine ashvik in this form just because its eadier to read that way lol, but this is so precious!


LOLLL purvi slammed the door in Ovi's face lmfao too gold

Rofl, "Zayn likes it too" im all over your writing now arent i ;) lol 🤗

holy, Arjun is such a flirt, loveee this :o


Someone send this to cvs- like now lol



Sheetal, amazing amazing job! Read it a good few times now, and i love it!

You want to kill me don't you, girl byeee. This is ENOUGH! LOL - I suffered writing this part 🤣 I'll start an Arvi family story soon don't worry lol then you'll get more cuteness. . . but more innocent this time ;) and LOL yeah. . . some of the parts were written with Ashvik in mind because you know how we love our Ashvik ;))))) and Santa Maria LOL 😛 and omg i saw you retweet it while i was writing that part and i was just like ugh you know what i'm gonna include that & LOL I would slam the door in Ovi's face too!!! 😆 and LOL only for Purvi 😛 Omg the CVs will butcher this OS and make it Purvi/Onir -.- Thanks Eshu! 😃 I didn't even re-read it LOL I don't get how you guys can 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Lovely 😛

I love The way you started your OS . Sound of the rain drops, her memories and the rose garden is beautifully mentioned😳.

Ticklish that's funny. Hmmm seems like Arjun loves to rest his head on Purvi's shoulder.

At least she appreciates her Arjun in this. That's what I like the most😛

So our dear Purvi finally after debating told Arjun she loves the rain as it reminds her of home. Again she drifted off but this time with the beautiful scenery of Montreal. Well she is living in Canada but miss Mumbai.

So Purvi was assuring herself and Arjun that its ok of her staying in Canada. Awww she looked him in the eyes😳

Poor Arjun only had the memories of his mother while Purvi grew in the love of her mother and grandmother. His father was a workaholic.

Sweet. Purvi snuggled into Arjun's chest. Wow her sorrow and worries vanished as Arjun was there to comfort her. OMG everything he did makes her smile. He planted a kiss on top of her head

Goosebumps when both said I love you to each other especially when Arjun snuggled into Purvi's hair.

Oh gosh, surprise turn to be a disaster the last time. What about this time😲. So cute how he told her it's not like the last time as he could read her mind.

First person to ever say that she doesn't like his surprises as they are scary. He assured her it's fun and safe. Finally she gave in.

Hehehe, she wore a big red coat over her leggings with her favourite boots after debating for over 5 mins (reminds me of you sheetal)...these 2 are crazy as Purvi took 5 hrs to pick her outfit whereas Arjun was not done yet...

Here Purvi is getting impatient and is mumbling to herself.

Black and black, he must be looking super hot but best part was he was wearing tennis shoes. When Purvi scolded him, he gave her a smirk that winner gets kiss from loser .

Oh gosh, I'm feeling shy too but love the way she was avoiding his eye contact

He doesn't like the rain nor does he hate it. His reason being was the day his mom passed away, it was raining.

Purvi and Arjun share a bond that nobody can ever explain or understand. That's why she can feel his pain.

Yayyy, he then told her he loved the rain as the night they met it was raining, followed by their confession, engagement and marriage. Hmmm, the rain reminds him of two most important ladies

Awww Purvi gave a peck on Arjun's cheek😳

I like when he asked her if she would rather have Arjun khadoosloskar back. So cute

This part is so hilarious that she would have married to some guy who want her for the little money her family has, old man for sex and keep her as trophy wife or she will end up getting diabetic from marrying a sweet doctor who shows no anger😆

So Arjun took Purvi to a park. He had already arranged for a picnic table with umbrella. She was excited to see the picnic basket and even more excited with the contents as there was lauki ki halwa, jalebi, pani puri and kande poha.

I love all of Purvi's imagination on how she wanted to appreciate Arjun. The minute Arjun told relocation Purvi thought of Quebec and the northern lights. She immediately started to imagine being romantic with Arjun but got chocked when he mentioned Mumbai.

How sweet of him as he took her deeper into the forest to where there was 1 rose but he tried to make it look like rose garden.

The rest of the scene was touching. The best of all is the way they kiss and how she unwillingly pull away. The only thing I kept asking myself was although Arjun was her husband it felt as though he was only her boyfriend as she feels so shy of him.

Good OS and looking forward for more from you.

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