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rukkie

@rukkie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#631

That was so funny and I loved it and thanks for the PM and plz PM me for the updates

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peachesnplums

@peachesnplums

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#632

Thanks for the PM Abhi. Loved this one too - liking the Arjun Sachin bonding. Archana's concern about Purvi is sweet (in PR, CVs show her focusing on only one thing at a time now). Thanks for the laughs! My favorite bits -

Purvi :- I can't remember.

Archana :- CAN'T REMEMBER?

Arjun and Sachin are closing their ears.

😆

...

Sachin :- I know this is all new to you. Don't worry when you marry Purvi and join this family, you will get used to it. We are full of drama.

Arjun is looking at Sachin.

Sachin :- Maybe I should quit being a lawyer and become a writer. I can become rich just writing all this drama for some production.

Arjun shakes his head.

@bold: 🤣

@underlined: Hint for yourself Abhi 😉

...

Sachin :- Of course you can. You are a hero, which hero can't sing.

😆

Sachin :- You can really dance. Man, you could easily win Jhalak Dikhla Jaa. Your dance is simply awesome and fantastic.

👍🏼

Sachin :- Seven? Baby sister, what stamina you can stand after seven. Great.

😆

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Arjun :- with Sachin. I need a drink just to forget what I saw.

🤣

Edited by peachesnplums - 12 years ago

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pp29

@pp29

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Posted: 12 years ago

#633

Hi Abhi! :))

I have just caught up with your past 3 chapters , since I do not come to the forum too often anymore...thanks to the crazy rubbish track going on! :( But your updates simply made my day!!

I loved the bday party sequence...and Arjun's cheesy lines and Sachin's reference to Shakespeare getting up from his grave :P I loved Teju-Purvi's confession about soham's identity and how Teju's relationship with Purvi is shown..esp in the last part where she is dreaming about protecting her...even though it is a funny piece, it shows how much attachment they have between them!

The best part is Arjun-Sachin bonding...it truly is awesome..They are friends and they totally have adapted to their new jeeja-saala relationship as wel..super cute about the dreaming of their girls while holding each other in their sleep! damn funny :) :) I love Manav's chilled out nature in your updates, compared to the raging senseless bull he is being shown right now about his own son...I love Archana's possessiveness for Purvi as well as her relationship with the other kids...compared to her one-child-at-a-time lopsided love being shown on the show right now!

I especially love-Arjun-Purvi and their understanding in your updates...truly great way you write and shape up the story! I wish the CV's took a note out of your chapters and the show would be interesting...but alas, I stick to coming to the forum, reading your updates and imagining all these good actors following ure track instead of the stupid CV;s. :) :)

Please keep it up! I loveeed your latest update too...the morning after scene...Purvi puking and Arjun thinking of baby Arjun...Sachin getting scared of Manav and Archana and Manav talking about hwo is partial to whom! :) :) :)

Hope we get Soham in this amazing mix soon tooo! And hopefully some Punni-Ovi bits as well! :)

Thanks once again for the PM!

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AshvikFan

@AshvikFan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#634

Wow..!! Amazing...!! 😛 loved it.. If I have to mention the parts which I like.. Well I just have to copy paste the whole update.. 😛 waiting for the next part.. N sachin.. 🤣 lol..!! He is soo funny... 🤣 I just love him in your os.. Update soon... Waiting for ria's entry.. 😉
N I loved the part when sachin tells abt JDJ.. N when he says that he should become a writer instead...!! Rofl...!! 🤣

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-LiveLaughLove-

@-LiveLaughLove-

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#635

What can I say Abhi??? I have run out of words to say😆

Ok so it was awesome as always!! Omg Purvi had 7 drinks!! Haha I wish this was a show then we could see a drunk Purvi dancing with lover boy Arjun!! Arjun felt so stupid after seeing his little love act with Sachin atleast he can leave sachu lives there!

Archana got really mad at Purvi lol she should have yelled at Arjun a bit for letting her drink so much... but lol what could he do he was drunk himslef!!

Sachin singing I really wanna see that! Loved the you could win JDJ part!

Loved how Manav is always on Purvi's side and tries to defend her what a sweet dad who loves his daughter.. even though he didnt see her growing up he understands her!!

Simply amazing! Update soon dear!!

I am living off of Os and FFs

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Latika Gurung

@-Latty-

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#636

hey abhi once again an awesome and hilarious update... sachin and arjun were superb... and that jhalak dikh laja thing was so good and connective... i totally loved ur update... thanx for the pm...:):)

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shreya2094

@shreya2094

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#637

i am totally loving this OS...its just too good...though ur updates r usually vry lenghty at the end of reading the whole thing i keep wishing there was more😉...how greedy of me😉waiting for the nxt update..hope u update soon😊thanks fr the pm😊

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diana72

@diana72

Explorer

Posted: 12 years ago

#638

awesome update...loved the beautiful r/ship btwn archana n her kids...loved the fact tht she deals wt them the same...ive nw even stopped readin updates. cnt stomach the way arjun talks to ovi...nway im really truly enjoying the superb show by u...juz cnt resist comin here to read ur os. i cn imagine how the scenes will b...ur os once again makes m so very terribly happy...loved the way arjun say.s he nds a drink to forget sachin n himself...to sum it up...awesome writer dear...tks for making my day... 👏

Edited by diana72 - 12 years ago