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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys! I'm going to try to write a new Arvi FF and this just a glimpse please tell me if you would like me to carry on :) (I'll come up with a name as the story goes on) Hope you like it xx

Purvi's POV:

I was seeing him after so long. He looked the same as always that same handsome face, the same perfect body, but his eyes- they had died. It pained me to see him like that. There were so many questions in his eyes; seeing that I just broke a little bit more inside. He looked enquiringly at Onir and then at me. How could I tell him that he was getting it all wrong? How could I tell him that, even now, he is the only one I love and that I would ever love?

"Hi Purvi," he said his voice tight with hidden emotion. I couldn't say anything so I just nodded, afraid my voice would give me away. We looked each other in the eye and months of his turmoil unravelled before me. He then broke away and looked at Onir. I cleared my throat and tried my best to not break, "This is Onir, my husband." I turned my eyes back to him waiting for his reaction.

"Oh, your husband," he nodded, "Congratulations Purvi, nice to meet you Onir."

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rithika2012 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey nice one do continue..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It's really good. Please continue soon.
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Wow..loved Part 1..
do continue..and plz PM me when u update. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Loved the prologue..
Plz do update soon n PM me if possible..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mwaahipkknd

He looked the same as always that same handsome face, the same perfect body, but his eyes- they had died.

We looked each other in the eye and months of his turmoil unravelled before me. He then broke away and looked at Onir. I cleared my throat and tried my best to not break,



Awww...
Please do continue...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nicely written! Please continue! Loved the part where you talked about how broken they were - I felt my heart sting at that part 🥺

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