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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome update😃 plz update soon the next part..cant wait at all😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Keshu,

Even the filler was great and touching. Sometimes the simplest of things are the best. Loved the convo and interaction among everyone... esp. Arjun and DK and Arjun and Purvi. Its very real! I love that about you and this story... we can relate to it all. Thats good writing.

I cannot wait for the coming chapters and yes... would like some ArVi romance.

As for if and when to end this FF... its all upto u and in your hands my dear. Ure the Ekta of this one ;-) ;-). If YOU feel that its coming to its natural conclusion then u can conclude... if you feel there is more to go... then continue. But its all upto u. However, if you end... u can always come back with a few OS's thrown in here and there... a few good fights... work relationships... kids... whatever u want... Maybe a sequel for ArVi. Who knows. But so far, this has been one of my fave FFs and a great read! Thank you!

Much love and best wishes for this one and any/many more to come,
Ash
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful uppdates, just caught up with the last two. Love how Arvi became one and they aree opening up to each other. Really enjoy your work and the decision to continue is all yours, what ever you decide enjoy reading your work. Sorry for reading so late just been really busy.
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Posted: 12 years ago
@bharu thankyou dear. i might continue it for few more parts i guess :/

@tanya awee thnks sis m running out of ideas but will try to write few more parts

@avni thnks dear :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
@apoorvalovesarvi thnks dear :))

@biyaahmed thnku :)

@jago shukriya behna hayee loved d srk hug
past will b up soon m updating finally

:CIDsanju, geetrana, hariniarvi, logambika, ayl123 thnks guys for the comments
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Posted: 12 years ago
@salrinaashvik het thanks 4 d lovely words, will write more hopefully

@omg11apiz awee thankyou so much for the comment, means a lot to mean wen my wrk is appreciated

@sai.janu @arvifan thankyou dear :))

@ashlaika hey thanks for the beautiful comment. i m not yet done wid d story there is lot more in my head but its just that i think i m stretching it a bit too much, else i actually want to explore their wedding life and exams and college n all but then it will b a drag na?

@j12l85 thanksyou dear :) no worries late or early its d comment dat matters :)
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Posted: 12 years ago

hello friends, how are you guys. I guess comparatively i am updating a little early😆. well the past is up and its filmy so all jhoota chappal welcomed but i will not return them back ok 😆🤣. okk so i have finally gone bonkers and u might think i need to b admitted to a mental assylum (well yes dats my second home 😎).

Enuf of my ranting and boring you guys so here i am up with another part fro you which i hope u guys like n comment. i m very demanding when it comes to likes n comment sadda haq aithe rakh so plsss twadde like n comments aithe rakho 😆.

Part 23

"It happened 7 and half years ago Purvi. There was a party held at my place because our company had won a legal case against an ex-employee who was a cheater and fraud" Arjun whispered hoarsely.

Flashback:

The house was decorated very royally, keeping in mind DK's choice. The main entrance had a huge fountain surrounded by artificial plants and lighting to give it a colourful look, the stairs leading to party hall was covered with flowers and small tiny bulb and the party hall was a grand success- the artistic vase, the beautiful painting, the music everything was regal. Even the buffet was being ordered from the most expensive and amazing caterers, the champagne and wine were of best brand and the centre of the hall had a huge round table on which lay the most beautiful cake ever. It was a 6 tier cake decorated with artificial small files and offices.

After sometime Ashna and DK entered the place hand-in-hand smiling at their business associates and close friends, accompanying them was their only son Arjun looking really dashing and handsome. Soon they were joined by Manav who entered the place with his daughters Ovi and teju.

"Congratulations Sir, I knew it that guy will be punished" Manav said as the two friends hugged each other.

"All thanks to Ashna, for noticing his deeds and getting to the roots of the matter, and of course you Manav for being with me during the phase." DK said and patted on manav's shoulder conveying his thanks through gesture.

"Uncle the party is really very nice. Arjun can we go to the garden, since it's all about business and stuff" ovi asked and entangled her arms with Arjun's.

"Sure we will go out, teju lets go. First let us get a soft drink" Arjun replied and all three went towards the drinks section and got their drinks. After which they left for the garden.

The party was going on in full glory, the top most businessmen attended the party and all were busy talking about their work or share price. The ladies indulged themselves in gossiping or discussing about their party life. Everyone was busy enjoying the party and relishing the food or wine.

Ashna excused herself to use the washroom, when suddenly she could feel someone following her and on a sudden impulse she turned around to find who it was only to find no one. She did not know why but she felt herself getting all sweaty and worried, as from the time she came here she could feel someone's gaze on her. She rushed out to inform DK about it, who was deeply into a conversation with his colleague.

"DK I need to talk to you" Ashna whispered in his ears and excused him from the colleague.

"What happen Ashna? I see you are not yourself from the time you have entered the party" DK softly asked her and tried to read what was going through her mind.

"I don't know why but I could feel some one stalking me. I am really scared DK" Ashna replied fearfully, her voice carried fear. DK shrugged off the matter saying it was her illusion or she was tired and told her to enjoy the party.

The shadow kept on following her which did not go unnoticed by her, but nobody else even had a clue about that person. After few minutes DK's phone rang and he exempted himself from there and went to the garden.

"What? How did he escape? " DK shouted angrily at the caller on the other side. He came to know that the fraud employee had escaped from the police custody and they were not able to chase him.

"I don't want to hear anything. Find him and arrest him." DK said through clenched jaw and went inside to inform Manav and Ashna about it.

Unknown to him the three youngsters had heard everything but the only thing they did not know was who that guy was?.

"How will we know who that guy is? What if he comes here?" ovi asked nervous and scared.

"Nothing will happen you don't worry Barbie doll" teju calmed her sister.

Manav and Ashna were shocked after knowing the truth and became more alert as he was a threat for them. He could do anything to extract revenge for ruining his life and career.

"I told you I could feel someone seeing me. He is here DK" a frantic Ashna held her husband's collar and cried. Before DK could do anything a gun shot was being heard and standing in front of them was the very same guy whom they were fearing a couple of seconds ago. The whole atmosphere became chaotic as people started running here and there. The guy held Arjun at gun point and ordered the security to back off else he will kill Arjun.

"Please don't harm my son. Do whatever you want to do with me, but spare my son" Ashna pleaded.

"Yes you are my enemy. Because of you I lost everything, my job, my house everything. I begged you to not take the matter to court and I was ready to leave the job but no you spoiled my life. I worked in the company for so many years, I agree I cheated and helped our competitors but I pleaded to you the same way but you paid no heed to my insistent. I will go to jail no wonder but after finishing of your son, because of you my wife and daughter left me. They feel ashamed to be associated with a cheater and I will take your son away from you" he replied, his eyes blood shot red and he spoke like spitting venom.

"I will take the case back and say it was a mistake. Your lost respect will be back and so will your family" DK tried to negotiate but the guy started laughing like crazy.

"I don't need charity. I am paying for my deed, but I can't let your wife be happy, she has to suffer" he replied and moved his hands to the trigger and was about to press it when Ashna pushed him and the bullet pierced right into her stomach and on an instinct, the guy shot another bullet that went straight into her chest spattering blood on the ground and his face.

"Ashna" DK screamed and ran towards her, he held her before she could fall on the ground.

Manav mean while grabbed the guy and beat him to death before he fell unconscious on his knees and passed out. An ambulance was being called immediately and the two unconscious bodies were carried. Arjun, ovi and teju could not understand what was going around them; all were in complete shock and stood their motionless tears dripping from their eyes. Manav called Savita and informed her about the incident and told her that he was sending the kids home.

"I can't leave mumma alone. I will come with you, I will not leave her. She will be fine Manav uncle isn't it?" Arjun mumbled not even knowing what he was saying.

Seeing his condition Manav hugged him and consoled him. They soon left for the hospital, Manav came in his car while DK and Arjun accompanied Ashna in the ambulance.

"You will be fine mumma. Please open your eyes" Arjun whispered in her ears slowly. Ashna opened her eyes, her breathing was getting uneven and she could not see anything clear. She held Arjun's hand and clutched it tightly.

"I can't promise you Arjun, that I will be fine but I want you to promise me that you will never ever cry or harm yourself" Ashna barely managed to form the sentence, her breathing got heavy as she muttered through the oxygen mask.

She looked at DK who was not in a state to say anything; all he could do was shed silent tears and try to be strong.

"You can't hide your weakness for me. Cry DK, remove all your pain" she muttered and slipped into an unconscious state.

They arrived at the hospital and Ashna was rushed to the emergency ward and was being operated upon. After 20 minutes or so the doctor came out and placed his hands on DK's shoulder to make his presence felt.

"I am sorry Mr DK but we could not save your wife" that very sentence shattered the life of DK and Arjun who had lost their most precious thing in life.

"How can she leave me? Mumma wanted an Indian bahu, she wanted to tease me with her, she dreamed of my wedding and my achievements in business world. Why did she not fulfil all her dreams?" Arjun asked his face straight devoid of any emotions.

"She is gone Arjun, without fulfilling her own dreams and taking our dreams as well" dk said as he hugged Arjun who shut himself from any kind of emotions.

That was the day when DK knew that he had lost his son forever, that he will never ever see the Arjun who was full of emotions ever again. He knew he had lost himself and that he can never share his pains with his son. Ashna was cremated once her body was being released by the hospital authority while the culprit was given a life sentence. News and media covered DK's house 24*7 to get more details about the incident, every news channel flashed the incident and added their own bits into it. Arjun stopped going to school and buried himself in Ashna's arm chair, his nightmares would never let him sleep. He could see that scene every time he closed his eyes and saw ashna's death every second. After 2 months when DK could not hold anymore her went near Arjun and held his hands

"You remember Ashna's last words to you? You are disobeying her last wish" DK said and that was enough for Arjun to snap out of his reverie. No matter what Ashna's words have always been a part of his life and always had an impact on him.

"I want you to fulfil Ashna's last wish, don't cry and harm yourself" DK said.

"Can I shift to India? The house which is near to Maa, I want to stay there and be close to her" Arjun said and DK agreed because he knew that Arjun considered him as his role model but he considered his mother as his everything.

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"After that I left for India and settled in this house. It took me 1 whole year to face the reality and Neil was my only support throughout those years." Arjun completed his sentence and looked at Purvi whose face was wet due to tears.

"I am sorry Arjun for the pain I gave you. I promise I will never leave you." Purvi cried like a baby and hugged Arjun who was hugging her from her waist as he was sitting on the floor.

"Shhh I am glad I let you be a part of my past. I am feeling good and nice." Arjun said through his tears.

"Purvi I know you have Archana Aai but did you never feel the need to know about your real aai-baba" Arjun asked as he shifted a little and sat beside Purvi.

"I never felt the need because I was blessed with a lovely family. I grew up with archu aai and heard about Manav baba from her, and I considered them to be my parents which they are. I do wish to know who my parents were but pondering over the past which was never a part of my memory is not worth knowing." Purvi replied with honesty and smiled at Arjun.

Both snuggled closer to each other and chatted for hours about their childhood memories and how it was spent, their friends and schooling everything until sleep caught up with them.

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Done with the update. likes and comments are welcomed😳.

It was too filmy i know but thats is what i had planned and i now it was too cliche but hope you guys like it 😃. And yeah ignore the grammatical mistakes as i have not read it again. since i m very lazy n sleepy and its 2 am here 🥱 so i better catch my sleep which is running away from me🤣 i know its a bad PJ🤪lack of sleep does dat to u 😆😉


Love,

Kesha

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Posted: 12 years ago
How adorable! Loved how Arjun finally opened up and Purvi was his support system! Beautifully written and loved the detail - I was really able to imagine the scene happening in my head. Great job partner 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was a magnificent update dear! It was so detailed and was reallly intersting! I loved it! Please so update again soon! :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
behna :'( :'( tune mujhe emontional kardiya tere iss update se :( ! Its was beautifuly written *thumbs up* and the last part of the falshback :'( btw i wanted to ask u smethng which i vil pm u ! :-D thanks alot for updating it and love u behna <3

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