Arvi FF: The Three Mistakes: Completed

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Safoera

@ARluv16

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Posted: 12 years ago

#191

Awesome Update!...I like the nhok jok between Arjun n Purvi...both are very funny😆...I like the protective AK...lots of interesting things about to happen I can't wait!!...Update soon!😃

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eshaa_avrc

@eshaa_avrc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#192

Thanks for all your comments guys! Sorry I haven't updated this weekend, but Chapter 17 will be up most probably on Wednesday or Thursday. Here's the promo for now:
DK: Hey! How's my son who forgot that I exist?
Arjun: Dad! You know that's not the case! I just haven't called you because things have been so busy.
DK: Acha. That's good... I think. You've managed everything well haven't you?
Arjun: Yeah dad. I just got some...
DK: Some what?
Arjun: Uh, sorry dad. I'll have to call you back. I'm kind of on the road.
DK: *confused* Okay, son. Be safe.
Arjun: I will.
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Arjun: Miss Deshmukh?
Purvi: *zones back into the real world* Huh? Sorry...
Arjun: You okay? You've been staring out the window for a long while now.
Purvi: Yeah...
Arjun: You sure?
Purvi: Yeah, sir. I'm fine.
Arjun: I mean really, after everything that happened today...
Purvi: It's just... nevermind. You probably won't understand.
Arjun: I can listen?
Purvi: Why are you acting like some sort of counselor? I'm fine, sir.
Arjun: Okay, okay. I'll call my dad back now...
Purvi: Wait--you called your dad?
Arjun: Okay, now you're really out of it. What's your problem?
That's it guys!!!
*Yay! My 200th post! :)*

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shreya2094

@shreya2094

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Posted: 12 years ago

#193

first of all congrats on bcuming a senior member🥳

loved the promo...sounds really interesting...waiting for thursday!!😃

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Latika Gurung

@-Latty-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#194

OMG its soo interesting...! please update soon... m eagerly waiting...!! thanx for the pm esha...:):):)

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NadaCinta

@NadaCinta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#195

Originally posted by: omg11apiz
Thanks for all your comments guys! Sorry I haven't updated this weekend, but Chapter 17 will be up most probably on Wednesday or Thursday. Here's the promo for now:
DK: Hey! How's my son who forgot that I exist?
Arjun: Dad! You know that's not the case! I just haven't called you because things have been so busy.
DK: Acha. That's good... I think. You've managed everything well haven't you?
Arjun: Yeah dad. I just got some...
DK: Some what?
Arjun: Uh, sorry dad. I'll have to call you back. I'm kind of on the road.
DK: *confused* Okay, son. Be safe.
Arjun: I will.
____
Arjun: Miss Deshmukh?
Purvi: *zones back into the real world* Huh? Sorry...
Arjun: You okay? You've been staring out the window for a long while now.
Purvi: Yeah...
Arjun: You sure?
Purvi: Yeah, sir. I'm fine.
Arjun: I mean really, after everything that happened today...
Purvi: It's just... nevermind. You probably won't understand.
Arjun: I can listen?
Purvi: Why are you acting like some sort of counselor? I'm fine, sir.
Arjun: Okay, okay. I'll call my dad back now...
Purvi: Wait--you called your dad?
Arjun: Okay, now you're really out of it. What's your problem?
That's it guys!!!
*Yay! My 200th post! :)*

congrats on becoming Senior Member😃🥳

Edited by NadaCinta - 12 years ago

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bonibright

@bonibright

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Posted: 12 years ago

#196

Sorry Esha,I am late...But I just loved chapter 16 and chapter 17 promo...ARVI arguementT in chapter 16 was cute..😛I am so looking forward to chapter 17..Plz update soon and thank u so much for the PM..😃

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Neha

@howler

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#197

Captivating promo...

can't wait for your update...

OMG, Arjun and Purvi scene makes me blush..

Please do update soon..will wait..but can't wait.😆

And congrats on becoming

Senior Member..🥳

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Jagruti

@AnAvidReader

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#198

heyy Esha First of all Congratulations on becoming a Senior Member🥳

ahh promo seems very interesting..
cant wait for your next part..!!
do update soon..😆

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eshaa_avrc

@eshaa_avrc

Navigator

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Posted: 12 years ago

#199

Thank you guys for your positive feedback! Will update soon... :)

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NadaCinta

@NadaCinta

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#200

Chapter 16

I couldn't stop laughing when Arjun thinks to himself where would a girl as annoying, rude and hold on for a while and anyone with her characteristic would have gone. He thought he knew.😉

🤣😆 So finally he met Purvi at the temple and she asked him what was wrong with him as he was standing in the middle of the road and talking to himself. Arjun told Purvi that did she realize that its already 6pm and he's not ready yet. Funniest part was when Purvi told Arjun that no one told him to look for her and why have he been following her around and acting all touchy these few days

So Arjun remembers Archana as Manav's wife and was not sure should he go and talk to her. So he came up with an idea that he's thirsty and asked her for water as he's kind of thirsty.

A good convo between Archana and Arjun. So this is where and how Arjun met Archana and she made him promise to her that he'll make sure nothing happens to Purvi.

So cute of Purvi when she whispers 'smart' as Arjun did to bring his car😆

There goes Arjun sarcastically telling Purvi that he's mad and that he's been hearing voices and sees a psychiatrist on a daily basis when Purvi asked him if he's okay🤣

So Purvi first time noticing Arjun in casual wear which makes him look less arrogant.

Riya heard Purvi calling her bro khadoos and tries not to laugh. So it seems like Arjun after all did hear Purvi calling him khadoos and walks away angrily. It was so funny for Purvi as she burst out laughing that Arjun is seriously crazy when Riya asked her smilingly what happened😊

These 2 made Riya confused as she was thinking what was Arjun and Purvi's problem when Purvi told her things have only begun!

Even I'm wondering what's going to happen during the presentation😲. Well it seems like Arjun is keeping quiet as he knows Archana's and Purvi's relatioinship but neither of the, knows that Arjun is aware of it😉.

Promo Chapter 17

Simple convo between father and son which was good.

Now you have built the suspense as to what had happened during the day and why Purvi keeps starring outside the window. Arjun realized that Purvi is not herself and wants to know what's her problem!

Waiting for your next chapter eagerly as the promo is captivating...

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