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Posted: 12 years ago
Chapter 15

I'm unable to give my monkey emotions😡...Anyyways, Arvi have a long drive together and alone (note the bolded ones here😆)...yippie..the thing which i just want to read..😳

Arjun is so mean, he asked Purvi to carry the shopping bag...😆...AND 😲...Arjun is protecting Purvi from some guy😳😳😳 super duper sweet...I love my AK for this...

Arjun had promised Archana😲..that's a shock, what did he promise...*turning detective now*

I think the person who saw Archana was Manav, I don't know its just my guess, but the person said 21 years, I thought ArMan was separated for 18 years only..then maybe he's not Manav but someone else...But I serously don't know who..😆

Hehehe,Arjun going to look for Purvi, Arjun going to look for Purvi, Arjun going to look for Purvi...Yippie...😃😃😳😳😳

Precap is interesting, 😉...I can't wait for next part, please update soon...😃
Edited by Angelfreak_96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
heyy esha..
thankyou for part 14 and 15..
both parts were awesome..
I think arjun promised archana to keep purvi safe..
and manav saw archu..
dont know where purvi has gone..??
it was amazing esha..loved both the parts..
so update soon..m very eager to know where purvi went..?
Thankyou for the update...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
oops..double post..😛
Edited by ashvikluverrr - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey twi chapters at a stretch that was a bumper offer for us..
loved the 2 parts a lott...it was superb as usual..
cant guess the surprise archu is gonna give purvi.. is it something related with viren?? my brain is in thinking in a different direction..😆 and
i think the person who saw archana at market was manav..
ur precap sounds interesting do update fast and thanks for pm.. do pm again...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks guys! I love reading your guys' feedback. Thank you chooo much! 🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
I WANT MORE, I WANT MORE, I WANT MORE...lol omg dear iv just read ur ff from the start and at a loss for words to describe how awesome it is. You are trulely a gifted writer and I loved how u changed the storyline, (hats of to you) for creating such amazing twists, beautiful emotions and light hearted moments.Would really appreciate a PM when u update and again well done on a brilliant piece of writing;)
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: J12L85

I WANT MORE, I WANT MORE, I WANT MORE...lol omg dear iv just read ur ff from the start and at a loss for words to describe how awesome it is. You are trulely a gifted writer and I loved how u changed the storyline, (hats of to you) for creating such amazing twists, beautiful emotions and light hearted moments.Would really appreciate a PM when u update and again well done on a brilliant piece of writing;)


Aw, Thank you so so sooo much! 😃 And sure can do... :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Both the chapters were awesome😛
Thanks for giving us a surprise Christmas gift - 2 chapters at one shot😊

i noticed there is a new character named Harish been introduced. That's nice as he and Manav grew up together and his daughter is Purvi's best friend, Poor Soham was so confused with whatever Archana was saying as he has only been with Archana for a few years until she actually started to explain.😲

So Purvi had to tease Arjun on his way of threatening which was kinda cute. Their convo was interesting but Arjun is still very determined to get rid of Purvi.

The convo between Siddarth, Viren and Soham was interesting.

I liked it when Archana told Purvi not to act like a kid😃. The surprise is still a surprise till she comes back from her conference but at the same time it was also a way to boost her self confidence. Purvi promise Archana that she will take care of herself and told Archana not to worry about her. This mother daughter bonding always touches my heart. Anyway how can a mother ever stop worrying about her kids😲

Chapter 15
Purvi was left alone to got with her Khadoos boss on a 17 hour ride to Delhi 😆

I liked it when Purvi said that she's getting orders on which side should she walk and khadoos told her he has his reasons for it, hmmm😉

Its so funny as they keep arguing while walking and Purvi going to the left and right loses her shoe🤣. Then she quickly had to run to get her shoe but due to unforeseen circumstances, Purvi lost her shoe. It was at least kind of Arjun to save Purvi and I think out of concern, he scolded her as the guy was very close to Purvi. Little did he realize that he was holding her hand so tight and when he let go it was all red, he actually felt it.

So I guess, the person who saw Archana and was dumbstruck and felt guilty is Manav.

I have a feeling Arjun and Purvi are going to be late for the conference as he went looking for her but am not sure why did he promise Archsna to take care of Purvi.

So please update soon as I'm curious to know regarding the above and your precap.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: NadaCinta

Both the chapters were awesome😛

Thanks for giving us a surprise Christmas gift - 2 chapters at one shot😊

i noticed there is a new character named Harish been introduced. That's nice as he and Manav grew up together and his daughter is Purvi's best friend, Poor Soham was so confused with whatever Archana was saying as he has only been with Archana for a few years until she actually started to explain.😲

So Purvi had to tease Arjun on his way of threatening which was kinda cute. Their convo was interesting but Arjun is still very determined to get rid of Purvi.

The convo between Siddarth, Viren and Soham was interesting.

I liked it when Archana told Purvi not to act like a kid😃. The surprise is still a surprise till she comes back from her conference but at the same time it was also a way to boost her self confidence. Purvi promise Archana that she will take care of herself and told Archana not to worry about her. This mother daughter bonding always touches my heart. Anyway how can a mother ever stop worrying about her kids😲

Chapter 15
Purvi was left alone to got with her Khadoos boss on a 17 hour ride to Delhi 😆

I liked it when Purvi said that she's getting orders on which side should she walk and khadoos told her he has his reasons for it, hmmm😉

Its so funny as they keep arguing while walking and Purvi going to the left and right loses her shoe🤣. Then she quickly had to run to get her shoe but due to unforeseen circumstances, Purvi lost her shoe. It was at least kind of Arjun to save Purvi and I think out of concern, he scolded her as the guy was very close to Purvi. Little did he realize that he was holding her hand so tight and when he let go it was all red, he actually felt it.

So I guess, the person who saw Archana and was dumbstruck and felt guilty is Manav.

I have a feeling Arjun and Purvi are going to be late for the conference as he went looking for her but am not sure why did he promise Archsna to take care of Purvi.

So please update soon as I'm curious to know regarding the above and your precap.

Thanks for the great comments! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Recap: Arvi leave for the conference
Chapter 16: A Step Closer
April 5th, 2012: Delhi Streets, 5:30 p.m.

Where the hell* could she be? Okay, Arjun. Think. Where would a girl as annoying, rude—hold on. Anyone with her characteristics could be anywhere. Where would Miss Deshmukh go? I think I know.
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Outside a temple:
Arjun: Okay, so she couldn't have gone far. This is the nearest temple too. I'm betting that she'll be somewhere here. But, where would I go to look for—
Purvi: Sir? You okay? You're standing in the middle of the road and talking to yourself.
Arjun: Miss Deshmukh! Where did you—
Purvi: I was praying at the temple. I do it every day.
Arjun: Stop interrupting me! And anyhow, you do realize that we have to be there at 6:30, and it's 6:00. I still have to get ready and—
Purvi: Sir, excuse me, but no one told you to come look for me. Why have you been following me around and acting all touchy these few days, anyways?
Arjun: *Flashback: April 4th, 2012: Karanjkar Chawl, 2:30 p.m.*
Arjun is standing and talking on the phone leaning against the car. Purvi is struggling in the background to get her luggage in the back of the car. Arjun is looking around and deliberately avoiding looking at Purvi so he won't have to help her, when he spots Archana.
Arjun: *She looks familiar… Where have I…?*
Purvi: Sir, I'll be back.
Arjun: Yeah, yeah. *waves her away* *I know I've seen her. But— what if she's—no. Wait… she is!* That's… Manav uncle's wife. I've seen her in old pictures too many times. Why is she walking this way? Arjun! Stop talking to yourself. You've gone mad for sure. Wait she's leaving. Do I need to talk to her? But I've seen her, and she's Manav uncle's— I have an idea.
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Arjun: Excuse me!
Archana: Yes…?
Arjun: I'm uh… kind of lost… and thirsty.
Archana: Hold on, beta. I'll get you some water.
Arjun: Oh, thank you so much.
Archana: No problem.
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Arjun: Uh, thanks for the water…..
Archana: It's ok—
Arjun: I've seen you before. I think…
Archana: You have? Son, it's a big city.
Arjun: No! Like, I feel like I know you. Am I being… weird?
Archana: Kind of. How do you—I mean…?
Arjun: *takes a deep breath and closes his eyes* Archana… aunty. Right?
Archana: *clearly taken aback* How—how did you… how?
Arjun: *whispers* You're Manav uncle's wife. I've seen and heard a lot about you.
Archana: *whispers and gasps* Manav… I'm sorry, but do you think you could—
Arjun: Um, aunty—Arjun. Arjun Kirloskar.
Archana: *excited gasp* Huh! Arjun! How's everyone? DK sir, Ashana—
Arjun: You… knew… my… my mom?
Archana: Yeah. I've known you since you were a small child, Arjun.
Arjun: Um… aunty—I don't know how to put it, but uh….
Archana: Haan?
Arjun: *small voice* My mom's dead. She's been dead.
Archana: *shocked* What? Ashana… What?
Arjun: When I was a little kid. She… left the world forever.
Archana: *whisper* I'm… so terribly sorry. I didn't—
Arjun: You didn't know. It's fine. I've accepted it. Listen, I'm sorry for the abrupt meeting and whatnot, but I got to go. I have a long drive to Delhi—
Archana: You know Purvi… right?
Arjun: *confused* Yeah… why?
Archana: If you're really sorry, can you promise me something?
Arjun: Uh… sure?
Archana: Make sure nothing happens to her. She—
Purvi: *from inside her house* Sir! We're getting late. Let's go!
Arjun: I got to go, aunty. It was nice meeting you. Thanks for the water, and… uh. I—I will.
Archana: *smiles* Thank you so much Arjun.
Arjun: It's nothing. *runs towards his car*
*End of Flashback*
Arjun: Well, everyone else had plans of leaving right about now, so I figured you would need a ride.
Purvi: *confused* Okay… Well let's go?
Arjun: Okay. Well, because I'm really smart, I didn't bring a car— *phone rings*
Yeah, Riya. Just go ahead and leave. We'll be late. You can go. Yeah. Thanks. Bye.
Purvi: You were saying?
Arjun: Oh! I didn't bring a car, so we have to walk back.
Purvi: *whispers* Smart.
Arjun: Excuse me?
Purvi: Nothing… I didn't say anything.
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Halfway there:
Arjun: I'm thirsty.
Purvi: There's water over there. I'll go get some… money?
Arjun: Um… I don't have that with me either.
Purvi: *whispers* Good job.
Arjun: Excuse me?
Purvi: I didn't say anything, sir. You sure you're okay?
Arjun: *sarcastically* No. I'm mad. I've been hearing voices and I see a psychiatrist on a daily basis.
Purvi: I knew it!
Arjun: *shocked* What!?
Purvi: Nothing! *runs to the stand and comes back with water* Here.
Arjun: You didn't have to spend—
Purvi: It's okay. I needed water too. It was only a little bit of money too. Let's go?
Arjun: *annoyed* Fine. What's the time?
Purvi: 6:10…
Arjun: I still have to get ready. Do you have enough money for a rickshaw?
Purvi: *sighs* Yeah.
Arjun: Would you prefer to walk there?
Purvi: I have that feeling that you weren't lying earlier…
Arjun: When?
Purvi: When you said you saw---here!
Arjun: *What is her problem!?*
As we sat down in the rickshaw, I realized that it's the first time I've seen Sir in something other than a formal suit. He looks… less arrogant… jeans and all.
****
April 5th, 2012: Event Hall, 6:45 p.m.
Riya: Arjun! Purvi! You're both here!
Purvi: *Have I mentioned how beautiful Riya is?*
Riya: Nothing's really happened. Here's the schedule for tomorrow, Arjun.
Arjun: *looks it over* Okay, so after Miss Deshmukh's presentations tomorrow, we can leave at about 6ish. Sound good, Miss Deshmukh? *smirks*
Purvi: Yes. It does, actually.
Arjun: Okay then…. Let's get going. The sooner we start, the faster we know the OUTCOME. Right, Miss Deshmukh?
Purvi: *whispers* Right Mr. Khadoos.
Riya: *tries not to laugh*
Arjun: Either, I really am crazy, or you just said something you shouldn't have.
Purvi: Sir, I haven't said anything. Hey, look. There's a table over there.
Arjun: *walks away angrily*
Riya: What happened? *smiling*
Purvi: Apparently, your brother is seriously crazy… and not very happy with me right now. *bursts out laughing*
Riya: *tries not to laugh* You're having way too much fun, aren't you?
Purvi: Well, Riya… things have only begun. *walks away*
Riya: *to herself* What's their problem?
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Precap: Purvi giving presentations… Arjun annoyed by something. Or is he….?
Enjoy it? Pls like/comment.
Thx!: )
Things to think about: What will happen tomorrow? Will Purvi show Arjun up? How will Arjun react?
Just for the record: To clear any possible misconceptions up: Arjun knows about Purvi's relationship to Archana, but Archana doesn't know that he knows, and neither does Miss Purvi.

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