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NadaCinta

@NadaCinta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#221

So Neha dear

Another amazing update by you😊

Right from the start till the end of Chapter 5b, I loved practically all the parts. The bonding between the two brothers was so lovely with an added touch to their bonding with their sisters. Their concern, love, fear has been delineated so well.

For once, Ovi has realized her mistake and that too without delaying any further. At least after Purvi told her off, it clicked her to change for the better. Best part was, Arjun's words that he will die if anything happens to Purvi was flashing in her mind. Thank god both Purvi and the unborn baby are safe!

Romil and Teju nok jhok was cute and a 👏 for Romil to confront both the D and K family to tell them the truth. The connection between Purvi and him is so strong that he could feel something was not right when Romil's mobile rang.

Please post your Chapter 6 promo and update Chapter 6 soonest possible as we wish to know what will be not only the D and K families reaction but also Romil and Arjun's when they hear the news. At the same time how is Ovi's condition.

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bonibright

@bonibright

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Posted: 12 years ago

#222

👏Awesome part Neha..Superb...Hats off to u n ur sister..Loved the part to the bits..Specially,Sachin-Soham bending,Ovi's realisation and Romil-Tej conversation..Eager to know Deshmukh family's reaction to the truth behind Purvi's pregnancy and Ovi's condition..And who was that drunken guy who was driving the car..Plz update soon and thank u very much for the PM..

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Soumya

@Ceon

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Posted: 12 years ago

#223

Hey dis was just SUPRB!! I lyk it in evry bit. Updt soon

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AshvikFan

@AshvikFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Hey.. It was a great chapter.. 😛 loved it.. Waiting for the next chapter.. Want to know everybody's reaction when they find out about Purvi and Ovi..!! Update soon.. 😊

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Chandni

@Chandnii95

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Posted: 12 years ago

#225

awesome update!!! 👏

will be waiting for the next update, thanks for the pm 😊

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-LiveLaughLove-

@-LiveLaughLove-

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Another awesome part!! You both are an awesome pair of writers!

Loved the Sachin and Soham bonding that occured, theya re each others emotional support.

Purvi's care for Ovi was spectacuular, and Ovi's realization made me happy. She knows what a great person Purvi is.

Wonder whatt Arjun's reaction's will be when he comes face to face with Purvi confronting her about her pregnancy.

Update soon!

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shreya2094

@shreya2094

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

it was an amazing update👏...waiting for the nxt part...also pz do update ur other ff(romantic n fimy AK)😊

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priyanka/pari

@ProngsPadsMoony

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+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#228

amazing update

loved it to core

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Neha

@howler

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+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: WanderingBeauty
*edited after God knows how long*

Yippiee!! Am the first one to comment...Admitted it was a reserve but still...a comment!! Have lots to say about this part...Good to know that no damage done to the unborn child and both the girls are safe and under medical supervision! It's good to see Ovi realizing her mistakes and even better to have some words from Purvi...Thank goodness she makes it clear somewhere at least that she's not interfering in Ovi's life and it's because of her 'mahaanta' Arjun is still her husband. The bonding between the brothers was too good...Loved how Sachin admitted that he felt weak and he needed Soham as his support...The truth is still to be divulged...Want to know how the family reacts to it! Great job done by you and your sister! Do update soon...:)

PS-Thanks for reminding me...I thought I had unreserved it...:P

Even I liked the brothers bonding...and yes the truth is still to be divulged, so guess you need to wait and read...😉...

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr
heyy neha another awesome part..
loved it...
loved Soham and Sachin's bond...and also their worry for Ovi...
also loved the way they handled Purvi..
and thank god for once Ovi realized her mistake..
now eagerly waiting for next part...real very curious to know what is whole family's reaction when they will know that Purvi is preggo and that too with Arjun's child..
thankyou for this chapter...u and ur sister are amazing..loved this chapter..do update soon.. 😃

Thank you dear, I always wanted to make Ovi in the positive side...so I did...😉

Trust me you'll get to know what's d family reaction when the story progresses...

Originally posted by: TALIRAlinda
your update just aws , thanks for PM

Thank you so much...😊😳

Originally posted by: swapna99
that was one good episode!!!! hats off to u and ur sister for this very interesting story... well done guys

Thank you so much...😊😳

Originally posted by: rithika2012
that was a very great update neha.. 👏👏 👏Very interesting part...😊
and as always u wrote it very well...😊😊
👏I specially loved Sachin's and Soham bond, their care towards their sisters.. the way Soham was trying to console Purvi and the best part was Ovi's realization and Ovi saving Purvi from the accident...
Teju and Romil convo was like a small break in the serious episode it was so cute..
Pls update the next part soon.. Thanks for pm and do pm me again...😊
😊

Thank you so much dear, thank you...and yes I did want to make a small break form the serious part...Let you guys be prepared before the big storm...😛 no prob dear, I will PM you...😊

Originally posted by: Natasha.
Neha u and your sister are doing an amazing job. Love the update. It was so emotional finally Ovi realize her mistake hope everything will be alright with her too.

Thank you so much dear...😊😳

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Neha

@howler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#230

Originally posted by: latika_AshVik
it was a simply awesome update neha... i totally loved it... cant wait for the next part... please give us the promo soon... u and ur sister r doing a great job... and i always love ur sweet PMs...:):)

Thank you so much dear...will do give the promo soon enough...don't worry...

Originally posted by: omg11apiz
I love your SS! You're an outstanding writer! :D I love the whole story line. I also like how Ovi realizes her mistake and pushes Purvi out of the way. I like Sachin and Soham's bond as well as Romil and the gut he has to tell Arjun everything and their friendship. I really cant wait for the next chapter, so please update really soon. :) Do you think you could PM me too? I don't want to miss a bit of your SS. :)

Thank you...😳...And what kinda question ur asking me...Of course I can PM you...Just keep on liking like this...😛😉

Originally posted by: gaurav_ankita08
So my Cute Sister is came back bang.
Wowww Sis u have touched my heart by this SS.
I really appreciate u, at your age i was handling my books of school but ur scripts are truly awesum.
That day will cum soon when my sister will be a writer of a Serial or a Movie.
God bless u n Great,Awesum, Marvelous Job..
Hats off..

Yup, I'm back with a bang bhaiya...😛😉😆...

Thank you bhaiya, glad u liked it...😊

Thank you bhaiya, and I really hope no no dream to become a writer...And when I do, I'll definitely tell you...😉😃

Originally posted by: Mistic_Creation
Oh my freaking god...That was a superb awesome and mind-blowing update...I swear Neha...really... you're an amazing and extraordinary writer ... incredibly incredible...I seriously have no words to say for you...
The emotions, scenes , everything was beautifully described...seriously...loved Sachin and Soham bonding a lot...

Sachin and Soham was numb/shocked as they couldn't believe what they just heard. The doctor told them to have faith and walked away. Sachin was feeling weak; he dropped on the chair and started crying uncontrollably as he buried his head with his hands. Soham didn't say anything; he still couldn't digest what the doctor had said. Without any emotions filled in, he just went and sat beside Sachin.

A scene which is described beautifully...The feeling of a brother when they find out their sister is in a critical condition...

"Soham, I know that you still can't digest what the doctor said about Ovi, but Soham, Purvi is here as well and the nurse said that she has regained consciousness and you know very well that if I go in, she'll ask about Ovi and I don't think that I have that courage to tell her about Ovi's condition. I'm not that strong...*Soham looks at him with teary eyes*... I need you to be beside me Soham, please" Sachin said while looking at Soham. For the very first time in his life, he is seeing his brother so weak and also for the first time in his life he is seeing his brother crying, that was when Soham realized that he needs to be strong, not only to face the situation, but for his brother's sake, he needed to be strong so that they both can handle the difficult situation.He wiped away the lone tear which was crossing across his cheek.

The bold line is filled with a beautiful words...it showed the true meaning of a brotherhood...really, you always make us emotional when we read ur story...

Now, I'll make sure Arjun and Purvi reunites. I WILL make sure it happens.

The determination of Ovi...really superb dear...

I'm just wondering, why can't you be one of the CVs at least then you we can get some worth watching episode and also more ArVi...😛...Please do PM me the next update and if possible then please do post chapter 6 promo...really looking forward for the next one...😃

Thank you so much dear, glad you liked it...and of course I will send you PM...😃

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