ArVi SS-Will Be Together Forever part 10 , pg 13 - Page 2

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Posted: 12 years ago
#11
Beautiful character sketch n lovely discription,Do continue saddy.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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another great creation ⭐️
super like the characters..so excited for the next part..update soon😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heyy saddoo...
m loving this neeti..😆
the best part is she also hates ALO like we ArVians..
I know this neeti will unite out ArVi..it will be great if she makes Purvi realize her mistake.
eagerly waiting for next part..
do update soon..😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Neeti goes n sits out in the garden, completely flabbergasted at Arjun's marriage with that JLO. Arjun comes there n was about to talk to her but Neeti blasts him for hiding this from her and marrying JLO. She tells arjun that after knowing how much she hates JLO n even after being aware of the fact that what JLO has done to her, arjun still married her after assuring her that he will not marry her...(let me take some dialogue form here..)

Neeti(N)- Arjun how could u do this?
Arjun( A)- Neeti m sorry, i...i wanted u tell u but...(n cuts him)
N- But what arjun ?? Are u going to tell me that u fell in love with her n married her, u know cleary that she does not loves u but is obssessed with u, thouroughly obssessed. just like she was always obssessed with toys that she always wanted, n even the fashion world she would not let her fav dresses go to other models.., the girl who cannot think beyond herself will love u?? She is just a spoilt brat n a psycho!!!!!!! huhhh...And i am not sorry to be talking abut your wife like that, coz she deserve it!


A-neeti plzz give me a chance to explain u the thngs..plzz listen for once!!!
N- OK, go ahead,,tell me ur wonderful love story, how you fell in love with her or rather how she trapped you! (sarcastically)..
A- Neeti i dnt love ovi nor have i ever wished to married her...it all happened...it happened and i couldn't do a thing about it! (neeti cuts him again)
N- ohh u wanna tell me dat some one emotionally blackmailed u or drugged u in doing this wonderful thing(sarcastically)...and u think i would believe you...Does dmeone has so much courage to actually blackmail THE Arjun Kirloskar!

A-No blackamailing or drugging neeti, I had to do this coz of some one 's promise...someone very important to me!
N- who the hell did force u Arjun. Just tell me the name i swear, i will make that person's life a living hell for making u suffer like this!!!!(being very much concerned)
A-No neeti promise me that u wont do such things.. plzz promise me...
N- ohh again !!! so u wanna praise that person for making u do such thing.. i see ..well i can atleast knw the name of that mahaan person??(sarcastically)
A- that person is my Love n my Life..n the reason for my being alive now...the reasn i'm still breathing today!!!!!her name is Purvi😳
N- WHAT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OMG... just wait a min ..hold on whats this love ,live ..u werent like this back in canada..who is this purvi..(being shocked)..

A- neeti when i came to india... i met purvi she was an employee in my office..at first we used hate each other but then we to spent a lot of time together.. and she changed my life completely..she taught me a lot of things..she made me a better human..i love her more than my life n will do anything to make her happy.. she too loves me a lot..we were happy together ..

N- arjun is this some type of story u are making up???i cant believe u ?? Who is purvi ? n if at all she loved u why didn't u married her..what are u doing with this psycho ovi??

A- purvi is ovi's half sister..ovi's mom adopted her..well, we were about to get married ..but ovi made a deal with purvi.. that is if she gives me to her, ovi will accept her aai.. n purvi being adopted felt that she is indebted to her mom n needs to repay her back of what she has done to her all these years..n purvi did not had any choice rather than this.

N- but arjun what about ur love..why the hell did u married ovi..u could have said NO to purvi na..

A-..i could have neeti ..but nothing came to my mind at that moment..purvi called me to hill top an hour before on our marriage day..she begged to me to marry ovi. she was helpless so was i ..i cannot say no to her ..coz she gave me the promise of my true love for her.. n i had to do this..

N- what crap???????? how insane of her?? how can she do this to u ...how can she leave on ur marriage day...if she wanted she should have backed off from the marriage..why did u have to marry that ovi and make your life miserable???

A- coz ovi wanted me to marry her..so i had to do it..i was helpless.. i could have divorced ovi on the next day it self when i came to knw about that deal...but purvi told me to keep ovi happy..she gave me kasam of my true love... n i had to do this coz i loved her a lot.. her happiness was in her mother's happiness..n i had to give her the happiness she wanted..coz i promised it to her...

N- Arjun have u gone mad ??just bcoz of her aai's happiness u killed ur own happiness...what about u in all these..are u happy now??Do you think ovi deserve u?? what about the other promises u made to purvi..wont u full fill that??

A- neeti i cant answer u all . my happines lies only in purvi's happiness btw..just forget it n lets go inside ..nothing gonna change now(being upset)
N-ok sure as u wish(sarcastically)
( with this they go inside the house..with neeti thinking some thing..well we will soon knw what she is thinking in next part)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yahhh am first!
Great UpdateI loved it!!!
Im so in love with the character of Neeti, she hates JLO so much(Just like we do!!)
And I love Neeti's sarcastic nature!
I hope she teahes Ovi a good lesson and makes her dissapear from Arjun's life!
Ovi and Neeti in the same house will be fun to read!!!
Waiting fr the next update eagerly!!!!
Edited by kenny_Arhi - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved the update dear.. it was superb.. the way neeti was concerned about arjun and the heights to which she hated ovi were very well written.. hope we could have some one to back our arjun in the show like this but sad no one there...
that person is my Love n my Life..n the reason for my being alive now...the reasn i'm still breathing today!!!!!her name is Purvi
theway he described purvi in the above dialogue was awesome.. i just loved it...
waiting for ur next update.. give it asap...
Edited by rithika2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow..loved Part 2..😃
uh m loving this neeti..she hates ALO so much..
also loved her *Sarcasm*😆
so now it will be very interesting as neeti and ALO will be staying in same house..
ahh that Mahaan person🤣
and I want neeti to make purvi realize what she has lost..l😳😳
will be eagerly waiting for next part..
update soon and do PM me when u update..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sadiya,ur FF is just brilliant..Loved it to the bits...I'm loving the character NEETI..Hope she puts some sense into the brains of both the ladies who messed up with Arjun's life..Plz do continue soon and if possible PM me when u update...😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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An awesome update Sadiya😛

I love Neeti's concern over Arjun especially of him hiding the truth that he got married to JLO.

Good part - JLO is obsessed and a girl who cannot think beyond herself!!! A spoilt brat and a psycho who that she's not sorry about talking like that as JLO deserve it😡.

I like it when she told Arjun sarcastically to tell her his wonderful love story or rather how he was trapped by JLO. Wow... very well said whether does someone actually has the courage to blackmail The Arjun Kirloskar!!!

Neeti is such a great and wonderful friend that she's building mad at the person who made Arjun marry JLO😡. In fact she wants to make that persons life a living hell for doing this to her friend🤢.

👏 - what crap and how insane of her to do this??!

Oh I'm so happy Arjun has a friend like Neeti😃. Looks like she's brewing some plans on how to either get rid of JLO or get Arjun and Purvi together😉.

Cant wait for your next update as its very interesting. Pl do so soon...
Edited by NadaCinta - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hee that was really awesome.glad that there is someone who also hates alo😊.plz cont

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