Arvi SS: The Power of Love||Chap.7 UPDATED|| - Page 22

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Posted: 12 years ago
your update just aws , thanks for PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was one good episode!!!! hats off to u and ur sister for this very interesting story... well done guys
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Posted: 12 years ago
that was a very great update neha.. 👏👏 👏Very interesting part...😊
and as always u wrote it very well...😊😊
👏I specially loved Sachin's and soham bond, their care towards their sisters.. the way soham was trying to console Purvi and the best part was ovi's realisation and ovi saving purvi from the accident...
Tej and romil convo was like a small break in the serious episode it was so cute..
Pls update the next part soon.. Thanks for pm and do pm me again...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Neha u and your sister are doing an amazing job. Love the update. It was so emotional finally Ovi realize her mistake hope everything will be alright with her too.
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was a simply awesome update neha... i totally loved it... cant wait for the next part... please give us the promo soon... u and ur sister r doing a great job... and i always love ur sweet PMs...:):)
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Posted: 12 years ago
I love your SS! You're an outstanding writer! :D I love the whole story line. I also like how Ovi realises her mistake and pushes Purvi out of the way. I like Sachin and Sohams bond as well as Romil and the gut he has to tell Arjun everything and their friendship. I really cant wait for the next chapter, so please update really soon. :) Do you think you could PM me too? I don't want to miss a bit of your SS. :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
So my Cute Sister is came back bang.
Wowww Sis u have touched my heart by this OS.
I really appreciate u, at your age i was handling my books of school but ur scripts are truly awesum.
That day will cum soon when my sister will be a writer of a Serial or a Movie.
God bless u n Great,Awesum,Marvellous Job..
Hats off..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Oh my freaking god...That was a superb awesome and mind-blowing update...I swear Neha...really... you're an amazing and extraordinary writer... incredibly incredible...I seriously have no words to say for you...
The emotions, scenes , everything was beautifully described...seriously...loved Sachin and Soham bonding a lot...

Sachin and Soham was numb/shocked as they couldn't believe what they just heard. The doctor told them to have faith and walked away. Sachin was feeling weak; he dropped on the chair and started crying uncontrollably as he buried his head with his hands. Soham didn't say anything; he still couldn't digest what the doctor had said. Without any emotions filled in, he just went and sat beside Sachin.

A scene which is described beautifully...The feeling of a brother when they find out their sister is in a critical condition...

"Soham, I know that you still can't digest what the doctor said about Ovi, but Soham, Purvi is here as well and the nurse said that she has regained consciousness and you know very well that if I go in, she'll ask about Ovi and I don't think that I have that courage to tell her about Ovi's condition. I'm not that strong...*Soham looks at him with teary eyes*... I need you to be beside me Soham, please" Sachin said while looking at Soham. For the very first time in his life, he is seeing his brother so weak and also for the first time in his life he is seeing his brother crying, that was when Soham realized that he needs to be strong, not only to face the situation, but for his brother's sake, he needed to be strong so that they both can handle the difficult situation. He wiped away the lone tear which was crossing across his cheek.

The bold line is filled with a beautiful words...it showed the true meaning of a brotherhood...really, you always make us emotional when we read ur story...

Now, I'll make sure Arjun and Purvi reunites. I WILL make sure it happens.

The determination of Ovi...really superb dear...

I'm just wondering, why can't you be one of the CVs at least then you we can get some worth watching episode and also more ArVi...😛...Please do PM me the next update and if possible then please do post chapter 6 promo...really looking forward for the next one...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
agaikn a nice 1...asusual...enjoyed it...the way ovi understood d relation btwn arjun nd purvi...d feeling of reuniting dem...nd purvi's reaction 2 ovi's words were d highlights of d update...bt u definately made it like a serial...left d update at such a point when it is the most crucial nd important point of d story...nd it seems like it's friday nd now will hve 2 wait 4 2 days 4 d nxt episode...waititng eagerly...pls update fast nd soon...update d promo nd afterwards directly go 4 chap 6...don't make it too late...pls pls pls pls nd please... ❤️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SUPERB UPDATE...I have no words to say anything for you...You're just TOO AWESOME...you and ur sister make a really great team...I'm seriously speechless...They way you wrote everything fron the start till the end was just mind-blowing...can't wait for the next part...and please post the precap as soon as possible...PLEASE...
Edited by MishAv - 12 years ago

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